Here's chapter six! Angsty and such, also there's some more characters that
every body knows. I'm not saying anything more! Just read it! Quick go now!
Read it! What are you doing siting there reading me ramble for! Read the
damned story! Mwehehe.. I'm a bitch. *bows and hurries off*
Previously in Saiyan Spirit..
** Vegeta grabbed her by the front of her gi and spun around once before flinging her out into the air. Loral went sailing and smashed through the roof of a nice family several hundred metres away. Naturally they all freaked and ran for it, as you do.. She went though the floor and landed with a crash as rubble piled in on top of her. A large rock smacked her in the head and darkness followed as her golden strength faded out. **
Chapter Six: Evil Comes
On another planet, quite a bit different to the one Goku and Vegeta were on, Gohan rolled the four star dragon ball back and forth along the table with a yawn. ~Gees why does this have to take so long?!~ The large round ball, like an orange bowling ball sat with four others from this new Namek that he, Bulma, Goten and Trunks had travelled to in order to wish their fathers back to life. It had only taken one week to travel to this new Namek on board one of Dr Briefs space capsules but still, it was too long for his liking.
Both his father and Vegeta had been dead for six months after trying to stop a huge meteorite from crashing into the Earth. The stupid fools thought that it would be a simple thing that didn't even needed going Super Saiyan for. As it was the meteorite had been deflected but the sudden shifting in the huge space rock had caused it to become unstable and explode, consequently the two had been killed. Gohan had been angry at first. It had been such a waste, if only they had not been so cocky. As far as he was concerned his dad had been hanging out with Vegeta too much and he was beginning to rub off on the younger Saiyan. And he thought Trunks and Goten were bad enough.
"FOUND ONE!" cried Goten as he ran into the Space Capsule with a wide grin on his face. Under one arm he held a large orange sphere with six stars on the side. He walked over to Gohan with a grin. "The elder Namek I got it from was happy to give it to me." He laughed and slid his arm behind his head "You know what's funny?! He thought I was our dad ha!" Gohan grinned, it made sense, Goten did look shockingly like their father, although not so much since he had grown his hair out. Now he looked more like Gohan had when he was younger. "Family resemblance!" laughed Gohan.
**** Loral fell.
Years of training smashed through her mind as memories rained down like bloody acid, burning through her weaknesses and screaming out manoeuvres and techniques deadly and destructive. Ones to maim, ones to kill, ones to torture, ones to give oblivion, one ones to give a false sense of security to the one who's life will be taken. Ones to defeat a fast enemy, ones to defeat a strong enemy, a short enemy, ones with many arms, ones with great intelligence, ones with fantastic psychic ability, ones with the ability to spit form.. it went on and on and the list of the dead, the ones who were killed by those techniques came also to her mind with the memories, lending experience. She knew how to kill, effectively and with great and bloody mess. Into her mind came the memories of a killer. Ones that the Mind Storm had not brought before. Ki attacks, marshal art, weapons.. Loral found them all in the darkness and with them came the pain of every injury inflicted with the memories of lost battles or painful ones. The blackness rushed faster and faster. The murder, the bloody sacrifice. Limbs ripped, bowels dashed open, blood enough to drown the world. Sculls cracking with the sound of bursting pumpkins, the death screams of thousands, all shrieked in her ears. Until she too joined their throaty cries with one of her own, one mad and driven by blood lust and insanity brought on by the slaughter, the hell. Yes that's what it was, she was living through the hell meant for another. She, the innocent, was that no more. She might as well have killed her family, killed Jay, wiped out that country town she grew up in, slaughtered them all with mighty laughs of pure madness. Because with the death of millions staining her soul, it drove her reason to distant corners of a lost mind.
"AHHHHHHH..!!!" The scream was one of pure pain and darkness. And it went on forever as blood shot eyes snapped open. Staring at the slate sky through the whole in the roof of the building she had landed in. She screamed and the building was obliterated, vaporised to the horror of the observing four. The cloudy sky was wiped out, bleached to clear blue as the clouds were blasted away by an invisible force. Windows shattered and buildings shook to their fragile foundations. The air frizzled and the ground lifted up and was dashed away as she moved forward with deadly steps, the earth flattened. The pressure of the power she radiated moved every thing out of her way, the broken wall was shoved aside with invisible arms. The concrete compacted into the dirt. Her golden hair rained down her back, brushing the back of her knees.
