"Hmmm…" Elizabeth looked anxiously at Adam as he looked over her story. 'Will he like it?' She wondered, 'I hope he does.' This thought surprised her. She'd never cared if anyone liked her stories before, in fact she had very rarely been willing to let anyone even read them, and now here she was letting someone not only read them, but she most DEFINITELY cared what he thought. But why? Adam looked up and Elizabeth pushed these thoughts out of her mind to listen to what he had to say.
"It's alright so far. I can see where you got stuck though. The plot seems to be dragging a little. Why don't you bring in a new character? Someone for Amelia to fall in love with" He suggested, naming her main character. Elizabeth looked at him, confused.
"But she's already in love with Chris." She stated. He smiled mishcheviously.
"I know. That's what makes it interesting." (AUTHOR'S NOTE: Foreshadowing??)
"It's almost time for lessons" commented Elizabeth, "how about we do this again tomorrow?"
"Same time, same place?"
"Sounds good." She agreed as she picked up her notebook to put it away.