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He had lived in the cold dark caves of the Misty Mountains miserably for some time now. Life was nothing. He sat in the dark, muttering to himself. He didn't know what he had become. Then, one night, he had a dream.
A shadowy figure, himself, and Leani.
"Leani!" he cried. But she ran, and, though just a dream, fright and horror was written all over her face. He woke up with a start. No, Leani would never run from him. Never. What was there to be scared of?
That day, much to the alter-ego of Gollum's annoyance, and Smea decided he would creep outside, where the pools reflected best, to take a look at himself. In the evening light, where it did not hurt so much, he easily snuck past the goblins and stopped before a small pool of water. Bracing himself he looked in.
Immediately he began crying. The Smea who had left his home was a handsome, dashing young hobbit. Now-he was a monster. His once adorable head full of hair had only the remains of strangling strands of black hair, and his skin was a beastly grey color. His whole face had mutated. The once charming smile was lipless, and horrible to look upon, his eyes covered half his face like moons, and his nose, nothing but a small pinch on his face. His whole body was nothing more than a skeleton covered with a skin. He shuddered as he looked upon his horrible self, and decided, he would see Leani once more, if she still lived.
He searched for many months, but he finally found the Shire. And, to his joy, he eventually found a more adult, mature Leani. (A/N let's just assume either Gollum went through his transformation very quickly, or that hobbits lived longer before the War of the Ring era) At night, he crept to her. She was folding in the gardens, and as he watched her, he could see, she folded a heart, cracking down the middle. His heart did the same.
"Leani...." He whispered, frightened at the horrible tone of his own voice. Leani shivered and jumped.
"Who is it?" she asked, frightened.
"You mussstn't be sscared. Pleasssee. It isss I, Smea...." he whispered.
A sudden light gleamed in her eyes. "Smea?"
Knowing he would regret it, he showed himself. Leani fought the impulse to run, but she could not hide the tear that ran down her cheek, or the look of obvious horror.
"Smea, what has happened to you?" she said.
A tear ran down his cheek, "Don't be frightened..pleasssse...I don't want to hurt you....."
She touched his cheek, fighting wincing at his repulsiveness....but she was frightened. Smea had changed, and she didn't know if she could save him. But she overcame her disgust, and held him in a hug.
"Good bye, Leani....." Smea whispered, his cold, clammy, grey finger, on her cheek. "I shall love you alwayssss......." and he left.
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Life was over for him. Gollum had died seconds ago as the Ring hit the magma. But Smeagol had a second. One precious second. He could not changed what had happened. Why him? Why......"Leani....." He whispered. And then he was gone.
FINISHED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If you want another version of Smeagol's childhood, read my mini-story "Tears". In every Gollum story, I change his age and what happened, always experimenting. I was crying for Smea in this last chapter, I pity him so much.
He had lived in the cold dark caves of the Misty Mountains miserably for some time now. Life was nothing. He sat in the dark, muttering to himself. He didn't know what he had become. Then, one night, he had a dream.
A shadowy figure, himself, and Leani.
"Leani!" he cried. But she ran, and, though just a dream, fright and horror was written all over her face. He woke up with a start. No, Leani would never run from him. Never. What was there to be scared of?
That day, much to the alter-ego of Gollum's annoyance, and Smea decided he would creep outside, where the pools reflected best, to take a look at himself. In the evening light, where it did not hurt so much, he easily snuck past the goblins and stopped before a small pool of water. Bracing himself he looked in.
Immediately he began crying. The Smea who had left his home was a handsome, dashing young hobbit. Now-he was a monster. His once adorable head full of hair had only the remains of strangling strands of black hair, and his skin was a beastly grey color. His whole face had mutated. The once charming smile was lipless, and horrible to look upon, his eyes covered half his face like moons, and his nose, nothing but a small pinch on his face. His whole body was nothing more than a skeleton covered with a skin. He shuddered as he looked upon his horrible self, and decided, he would see Leani once more, if she still lived.
He searched for many months, but he finally found the Shire. And, to his joy, he eventually found a more adult, mature Leani. (A/N let's just assume either Gollum went through his transformation very quickly, or that hobbits lived longer before the War of the Ring era) At night, he crept to her. She was folding in the gardens, and as he watched her, he could see, she folded a heart, cracking down the middle. His heart did the same.
"Leani...." He whispered, frightened at the horrible tone of his own voice. Leani shivered and jumped.
"Who is it?" she asked, frightened.
"You mussstn't be sscared. Pleasssee. It isss I, Smea...." he whispered.
A sudden light gleamed in her eyes. "Smea?"
Knowing he would regret it, he showed himself. Leani fought the impulse to run, but she could not hide the tear that ran down her cheek, or the look of obvious horror.
"Smea, what has happened to you?" she said.
A tear ran down his cheek, "Don't be frightened..pleasssse...I don't want to hurt you....."
She touched his cheek, fighting wincing at his repulsiveness....but she was frightened. Smea had changed, and she didn't know if she could save him. But she overcame her disgust, and held him in a hug.
"Good bye, Leani....." Smea whispered, his cold, clammy, grey finger, on her cheek. "I shall love you alwayssss......." and he left.
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Life was over for him. Gollum had died seconds ago as the Ring hit the magma. But Smeagol had a second. One precious second. He could not changed what had happened. Why him? Why......"Leani....." He whispered. And then he was gone.
FINISHED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If you want another version of Smeagol's childhood, read my mini-story "Tears". In every Gollum story, I change his age and what happened, always experimenting. I was crying for Smea in this last chapter, I pity him so much.