Vegeta stared in shock. What was this?! What the hell was this?! "How could she be..?! HOW THE HELL COULD SHE BE..?!" Vegeta stressed, his eyes wide and his lips pulled back into a snarl.
Goku looked in horror at a malfeasance reincarnated. "Oh my kami." he whispered. It was some thing not meant to be.
Shin's purple skin was bleached, waves of instinctual fear rolled over at what he saw. What he saw was something no one else could possibly see, but he was sure they would be able to feel it. What he could see was not Loral, but some dark thing that looked like her, some dark thing that was sporned by a million million deaths. To Shin her grey body was covered with blood, some dark thing had reached into the material world and latched on to the memories of pain in that mind and fed off it, becoming strong. Sealing the mad soul in darkness.
"THE MIND STORMS.of course!" Shin cried. That was why they had effected only Vegeta and Loral! Their minds were tainted by their individual past pain! Their minds ripe for the taking, only Vegeta's was perhaps too strong for it. Or maybe it was because he was dead. So it had taken Loral first at the time when she was most vulnerable. And.! Shin came to a terrifying realisation. It had made Vegeta attack her.. in the state of mind that he was in, with the coffee and all.. it had altered his mental patterns making him more susceptible to a mental attack from.. But who was it that had started this rolling fall from grace that had effected the two? Who damn it?! He was the Supreme Kai! He should be able to.. no.. no way it was him. THERE WAS NO WAY IN POSSIBLITY THAT IT WAS HIM! No not Mikshal, that demon Kai was imprisoned long ago. The Black Kai, dark from all the evil staining his soul. He could no more effect the physical world than he could reach it. He had been imprisoned and sent to another reality millions of years ago by the Elder Kai! Way back when the Elder Kai had been the Supreme Kai. He bowed his head. Mikshal had been the only being Shin had ever heard of that had the ability to do what was obviously happening to Loral right now. If it was him, he had taken both the memories in Loral's mind and used them against her. And with Vegeta's memories it would definitely be a strong hold he would have over her if it was him. But why?! That was what got Shin. If it was Mikshal why had he taken her mind, a human, and only her? What was his purpose? What was he here for? And was it really him in the first place?
Shin's thoughts were interrupted when Loral stopped advancing and stood in one spot. Her tail was extremely long and golden, several metres long in fact. It twitched. Her platinum hair which had been tall and spiked now flowed down her back in thick chunks. He heard Goku mutter, "Super Saiyan three.." Under his breath as he took a wary step backwards.
Loral slowly smirked, her dark gold eyes lifted slowly to stare at them all.
~Death..blood for the..kill~ Came an echo, reflected of the obsidian of her mind.
"I'm going..to kill you all." Came words of ice from dark lips.
Tail did a twitch twitch.
Fists clenched.
Eyes stared at them all with death in the iris.
****
"Well here's the last one." Said Bulma as she placed the large ball down with the rest on the green patch of grass beside the Space Capsule. Goten was biting his lip, his eyes wide open, excitement threatening to collapse his carefully constructed self-control. "Comeoncomeoncomeon!!!!!" He said with a slight jump with every word. Trunks smirked at him, his own excitement carefully hidden but still peeked through with the glint in his eyes. "Gees Goten, its only your dad, he's been wished back heaps of times." Goten poked his tongue at Trunks and narrowly avoided a swift swipe from his friends arm with a laugh.
"OK." Muttered Bulma. "From what I can remember from learning Namek from Mr Popo and Dendai these are the words to summon the dragon." She walked up the pulsating globes and stretched out both hands. "CUMNALA TULAFA TANALEENO!" She cried out and then the light from the dragon balls shot into the air as a long twisting stream of light which curled up ward into the green sky. It widened out, forming arms and a great head with a huge fin on its back. Trunks and Goten stared in awe. They had never seen the Namekian Dragon before.
The great green Dragon hovered over them, then opening its great red eyes it looked down at them and said, "WHY HAVE YOU AWOKEN ME FROM MY SLUMBER.." The voice was deep and resonating, shaking them to their bones. The Dragon cocked his head to one side. "I WILL GRANT THREE WISHES..NOW SPEEK!" Bulma bit her lip and turned to face the others. "OK guys get ready, here I go." She turned back and spoke, "CULLAKIAK ..uh..MONATRAE GOKU FANRIK DANME VEGETA!" She grinned and wiped her brow. The dragon nodded his huge head and said, "YOUR WISH HAS BEEN GRANTED."
****
Goku flew up to where Vegeta floated in the air staring down at the creature that was meant to be Loral.
