Chapter 3: Battle on Zethro
Disclaimer: I don't own DBZ but I do own a few characters in my story
They landed on the small planet. After looking around for a few seconds, they saw what looked like a city in the distance. They decided to check it out because the people living there might know about Jabaka. They walked to the city since it was only about 2 miles away, but about half way there the city just blew up. Gohan, Vegeta, Tien, Yamcha, Piccolo, and Chaotzu went to see what was going on. Standing there, in the middle of the city, was none other than Jabaka. After about 3 seconds he disappeared. They for some reason could not sense his power level.
"Where the hell is he!" Vegeta yelled. "Why can't we sense him?"
"I don't know, but we have to stay alert. He could be anywhere, and since we can't sense him he will be even more dangerous," Piccolo said.
"Wait a sec, someone's power level just disappeared, hold on. THAT WAS GOTEN!" Gohan screamed. The fighters flew back to the others and saw Goten on the ground. Jabaka was standing behind them while everyone looked in terror. Vegeta and Gohan charged at him after going super sayian 2. Dende ran over to Goten and healed him. Jabaka saw Dende's power so he knocked the 2 sayians out of the way and hit Dende in the back of the neck, nearly killing him. After that he flew up and told them he would return in 9 hours. In a flash of light he was gone. They just stood there for a minute, but were disturbed when a couple hundred little fuzzy aliens came running past them.
"What the fuck?" Vegeta asked.
"Gosh Vegeta, you sure have a potty mouth, but I guess they live on this planet," Chichi said. "Where are all of you going?" she asked one of them.
"We are running from the monsters! They want to use us to build them weapons because we are good craft-maker-things." It said. "Where are we?" Chichi asked it. "you are on the planet Zethro, now let me go!" it said.
All the fighters except Yamcha flew off to fight the monsters. They only flew about 200 feet before finding 50 monsters. They looked like small raptors with human traits, like being able to fight, talk, and they were shaped a little like humans. Ten of them ran past the Z fighters but 3 were blown up by an energy attack from Vegeta. The sayians both went super sayian and each started fighting about ten each. Piccolo went to fight the ones that got past them, but only caught up to 4 of them. The other 3 went toward Chichi, Bulma, Goten, Trunks, Dende, and Yamcha. When they attacked Yamcha defended everyone else. One of them saw the injured Dende and jumped on his head, crushing his skull. After this it just blew up Dende's body. Trunks and Goten started to cry when Dende was destroyed. They jumped on the raptor's head and started attacking him. Not knowing they had this attack, they both accidentally shot powerful energy attacks. The attacks were so powerful they put a hole through the monster's heart. They both started laughing at what happened, and then just fell asleep. Yamcha kept fighting the other two, but wasn't able to kill them.
Gohan and Vegeta were doing fine. Tien and Piccolo weren't as good, but still killed some of them. Chaotzu on the other hand wasn't doing that well. He was only fighting 1 at a time, until 7 more attacked him. They started tearing him limb by limb (literally). After 5 minutes of getting killed, Chaotzu was in 3 pieces. When Tien saw what happened to his little buddy he became furious. He went head on to all 8 of the raptors, and was able to kill all of them in a matter of seconds. He went over to Chaotzu.
"Chaotzu, are you ok?" he said knowing the answer would be no. Chaotzu just layed there for a minute before waking up.
"Tien, is that you? Go get Dende to heal me," Chaotzu said. "Ya, its me. But Dende can't heal you, he was killed by those raptors," Tien replied.
As Tien was talking Gohan, Vegeta, and Piccolo killed most of the other raptors, and finishing off the last few. Yamcha killed his 2 raptors a few minutes earlier so him and the others went over to Tien and Chaotzu. The Z fighters thought the battle was over, but it was just beginning.
From behind they heard something coming. All of a sudden a giant raptor about 20 feet tall came up from behind. It grabbed Yamcha, and its claws pierced right through his body, killing him instantly. The giant raptor grabbed the pieces of Chaotzu's body and did what no one expected, HE ATE HIM!
