Hi. I don't know why I'm reviewing instead of posting, probably because I
don't know Taylor's password, but I wanted to say a few things.
First, thank you so much for reading this fic. Taylor and I worked really hard and are having a blast with it. A special thanks to all my loyal readers who are reading and supposing my outside work. Also to D_beaux, for betaing asking me every day if I have something new.
Second, Since Taylor and I seem to work so well together, you can all expect to be seeing a lot more work from our partnership.
Third. And this is for purely selfish reasons. The relationship between Jess, Bree, and Dom is based on my relationship with my two best friends (both guys). Oh, and a bunch of people have mentioned the monkey thing. Yeah well, it was really funny when it actually happened. Most of the stories, incidents are real life things that my friends and me have done. And to those concerned, Bobo is resting comfortably in the Bronx Zoo, he is fine. So many people have contacted me and said that they want Dom. I can tell you folks, in a few chaps, you will fall in love. So Dana, Taylor and everyone else, you can have Dom (although I suspect you'll have MAJOR competition) but I get the real life guys that he's based on.
Ok, that's all from me for now. I hope that you all continue to read. Oh and just so you know, whatever you think is going to happen, you have no idea. To quote, well, me and Taylor, "You know nothing!!!"
-Jewls13
Alright, I want to second everything Jewls13 said in her review. Thanks so much for reading this! And we are definitely going to keep working together.
I also just wanted to say that Jewls13 is more of the author than me, it's all her, so we're creating a joint name for our new work. We'll let you know what it is.
On to the most important thing. Dom. He's mine. Get your hands off.
-Taylor
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The three of them entered the apartment. Jess showed them around, pointing out the wall Luke had knocked down. Throughout this time, his hand never left the grip of Bree's, and every once in a while she gave it a short, tight squeeze.
Dom looked at the two of them and said, "I'd be tactful and say I was going to go put my bag down in the room, but I have no tact, I'm just leaving so I don't have to watch you two slobber all over each other." Jess pointed him towards the room he should put his stuff in, and Dom waltzed through the doorway.
Jess pulled Bree into him, looking into her clear, exotic green eyes. He put his arms around her and they held her in a tight, intimate embrace.
"All right, all right, that's enough now," Dom said as he reentered the room. "There'll be plenty of time for that later."
"Oh don't be jealous, you know I love you," Bree giggled, walking over and giving Dom a hug and a short kiss on the lips.
"Now, that's better." Dom said.
Jess watched this, a grin stretching on his face. "I've missed you guys."
"Oh, stop it with the sap," Bree joked, flopping down onto the nearby couch.
Jess sat down next to her, and she swung her legs over his lap. He placed a hand on her bare knee, giving it a squeeze.
"Are you feeling okay?" He asked her. She let out a short burst of air in frustration, the hair in her eyes blowing a few inches away from her face.
"I'm FINE." She said.
"I've been taking good care of her man," Dom said seriously, sitting down on the other side of Bree, who leaned back and rested her head in his lap, her hair splaying over legs and contrasting with his dark jeans.
"So you haven't had any more problems?" Jess pushed, refusing to drop the topic.
"Can we talk about something else now?" Bree asked, stretching her arms over her head, her shirt riding up a little and showing the underside of her breasts.
"Okay, if you're sure." Jess conceded.
"I'm very sure," She said, closing her eyes. "But very sleepy."
Jess moved her legs and laid them back down on the couch. He leaned over and kissed her softly on the forehead.
"You two can just sleep here," He said, and Dom promptly closed his eyes, lolled his head, and began to snore.
"Funny," Jess snorted. He walked towards the door, and when he reached it he stole a last glance at the pair. Dom had stretched out on the couch behind Bree, one hand slung casually across her. She was curled up in a ball, her hair falling across her face.
Content, Jess left the room.
Downstairs, Rory had gone to Lane's house to inform her of the new arrivals in town. Lorelai had sensed the uneasiness her daughter felt, but decided she'd bombard her later that day.
Luke, however, was fair game.
"So whatcha gonna do?" Lorelai taunted him, trailing around after him like a puppy dog.
"Nothing."
"Come on! You have to ask him"
"No I don't"
"Luuuuke, But I wanna know. You wanna know. Miss Patty wants to know, Taylor wants to know--"
"It's his life, it's his business!"
"Okay." Lorelai said, and then kept following him. "She's going to be staying in your apartment. Are they allowed to be in the same bed? How about that Dom kid? What if-"
Luke sighed, and just then Jess came back into the diner, a goofy grin on his face.