"Vegeta!" The Prince turned quickly to face his rival.
"What?!" He barked, his fists clenching.
"We have to fuse Vegeta! Its the only way to wear her out to the point that she has to drop Super Saiyan three! Then she'll be too weak to do any thing!" Vegeta glared at him.
"Kakarot! You know what I think about that! Why can't you just go Super Saiyan three and beat her!"
Goku shook his head. "Because I won't be able to hold it any longer than she can and when we both drop it I'll be useless in battle."
Vegeta growled under his breath. "You know I hate this damned dance..its embarrassing.."
Goku grinned. "OK ready?" Vegeta moved away from him a bit muttering under his breath.
"Fine! I'm ready!" He snarled. Then the two hopped towards each other, there hands pointed away both saying, "Fuuu.." Then when they came together their arms crossed over their heads and their fingers touched as they completed the word. " ..sssion!" They both glowed brightly as they merged together and as the light faded away there stood a tall, spiky haired being with a wicked grin on his face. When he spoke it was with both voices.
"I am Gogeta.. and this is gonna be fun." He pounded one fist into the other and raced towards the dark Loral who had been staring at the two as they fused. To say it blankly, Loral never had a chance in hell of beating him. And Gogeta knew that. After a flurry of punches, a kick was slammed into Loral's head sending her into a near by building. Gogeta stood over her laughing slightly. "I guess I should have warned you that you never had a chance but.. oh well, most people like surprises." He shrugged and walked over to where Loral lay, her normal reddy black tresses had returned. He picked her up and walked back to where Shin and Zim stood. Zim was staring, his jaw open slightly in disbelief. It had been one of _those_ days. He dropped her on the ground at Shins feet before concentrating for a moment. Then suddenly he was split in half and Goku and Vegeta jumped away from each other gasping. Vegeta shivered slightly at having just shared a body with Kakarot. "It wasn't that bad Vegeta." Said Goku with an elbow to Vegeta's side. Vegeta glared back at him. "Hn, that's what you think..having your thoughts running around him my head! Honestly is there a time when you don't think of FOOD?!"
Shin knelt beside Loral. "She should be ok for now, even if she wakes up. that much energy would have drained her to the point where Mikshal would have no hold over her."
Goku and Vegeta blinked. "Mik.. what's it?" Asked Goku. "Where not mind readers fool!" Snarled Vegeta. Shin looked up at them.
"Mikshal. The most evil Kai that ever existed. He was banished long ago, but now I have reason to believe he some how has come back. This is his work I'm sure of it." Goku looked down at Loral. "It kinda reminded me of Babadi's hold on Vegeta." He said. Vegeta flinched and looked away at the memory. Shin shook his head. "It is possession to be sure but Mikshal's is a possession of the mind and spirit, not just the mind like Babadi's was. His also goes deeper.. runs to true evil.. not enforced evil.." Shin shivered slightly at the monstrosity of it.
Suddenly both Goku and Vegeta gasped and then blinked in surprise. Shin looked up to see their halo's vanish. "Your back to life." He said matter- of-factly. Goku grinned before doing a little dance. "Yay!" he said like an excited child. Vegeta's smirk was the closest thing to a smile as he got when around Goku, but he too looked down at his hands to see that yes, he definitely was alive again.
****
"WHAT IS YOUR SECOND WISH?" Asked the dragon as he peered down at them. Bulma hummed and harred, she hadn't thought of the other two wishes. Trunks suddenly grinned. "Wish for all the Saiyans to have there tails back!" Bulma stared at him. "Are you sure Trunks?" Her son nodded his head. Bulma shrugged, "Oh well if you insist." She turned back to the dragon. "Ok now.. CULLAKIAK.. um.. DAMENTEN TALENTI AMADEON!" The dragon growled deeply in his throat and then nodded. "YOUR WISH..HAS BEEN GRANTED."
****
Vegeta and Goku almost fell over when their tails sprouted out from their backs. "WHAT THE FUCK?!" Cried Vegeta. Goku's words were muffled by the dirt as he landed on his face. They both looked over their shoulders to see twitching tails moving in the air.
***
Well that's chapter six. Chapter seven might be a bit longer because I'm going to concentrate on my other story, 'Distant Light Years' about Vegeta, for a while since I haven't updated it since September.eek! Well thanks for your reviews, I promise it won't be too long, a week at the most! I'm a fast typer and my exams are over for now! Well I'm hungry so I'm going to go and eat something. If any of you guys have suggestions or ideas for future chapters I will be most happy to hear them! So see you guys later!
