Thanks sooo much to Mitski for reviewing such a long review with suggestions! I used your suggestions if you don't mind! Anyways, thank you thank you thank you!!! ^_____^
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Love is Near, Just Search For It
~kawaiisakura~
Tomoyo, being Sakura's best friend and all, was invited along with her boyfriend Eriol.
Finally at the amusement park after 3 hours of straight driving by Syaoran, they were exhausted.
Everyone sighed happily that they had arrived.
"Hey Sakura, do you want to go on the Ferris Wheel?" Syaoran automatically grabbed Sakura as soon as they had caught their breath. "The roller coasters' line should be packed with people!" he added with reason as they continued into the amusement park.
To much surprise to Sakura and Syaoran, the park was completely empty, no people at all!
"What happened here? How come no one's here?" said a nervous Sakura.
"This is definitely doings of something evil. Other than that, it has to a holiday of some sort," Syaoran suggested.
"But…the last holiday was two weeks ago!" Tomoyo reminded.
"Then, it has to be the works of the new enemy!" as soon as Eriol said that, the entire amusement seemed to come back to life. The lines were packed with over-flooding people, and the ice cream booths were in business.
"Hey guys! What are you just standing there for? Let's go play!" Ann spoke for the first time today. It was as if she didn't even notice anything wrong about the lack of people, or was it just because she tried to ignore it? (hint! ^.~)
"Wait, where's Alan?" Sakura asked.
"Oh, him? He's just going to get something…" her voice drifted off as she tried to make up something.
Syaoran raised one of his eyebrows suspiciously. ^_- "What's going on, Ann? Where is he?"
"I'm right here." Alan appeared out of nowhere from behind him, as if by magic. "I was just getting some ice cream for everyone." Then, with both of his hands that were hidden behind him before, he pulled out six fresh ice cream and cones.
After the ice cream, they all agreed to go on the Ferris Wheel first, like Syaoran had suggested. Syaoran, of course, immediately raced for Sakura to ride on the same seat. The ride had started. Alan and Ann got on the one before them, so they were above Syaoran and Sakura, with Eriol and Tomoyo following in the seat right behind them.
"The view sure is beautiful up here!" Ann cried out.
"Don't forget what we're here for, my dearest Ann, we're here to take the cards from the Mistress and then kill her!!" Alan reminded with confident triumph.
"Alright alright! But don't fall for that Sakura, remember, we're a couple!" Ann added.
"Yeah whatever" he replied carelessly.
Right underneath them, Syaoran and Sakura stepped on their ride.
They were nearing the top of the ride, so the wheel stopped to let a couple at the bottom to get off.
Syaoran put an arm around Sakura and she laid her head down, both of them closing their eyes in peace.
After about 10 minutes of stopping, they realized that they were just floating in the air apart from the Ferris Wheel.
Sakura had fallen asleep, but Syaoran was definitely awake. He glanced down at Sakura lying on his shoulder. Then suddenly he sensed evil magic…
Back on the Ferris Wheel, Eriol and Tomoyo had just noticed that their friends, along with the seat.
"Oh no Eriol! What happened!" Tomoyo was starting to panic.
"Wait…" Eriol stayed very still and tried hard to sense something. Tomoyo looked up at him with hope in his eyes. 'Eriol is the Reincarnation of Clow Reed, so he should be able to find out what's wrong.'
"Hm…the aura is being hidden very well indeed..somewhere, like, THERE!" Eriol's hand shot up into the air, pointing the way.
He made sure that no one watching, and used his magic energy to lift both him and Tomoyo up to the place from which he had sensed it.
In some place unseen to the bare human eyes…
"What IS this place?" Sakura woke up to two light blue eyes. "Hoooooeeeee!!"
"Do not fear, my dear Sakura, I am Prince Zacolon of Planet Zocolome." The so-called "Prince" was standing a feet away from the bed in which she woke up in. The guy looked dangerously like Alan to Sakura, but being as gullible and innocent Sakura is, she believed him.
"But, what am I doing here?" she went on.
"Well, I saved it while you were floating it space." He replied with a wink and a handsome smile.
Sakura looked into his eyes and slightly smiled, then shook her head violently. 'No! What am I doing? I'm not supposed to be falling for anyone other than Syaoran!'
She shifted uncomfortably on the bed, wanting to escape from the strange yet attractive "prince".
"Uh-uh my dear Sakura! We are going back to the amusement park now!"
He transferred both of them back.
In another place unseen…
Syaoran was fighting off Ann, who claimed that she was Princess Zacolon from Planet Zocolome.
"Hmph! You're Ann, and you know it! Stop trying to lie to me!"
"This guy is actually quite handsome…well, wouldn't hurt to toy with him." Ann murmured under her breath.
She then put Syaoran under a spell, and took both of them back to the amusement park.
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That was probably the longest I've written in a while! Anyways, how do you like it so far? (first time readers) Is this chapter too long or short do you think? Also, if you would like me to email you the next time I update, please put it in you review!! And, if there's something that you would like me to change about my style of writing, my topics, or anything else, please also tell me in the reviews! I'm working to please everyone reading this, so, I need to know your opinions!!! Thank you for reading so far!!!!!!!! ^___~
~kawaiisakura~