"You look happy," Luke said.
Jess nodded joyfully, and started to work.
First, thank you so much for reading this fic. Taylor and I worked really hard and are having a blast with it. A special thanks to all my loyal readers who are reading and supposing my outside work. Also to D_beaux, for betaing asking me every day if I have something new.
Second, Since Taylor and I seem to work so well together, you can all expect to be seeing a lot more work from our partnership.
Third. And this is for purely selfish reasons. The relationship between Jess, Bree, and Dom is based on my relationship with my two best friends (both guys). Oh, and a bunch of people have mentioned the monkey thing. Yeah well, it was really funny when it actually happened. Most of the stories, incidents are real life things that my friends and me have done. And to those concerned, Bobo is resting comfortably in the Bronx Zoo, he is fine. So many people have contacted me and said that they want Dom. I can tell you folks, in a few chaps, you will fall in love. So Dana, Taylor and everyone else, you can have Dom (although I suspect you'll have MAJOR competition) but I get the real life guys that he's based on.
Ok, that's all from me for now. I hope that you all continue to read. Oh and just so you know, whatever you think is going to happen, you have no idea. To quote, well, me and Taylor, "You know nothing!!!"
-Jewls13
Alright, I want to second everything Jewls13 said in her review. Thanks so much for reading this! And we are definitely going to keep working together.
I also just wanted to say that Jewls13 is more of the author than me, it's all her, so we're creating a joint name for our new work. We'll let you know what it is.
On to the most important thing. Dom. He's mine. Get your hands off.
-Taylor
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The three of them entered the apartment. Jess showed them around, pointing out the wall Luke had knocked down. Throughout this time, his hand never left the grip of Bree's, and every once in a while she gave it a short, tight squeeze.
Dom looked at the two of them and said, "I'd be tactful and say I was going to go put my bag down in the room, but I have no tact, I'm just leaving so I don't have to watch you two slobber all over each other." Jess pointed him towards the room he should put his stuff in, and Dom waltzed through the doorway.
Jess pulled Bree into him, looking into her clear, exotic green eyes. He put his arms around her and they held her in a tight, intimate embrace.
"All right, all right, that's enough now," Dom said as he reentered the room. "There'll be plenty of time for that later."
"Oh don't be jealous, you know I love you," Bree giggled, walking over and giving Dom a hug and a short kiss on the lips.
"Now, that's better." Dom said.
Jess watched this, a grin stretching on his face. "I've missed you guys."
"Oh, stop it with the sap," Bree joked, flopping down onto the nearby couch.
Jess sat down next to her, and she swung her legs over his lap. He placed a hand on her bare knee, giving it a squeeze.
"Are you feeling okay?" He asked her. She let out a short burst of air in frustration, the hair in her eyes blowing a few inches away from her face.
"I'm FINE." She said.
"I've been taking good care of her man," Dom said seriously, sitting down on the other side of Bree, who leaned back and rested her head in his lap, her hair splaying over legs and contrasting with his dark jeans.
"So you haven't had any more problems?" Jess pushed, refusing to drop the topic.
"Can we talk about something else now?" Bree asked, stretching her arms over her head, her shirt riding up a little and showing the underside of her breasts.
"Okay, if you're sure." Jess conceded.
"I'm very sure," She said, closing her eyes. "But very sleepy."
Jess moved her legs and laid them back down on the couch. He leaned over and kissed her softly on the forehead.
"You two can just sleep here," He said, and Dom promptly closed his eyes, lolled his head, and began to snore.
"Funny," Jess snorted. He walked towards the door, and when he reached it he stole a last glance at the pair. Dom had stretched out on the couch behind Bree, one hand slung casually across her. She was curled up in a ball, her hair falling across her face.
Content, Jess left the room.
Downstairs, Rory had gone to Lane's house to inform her of the new arrivals in town. Lorelai had sensed the uneasiness her daughter felt, but decided she'd bombard her later that day.
Luke, however, was fair game.
"So whatcha gonna do?" Lorelai taunted him, trailing around after him like a puppy dog.
"Nothing."
"Come on! You have to ask him"
"No I don't"
"Luuuuke, But I wanna know. You wanna know. Miss Patty wants to know, Taylor wants to know--"
"It's his life, it's his business!"
"Okay." Lorelai said, and then kept following him. "She's going to be staying in your apartment. Are they allowed to be in the same bed? How about that Dom kid? What if-"
Luke sighed, and just then Jess came back into the diner, a goofy grin on his face.
"You look happy," Luke said.
Jess nodded joyfully, and started to work.