Chow for the mo,
~Dynishra~
Previously in Saiyan Spirit..
** Vegeta grabbed her by the front of her gi and spun around once before flinging her out into the air. Loral went sailing and smashed through the roof of a nice family several hundred metres away. Naturally they all freaked and ran for it, as you do.. She went though the floor and landed with a crash as rubble piled in on top of her. A large rock smacked her in the head and darkness followed as her golden strength faded out. **
Chapter Six: Evil Comes
On another planet, quite a bit different to the one Goku and Vegeta were on, Gohan rolled the four star dragon ball back and forth along the table with a yawn. ~Gees why does this have to take so long?!~ The large round ball, like an orange bowling ball sat with four others from this new Namek that he, Bulma, Goten and Trunks had travelled to in order to wish their fathers back to life. It had only taken one week to travel to this new Namek on board one of Dr Briefs space capsules but still, it was too long for his liking.
Both his father and Vegeta had been dead for six months after trying to stop a huge meteorite from crashing into the Earth. The stupid fools thought that it would be a simple thing that didn't even needed going Super Saiyan for. As it was the meteorite had been deflected but the sudden shifting in the huge space rock had caused it to become unstable and explode, consequently the two had been killed. Gohan had been angry at first. It had been such a waste, if only they had not been so cocky. As far as he was concerned his dad had been hanging out with Vegeta too much and he was beginning to rub off on the younger Saiyan. And he thought Trunks and Goten were bad enough.
"FOUND ONE!" cried Goten as he ran into the Space Capsule with a wide grin on his face. Under one arm he held a large orange sphere with six stars on the side. He walked over to Gohan with a grin. "The elder Namek I got it from was happy to give it to me." He laughed and slid his arm behind his head "You know what's funny?! He thought I was our dad ha!" Gohan grinned, it made sense, Goten did look shockingly like their father, although not so much since he had grown his hair out. Now he looked more like Gohan had when he was younger. "Family resemblance!" laughed Gohan.
**** Loral fell.
Years of training smashed through her mind as memories rained down like bloody acid, burning through her weaknesses and screaming out manoeuvres and techniques deadly and destructive. Ones to maim, ones to kill, ones to torture, ones to give oblivion, one ones to give a false sense of security to the one who's life will be taken. Ones to defeat a fast enemy, ones to defeat a strong enemy, a short enemy, ones with many arms, ones with great intelligence, ones with fantastic psychic ability, ones with the ability to spit form.. it went on and on and the list of the dead, the ones who were killed by those techniques came also to her mind with the memories, lending experience. She knew how to kill, effectively and with great and bloody mess. Into her mind came the memories of a killer. Ones that the Mind Storm had not brought before. Ki attacks, marshal art, weapons.. Loral found them all in the darkness and with them came the pain of every injury inflicted with the memories of lost battles or painful ones. The blackness rushed faster and faster. The murder, the bloody sacrifice. Limbs ripped, bowels dashed open, blood enough to drown the world. Sculls cracking with the sound of bursting pumpkins, the death screams of thousands, all shrieked in her ears. Until she too joined their throaty cries with one of her own, one mad and driven by blood lust and insanity brought on by the slaughter, the hell. Yes that's what it was, she was living through the hell meant for another. She, the innocent, was that no more. She might as well have killed her family, killed Jay, wiped out that country town she grew up in, slaughtered them all with mighty laughs of pure madness. Because with the death of millions staining her soul, it drove her reason to distant corners of a lost mind.
"AHHHHHHH..!!!" The scream was one of pure pain and darkness. And it went on forever as blood shot eyes snapped open. Staring at the slate sky through the whole in the roof of the building she had landed in. She screamed and the building was obliterated, vaporised to the horror of the observing four. The cloudy sky was wiped out, bleached to clear blue as the clouds were blasted away by an invisible force. Windows shattered and buildings shook to their fragile foundations. The air frizzled and the ground lifted up and was dashed away as she moved forward with deadly steps, the earth flattened. The pressure of the power she radiated moved every thing out of her way, the broken wall was shoved aside with invisible arms. The concrete compacted into the dirt. Her golden hair rained down her back, brushing the back of her knees.
Vegeta stared in shock. What was this?! What the hell was this?! "How could she be..?! HOW THE HELL COULD SHE BE..?!" Vegeta stressed, his eyes wide and his lips pulled back into a snarl.
