****A/N: Any who anger me shall be put in the corner, right next to. Chibi
Vegeta!
Chibi Vegeta- *growls from the corner*
Thank Yous.
Burenda. Vegeto is cool. That's why I accidentally wrote that it was him and not Gogeta in one of the visions. *.* Oops! I also wanted Trunks and Goten to have a chance at saving the day. *^-^* Last chapter sure had a lot going in it. Heh heh. Oh, and I've got something fun planned at the end for Nappa. *giggles evilly* Three? Bardock, Turles and.? Goku and Goten. You'd have to include Goten in that. Radditzu doesn't take much after his dad.
animegirl-mika. I don't know if I'm gonna drag it out that long. Instead, I'm gonna write a sequel. How's that sound?
g2zone. Well. Gohan has to deal with his evil uncles. *laughs evilly*
Celtic Angel. My characterization? Here I thought I had them all at least a bit OOC. *^-^*
Warnings: Attempted humor, OOC. all that kind of stuff. minor bad language. yadda yadda. Oh! If anybody wonders, thoughts are in between these "{ }" and Bardock's visions will come between these "". This "( )" is me interrupting. A computer's voice will be between these, " ' ' ". A change of POV will be "*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*". Scene changes will be "*". Okay? ****
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"What do ya mean, 'This isn't Hell'? It sure looks like it to me."
Bardock blinked. He hadn't even gotten a taste of Hell. He and Gohan were still in line when they got wished back. He shook his head, "I was still in line. and Gohan wouldn't have gone to Hell."
"Hell?" asked a quiet, sinisterly familiar voice.
Bardock cast a semi-fearful glance in the direction of the voice. What was that child doing still alive?
The boy, of course, noticed the look. "Don't ask me," he said softly, "Ask them." He jerked his head in Kakkarot and Vegeta's direction.
"Well?" he demanded of them.
Kakkarot grinned that too innocent grin of his. "He's okay. A bit confused, maybe, but okay nonetheless."
Turles stiffened beside Bardock, "Kakkarot." Nappa and Radditzu also glared.
Bardock barked at them, "Attention!" All three immediately stiffened to military attention. He growled at them. "He is not your enemy. Vegeta- sama wouldn't stand at his side were that so."
Attention was diverted to the man beside Kakkarot. Vegeta glowered back at them. "Erwarten Sie mich, diese Idioten zu beschäftigen? (Do you expect me to deal with these idiots?)"
While Turles seemed offended, Radditzu and Nappa accepted the degrading comment. Max watched silently.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
He understood what was being said. He knew MANY languages. He didn't know why he had bothered learning a "dead" language, but, in some circumstances, it was useful.
Max decided that the two he had killed would probably wish for his death. It didn't bother him too much. He understood perfectly.
He glanced cautiously up at Kakkarot and Vegeta before moving to confront Gohan. The young man's body jerked upright as he approached.
His emerald eyes stared curiously into Gohan's obsidian ones. "Tell me," he asked, "do you. want me dead?" Gohan pulled back, startled. Max moved closer to him, "Well? I'd understand if you did." He stared up at him.
Gohan shook his head "no".
"Why?"
Gohan blinked. "Uhmm. I guess. I'm just not that way."
The boy nodded. Now, he had to ask Bardock. That would be a little harder to do, without being noticed.
He managed to sneak over and tug on the man's pant leg.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Bardock felt a slight tugging on the leg of his pants. The feeling was reminiscent to a cat's tugging while begging for food. He had a strong urge to say "Not now, kitty." but he looked down to see that GAKI staring up at him. He firmly repressed a shudder. "Nani?" {Wasn't it enough that he had to kill me? Now he has to start tugging on my leg like he's begging for something.}
"I wanted to ask you something."
"Ask away. Can't guarantee that I'll answer, though."
The boy nodded self-consciously. "Do you." he shifted and looked to see if anyone was listening, ".want me dead?"
He didn't know what to think about that. "I. don't know how to answer."
The child's green eyes narrowed and his ki dropped low. "If you do." he said, his voice hardly above a whisper, "then kill me now."
Bardock facevaulted. "Was die fick (What the fuck)!?!"
The boy winced at the loudness of his voice. and the fact that everybody was suddenly staring at them. "Well?"
"Iie," Bardock gasped, struggling to regain his composure.
"Why not?"
Bardock nearly choked on his own tongue. "Because I don't see you as the enemy anymore."
The boy nodded and his ki bobbed back to normal. At this time, Bardock became aware of the eyes on him and the boy. He rubbed the back of his neck.
He growled, "What do you want?"
Kakkarot sweatdropped. "What was that all about?"
Bardock frowned, "If you want to know. ask him."
The boy looked up at Bardock's son. "I wanted to know if he wanted me dead." His eyes fixed emotionlessly on Kakkarot's face. "I would have asked for forgiveness, but." he shrugged, "I don't deserve to even ask." With that, he left the small group to sit on the rocks.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
It was kinda chilly up there. He had a powerful dislike for being cold, but he'd survive. His tail fluffed in an unconscious effort to conserve his body heat. {Do they even know what I am?} he wondered to himself as he looked back at the group. He really doubted that.
Of course, Max knew what they were. Saiyajin were famous for their strength and abilities. Max's own people weren't so well known.
**** Phwew. I know it's short. But I hope it was worth it. *^-^* That last little bit from Max's POV will stand as a hint about the next chapter.
Chibi Vegeta- Why are you making me deal with the dolts?!?
'Cause I am the author. I found a name for my muse! Masamune. She might be in the sequel to this. I'm almost finished with it.
Maz- I should hope I'd get to be in your fic.
(She's a priestess. I'll tell you what kind next time *~-^*.)
Chibi Vegeta- *to Maz* What are you?
