Chapter 1 Anakin = 19
Padme' = 19 (I changed this because this is supposed to be young love you know.)
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Two Orders, alike in many ways, in a far galaxy and a time of great strife. One holds evil, and the other holds good. Each time they meet, there can be only bloodshed. Out of these enemies comes two, a young Padawan, Anakin Skywalker, the chosen one and a Sith Lord, Padme' Amidala, one of the strongest of her order. They will love each other no matter the consequences-
It is a foggy morning. There they are, the Jedi, ready for anything that moves and the Sith are prepared as well. Anakin is excited, this will be his first battle against the Sith.
Thrash!! Swish!! Swoosh!!
The battle goes on and on, both sides winning and both sides losing. Anakin blocks every blow, and kills any Sith who gets in his way. A Sith Lord signals retreat. The Sith flee into ships and fly away. They will fight these Jedi another day. Of that you can be certain.
The remaining Jedi turn off their lightsabers and help the wounded up to their ship.
Obi-Wan stands next to Windu and Yoda watching the wounded being carried to the hospital quarters.
"This was such a dreadful battle, will there be more to die," asks Obi-Wan?
"See the future I cannot, the Dark Side clouds everything," Says Yoda sadly.
Obi-Wan's attention is caught by Anakin, his Padawan.
"Ah Padawan, at least you are in good health," says Obi-Wan in relief.
"That I am Master," Anakin said with a small smile after.
"Anakin, you have done well in the battle, let us hope you live through the next," Says Windu as well in relief.
They went to their seats and waited to land in Corascant.
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"Damn those Jedi!" swears The Emperor taking everyone off guard.
"We fought as well as you taught us master," Spoke a robed female.
"That you did Darth Amidala," he said, calming down slightly.
Padme' removed her hood showing her angelic features; her brown curls falling out from her braid.
"What is your plan Master," asks Darth Sidious?
"I will ponder this. For the time being, train. I can't afford to lose anymore. Go," He said sternly.
Padme' and Darth Sidious bowed and left in different directions.
"Padme'," Whispers a voice.
"Yes Mara?"
"You know we have been working, and training hard, and-"
"What are you getting at Mara?" asks Padme' raising an eyebrow.
"I think we should sneak out and go have fun at a club."
"But that is against the rules. If the Emperor finds out he'll-"
"He won't find out. Trust me, we'll have a great time. Please?"
Padme' looked at her pleading friend, and heaved a sigh, "Alright I'll go."
"I promise you Padme', this will be great!"
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"No!" says Anakin walking down the hall with his friend, Lucas, behind him (Gee, I wonder where I thought of this name?).
"Come on Ani, it'll be great trust me."
"What if my Master finds out? Or yours?"
"They won't, as long as we keep our mind's barriers up."
Anakin stared at Lucas, and then sighed in surrender, "Fine. I'll go."
Lucas jumped with glee, "Oh thank you Ani, and I promise you'll have a great time!" ********************************************************
Please review; if you do I will put up another chapter!
Padme' = 19 (I changed this because this is supposed to be young love you know.)
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Two Orders, alike in many ways, in a far galaxy and a time of great strife. One holds evil, and the other holds good. Each time they meet, there can be only bloodshed. Out of these enemies comes two, a young Padawan, Anakin Skywalker, the chosen one and a Sith Lord, Padme' Amidala, one of the strongest of her order. They will love each other no matter the consequences-
It is a foggy morning. There they are, the Jedi, ready for anything that moves and the Sith are prepared as well. Anakin is excited, this will be his first battle against the Sith.
Thrash!! Swish!! Swoosh!!
The battle goes on and on, both sides winning and both sides losing. Anakin blocks every blow, and kills any Sith who gets in his way. A Sith Lord signals retreat. The Sith flee into ships and fly away. They will fight these Jedi another day. Of that you can be certain.
The remaining Jedi turn off their lightsabers and help the wounded up to their ship.
Obi-Wan stands next to Windu and Yoda watching the wounded being carried to the hospital quarters.
"This was such a dreadful battle, will there be more to die," asks Obi-Wan?
"See the future I cannot, the Dark Side clouds everything," Says Yoda sadly.
Obi-Wan's attention is caught by Anakin, his Padawan.
"Ah Padawan, at least you are in good health," says Obi-Wan in relief.
"That I am Master," Anakin said with a small smile after.
"Anakin, you have done well in the battle, let us hope you live through the next," Says Windu as well in relief.
They went to their seats and waited to land in Corascant.
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"Damn those Jedi!" swears The Emperor taking everyone off guard.
"We fought as well as you taught us master," Spoke a robed female.
"That you did Darth Amidala," he said, calming down slightly.
Padme' removed her hood showing her angelic features; her brown curls falling out from her braid.
"What is your plan Master," asks Darth Sidious?
"I will ponder this. For the time being, train. I can't afford to lose anymore. Go," He said sternly.
Padme' and Darth Sidious bowed and left in different directions.
"Padme'," Whispers a voice.
"Yes Mara?"
"You know we have been working, and training hard, and-"
"What are you getting at Mara?" asks Padme' raising an eyebrow.
"I think we should sneak out and go have fun at a club."
"But that is against the rules. If the Emperor finds out he'll-"
"He won't find out. Trust me, we'll have a great time. Please?"
Padme' looked at her pleading friend, and heaved a sigh, "Alright I'll go."
"I promise you Padme', this will be great!"
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"No!" says Anakin walking down the hall with his friend, Lucas, behind him (Gee, I wonder where I thought of this name?).
"Come on Ani, it'll be great trust me."
"What if my Master finds out? Or yours?"
"They won't, as long as we keep our mind's barriers up."
Anakin stared at Lucas, and then sighed in surrender, "Fine. I'll go."
Lucas jumped with glee, "Oh thank you Ani, and I promise you'll have a great time!" ********************************************************
Please review; if you do I will put up another chapter!