Goku looked in horror at a malfeasance reincarnated. "Oh my kami." he whispered. It was some thing not meant to be.
Shin's purple skin was bleached, waves of instinctual fear rolled over at what he saw. What he saw was something no one else could possibly see, but he was sure they would be able to feel it. What he could see was not Loral, but some dark thing that looked like her, some dark thing that was sporned by a million million deaths. To Shin her grey body was covered with blood, some dark thing had reached into the material world and latched on to the memories of pain in that mind and fed off it, becoming strong. Sealing the mad soul in darkness.
"THE MIND STORMS.of course!" Shin cried. That was why they had effected only Vegeta and Loral! Their minds were tainted by their individual past pain! Their minds ripe for the taking, only Vegeta's was perhaps too strong for it. Or maybe it was because he was dead. So it had taken Loral first at the time when she was most vulnerable. And.! Shin came to a terrifying realisation. It had made Vegeta attack her.. in the state of mind that he was in, with the coffee and all.. it had altered his mental patterns making him more susceptible to a mental attack from.. But who was it that had started this rolling fall from grace that had effected the two? Who damn it?! He was the Supreme Kai! He should be able to.. no.. no way it was him. THERE WAS NO WAY IN POSSIBLITY THAT IT WAS HIM! No not Mikshal, that demon Kai was imprisoned long ago. The Black Kai, dark from all the evil staining his soul. He could no more effect the physical world than he could reach it. He had been imprisoned and sent to another reality millions of years ago by the Elder Kai! Way back when the Elder Kai had been the Supreme Kai. He bowed his head. Mikshal had been the only being Shin had ever heard of that had the ability to do what was obviously happening to Loral right now. If it was him, he had taken both the memories in Loral's mind and used them against her. And with Vegeta's memories it would definitely be a strong hold he would have over her if it was him. But why?! That was what got Shin. If it was Mikshal why had he taken her mind, a human, and only her? What was his purpose? What was he here for? And was it really him in the first place?
Shin's thoughts were interrupted when Loral stopped advancing and stood in one spot. Her tail was extremely long and golden, several metres long in fact. It twitched. Her platinum hair which had been tall and spiked now flowed down her back in thick chunks. He heard Goku mutter, "Super Saiyan three.." Under his breath as he took a wary step backwards.
Loral slowly smirked, her dark gold eyes lifted slowly to stare at them all.
~Death..blood for the..kill~ Came an echo, reflected of the obsidian of her mind.
"I'm going..to kill you all." Came words of ice from dark lips.
Tail did a twitch twitch.
Fists clenched.
Eyes stared at them all with death in the iris.
****
"Well here's the last one." Said Bulma as she placed the large ball down with the rest on the green patch of grass beside the Space Capsule. Goten was biting his lip, his eyes wide open, excitement threatening to collapse his carefully constructed self-control. "Comeoncomeoncomeon!!!!!" He said with a slight jump with every word. Trunks smirked at him, his own excitement carefully hidden but still peeked through with the glint in his eyes. "Gees Goten, its only your dad, he's been wished back heaps of times." Goten poked his tongue at Trunks and narrowly avoided a swift swipe from his friends arm with a laugh.
"OK." Muttered Bulma. "From what I can remember from learning Namek from Mr Popo and Dendai these are the words to summon the dragon." She walked up the pulsating globes and stretched out both hands. "CUMNALA TULAFA TANALEENO!" She cried out and then the light from the dragon balls shot into the air as a long twisting stream of light which curled up ward into the green sky. It widened out, forming arms and a great head with a huge fin on its back. Trunks and Goten stared in awe. They had never seen the Namekian Dragon before.
The great green Dragon hovered over them, then opening its great red eyes it looked down at them and said, "WHY HAVE YOU AWOKEN ME FROM MY SLUMBER.." The voice was deep and resonating, shaking them to their bones. The Dragon cocked his head to one side. "I WILL GRANT THREE WISHES..NOW SPEEK!" Bulma bit her lip and turned to face the others. "OK guys get ready, here I go." She turned back and spoke, "CULLAKIAK ..uh..MONATRAE GOKU FANRIK DANME VEGETA!" She grinned and wiped her brow. The dragon nodded his huge head and said, "YOUR WISH HAS BEEN GRANTED."
****
Goku flew up to where Vegeta floated in the air staring down at the creature that was meant to be Loral.
"Vegeta!" The Prince turned quickly to face his rival.
"What?!" He barked, his fists clenching.