Maz- *;p*
*^~^* 'Til next time.
Chibi Vegeta- *growls from the corner*
Thank Yous.
Burenda. Vegeto is cool. That's why I accidentally wrote that it was him and not Gogeta in one of the visions. *.* Oops! I also wanted Trunks and Goten to have a chance at saving the day. *^-^* Last chapter sure had a lot going in it. Heh heh. Oh, and I've got something fun planned at the end for Nappa. *giggles evilly* Three? Bardock, Turles and.? Goku and Goten. You'd have to include Goten in that. Radditzu doesn't take much after his dad.
animegirl-mika. I don't know if I'm gonna drag it out that long. Instead, I'm gonna write a sequel. How's that sound?
g2zone. Well. Gohan has to deal with his evil uncles. *laughs evilly*
Celtic Angel. My characterization? Here I thought I had them all at least a bit OOC. *^-^*
Warnings: Attempted humor, OOC. all that kind of stuff. minor bad language. yadda yadda. Oh! If anybody wonders, thoughts are in between these "{ }" and Bardock's visions will come between these "". This "( )" is me interrupting. A computer's voice will be between these, " ' ' ". A change of POV will be "*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*". Scene changes will be "*". Okay? ****
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"What do ya mean, 'This isn't Hell'? It sure looks like it to me."
Bardock blinked. He hadn't even gotten a taste of Hell. He and Gohan were still in line when they got wished back. He shook his head, "I was still in line. and Gohan wouldn't have gone to Hell."
"Hell?" asked a quiet, sinisterly familiar voice.
Bardock cast a semi-fearful glance in the direction of the voice. What was that child doing still alive?
The boy, of course, noticed the look. "Don't ask me," he said softly, "Ask them." He jerked his head in Kakkarot and Vegeta's direction.
"Well?" he demanded of them.
Kakkarot grinned that too innocent grin of his. "He's okay. A bit confused, maybe, but okay nonetheless."
Turles stiffened beside Bardock, "Kakkarot." Nappa and Radditzu also glared.
Bardock barked at them, "Attention!" All three immediately stiffened to military attention. He growled at them. "He is not your enemy. Vegeta- sama wouldn't stand at his side were that so."
Attention was diverted to the man beside Kakkarot. Vegeta glowered back at them. "Erwarten Sie mich, diese Idioten zu beschäftigen? (Do you expect me to deal with these idiots?)"
While Turles seemed offended, Radditzu and Nappa accepted the degrading comment. Max watched silently.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
He understood what was being said. He knew MANY languages. He didn't know why he had bothered learning a "dead" language, but, in some circumstances, it was useful.
Max decided that the two he had killed would probably wish for his death. It didn't bother him too much. He understood perfectly.
He glanced cautiously up at Kakkarot and Vegeta before moving to confront Gohan. The young man's body jerked upright as he approached.
His emerald eyes stared curiously into Gohan's obsidian ones. "Tell me," he asked, "do you. want me dead?" Gohan pulled back, startled. Max moved closer to him, "Well? I'd understand if you did." He stared up at him.
Gohan shook his head "no".
"Why?"
Gohan blinked. "Uhmm. I guess. I'm just not that way."
The boy nodded. Now, he had to ask Bardock. That would be a little harder to do, without being noticed.
He managed to sneak over and tug on the man's pant leg.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Bardock felt a slight tugging on the leg of his pants. The feeling was reminiscent to a cat's tugging while begging for food. He had a strong urge to say "Not now, kitty." but he looked down to see that GAKI staring up at him. He firmly repressed a shudder. "Nani?" {Wasn't it enough that he had to kill me? Now he has to start tugging on my leg like he's begging for something.}
"I wanted to ask you something."
"Ask away. Can't guarantee that I'll answer, though."
The boy nodded self-consciously. "Do you." he shifted and looked to see if anyone was listening, ".want me dead?"
He didn't know what to think about that. "I. don't know how to answer."
The child's green eyes narrowed and his ki dropped low. "If you do." he said, his voice hardly above a whisper, "then kill me now."
Bardock facevaulted. "Was die fick (What the fuck)!?!"
The boy winced at the loudness of his voice. and the fact that everybody was suddenly staring at them. "Well?"
"Iie," Bardock gasped, struggling to regain his composure.
"Why not?"
Bardock nearly choked on his own tongue. "Because I don't see you as the enemy anymore."
The boy nodded and his ki bobbed back to normal. At this time, Bardock became aware of the eyes on him and the boy. He rubbed the back of his neck.
He growled, "What do you want?"
Kakkarot sweatdropped. "What was that all about?"
Bardock frowned, "If you want to know. ask him."
The boy looked up at Bardock's son. "I wanted to know if he wanted me dead." His eyes fixed emotionlessly on Kakkarot's face. "I would have asked for forgiveness, but." he shrugged, "I don't deserve to even ask." With that, he left the small group to sit on the rocks.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
It was kinda chilly up there. He had a powerful dislike for being cold, but he'd survive. His tail fluffed in an unconscious effort to conserve his body heat. {Do they even know what I am?} he wondered to himself as he looked back at the group. He really doubted that.
Of course, Max knew what they were. Saiyajin were famous for their strength and abilities. Max's own people weren't so well known.
**** Phwew. I know it's short. But I hope it was worth it. *^-^* That last little bit from Max's POV will stand as a hint about the next chapter.
Chibi Vegeta- Why are you making me deal with the dolts?!?
'Cause I am the author. I found a name for my muse! Masamune. She might be in the sequel to this. I'm almost finished with it.
Maz- I should hope I'd get to be in your fic.
(She's a priestess. I'll tell you what kind next time *~-^*.)
Chibi Vegeta- *to Maz* What are you?
Maz- *;p*
*^~^* 'Til next time.