"We have to fuse Vegeta! Its the only way to wear her out to the point that she has to drop Super Saiyan three! Then she'll be too weak to do any thing!" Vegeta glared at him.
"Kakarot! You know what I think about that! Why can't you just go Super Saiyan three and beat her!"
Goku shook his head. "Because I won't be able to hold it any longer than she can and when we both drop it I'll be useless in battle."
Vegeta growled under his breath. "You know I hate this damned dance..its embarrassing.."
Goku grinned. "OK ready?" Vegeta moved away from him a bit muttering under his breath.
"Fine! I'm ready!" He snarled. Then the two hopped towards each other, there hands pointed away both saying, "Fuuu.." Then when they came together their arms crossed over their heads and their fingers touched as they completed the word. " ..sssion!" They both glowed brightly as they merged together and as the light faded away there stood a tall, spiky haired being with a wicked grin on his face. When he spoke it was with both voices.
"I am Gogeta.. and this is gonna be fun." He pounded one fist into the other and raced towards the dark Loral who had been staring at the two as they fused. To say it blankly, Loral never had a chance in hell of beating him. And Gogeta knew that. After a flurry of punches, a kick was slammed into Loral's head sending her into a near by building. Gogeta stood over her laughing slightly. "I guess I should have warned you that you never had a chance but.. oh well, most people like surprises." He shrugged and walked over to where Loral lay, her normal reddy black tresses had returned. He picked her up and walked back to where Shin and Zim stood. Zim was staring, his jaw open slightly in disbelief. It had been one of _those_ days. He dropped her on the ground at Shins feet before concentrating for a moment. Then suddenly he was split in half and Goku and Vegeta jumped away from each other gasping. Vegeta shivered slightly at having just shared a body with Kakarot. "It wasn't that bad Vegeta." Said Goku with an elbow to Vegeta's side. Vegeta glared back at him. "Hn, that's what you think..having your thoughts running around him my head! Honestly is there a time when you don't think of FOOD?!"
Shin knelt beside Loral. "She should be ok for now, even if she wakes up. that much energy would have drained her to the point where Mikshal would have no hold over her."
Goku and Vegeta blinked. "Mik.. what's it?" Asked Goku. "Where not mind readers fool!" Snarled Vegeta. Shin looked up at them.
"Mikshal. The most evil Kai that ever existed. He was banished long ago, but now I have reason to believe he some how has come back. This is his work I'm sure of it." Goku looked down at Loral. "It kinda reminded me of Babadi's hold on Vegeta." He said. Vegeta flinched and looked away at the memory. Shin shook his head. "It is possession to be sure but Mikshal's is a possession of the mind and spirit, not just the mind like Babadi's was. His also goes deeper.. runs to true evil.. not enforced evil.." Shin shivered slightly at the monstrosity of it.
Suddenly both Goku and Vegeta gasped and then blinked in surprise. Shin looked up to see their halo's vanish. "Your back to life." He said matter- of-factly. Goku grinned before doing a little dance. "Yay!" he said like an excited child. Vegeta's smirk was the closest thing to a smile as he got when around Goku, but he too looked down at his hands to see that yes, he definitely was alive again.
****
"WHAT IS YOUR SECOND WISH?" Asked the dragon as he peered down at them. Bulma hummed and harred, she hadn't thought of the other two wishes. Trunks suddenly grinned. "Wish for all the Saiyans to have there tails back!" Bulma stared at him. "Are you sure Trunks?" Her son nodded his head. Bulma shrugged, "Oh well if you insist." She turned back to the dragon. "Ok now.. CULLAKIAK.. um.. DAMENTEN TALENTI AMADEON!" The dragon growled deeply in his throat and then nodded. "YOUR WISH..HAS BEEN GRANTED."
****
Vegeta and Goku almost fell over when their tails sprouted out from their backs. "WHAT THE FUCK?!" Cried Vegeta. Goku's words were muffled by the dirt as he landed on his face. They both looked over their shoulders to see twitching tails moving in the air.
***
Well that's chapter six. Chapter seven might be a bit longer because I'm going to concentrate on my other story, 'Distant Light Years' about Vegeta, for a while since I haven't updated it since September.eek! Well thanks for your reviews, I promise it won't be too long, a week at the most! I'm a fast typer and my exams are over for now! Well I'm hungry so I'm going to go and eat something. If any of you guys have suggestions or ideas for future chapters I will be most happy to hear them! So see you guys later!
Chow for the mo,
~Dynishra~