Gohan and Vegeta and Piccolo started to attack the raptor while Tien just stared at it. He started yelling, and powering up. Everyone looked at him, even the monster. Tien started to transform. His third eye started to close and after a while it shut completely. His muscles grew so big he was nearly twice his normal size. He started to grow some hair. It was forest green and looked like super sayian 3 hair. His skin also became a little yellower, and his eyes became red with green pupils. He was much stronger than before, and was even stronger than Gohan and Vegeta. He went into a head on attack on the monster. Even with his increase in size he was still faster than ever. He was dodging every attack and threw in plenty of attacks. But while Tien had his back turned his back for just a second, the raptor struck him in the back, making him fly to the ground. It attacked Gohan and Vegeta and threw them to the ground. It was about to attack the others until something happened. HIS HAND FELL OFF!
Everyone was wondering what happened until they saw a person with a sword standing behind him. They knew it couldn't have been future Trunks because he would have no idea they needed help. The raptor hit the stranger out of the way, so Chichi and Bulma went to see who he was and see if he was ok. Tien got back up to attack since the monster was injured. He flew up to the raptor, and put his hand in front of its face. An energy attack came out of his palm. It was something he had never done before so he had no clue what would happen. The attack went all the way around the raptor, and he was completely inside it. With him inside it, the energy came back to Tien's palm, making it tiny and it looked like it was inside a small crystal. Tien destroyed the crystal and was amazed he was still standing after the attack because of all the energy he used. He decided to call his new attack "Reign of Fire". After a while he realized he didn't lose any energy because the energy came back to his hand.
Meanwhile the others went over to the kid with the sword to see who he was. When they got to where he was they saw what he looked like for the first time. He looked like he was about a year or two older than Gohan. He had dark-red hair spiked up in every direction. He had gray pants, a black sleeveless shirt, and silver wristbands and a silver sweatband. A sword was coming out of the back of his shirt (the thing that held it was inside his shirt). He also had 2 more swords coming out of either side of his main sword, and they were both white and were called dragon swords because they were curvy. The only other weapon he had was a blade you throw which comes back to you.
"Who are you?" Vegeta finally asked. "My name is Shyro, and I live on this planet. I have lived here for 11 years now," the boy said. "Where did you come from? And do you like, protect those fuzzy dudes or something?" Tien asked him. "No, I just train in the woods hardly ever see them. I came out here because I live a couple miles south and thought I could help a little." He replied. "Oh, ok. I sensed you didn't have as much physical strength, but DAMN! I've never seen anyone with as much sword skills as you have, not even our friend Trunks. And what planet did you come from?" Gohan said. "Well, the planet I came from is pretty far away. I got here cuz I stole a rocket from some guy, and I ended up here. My ship was totaled and no rockets are here. And the planet I came from was, I think it was called Earth," he said.
After hearing 'Earth' everyone was amazed. They told him their story and how Earth blew up, and how the others died. Shyro was amazed after hearing the story and since he was from their home planet, they invited him to join them on their journey. But their time of talk was cut short because their new enemy arrived earlier than expected. Jabaka was ready to fight them again. Tien quickly went to attack with reign of fire, but when he got to Jabaka to attack, Jabaka put his hands in front of him. This somehow made the attack backfire, and it crystallized Tien instead! Gohan saw the small crystal and grabbed it. Him and everyone else ran to the ships, including Shyro. They new they had to train so they ran.
Author's Note~ So, tell me how you like my story, is it good, bad, or OK? Do I need to improve? There's only one way to tell me, called Reviewing!! Oh and Shyro is my original character. My friend is using him in a story that will soon come called the Chibi Tournament (His user name is SS4 Chibi Vegeta)
Disclaimer: I don't own DBZ but I do own a few characters in my story
They landed on the small planet. After looking around for a few seconds, they saw what looked like a city in the distance. They decided to check it out because the people living there might know about Jabaka. They walked to the city since it was only about 2 miles away, but about half way there the city just blew up. Gohan, Vegeta, Tien, Yamcha, Piccolo, and Chaotzu went to see what was going on. Standing there, in the middle of the city, was none other than Jabaka. After about 3 seconds he disappeared. They for some reason could not sense his power level.
"Where the hell is he!" Vegeta yelled. "Why can't we sense him?"
"I don't know, but we have to stay alert. He could be anywhere, and since we can't sense him he will be even more dangerous," Piccolo said.
"Wait a sec, someone's power level just disappeared, hold on. THAT WAS GOTEN!" Gohan screamed. The fighters flew back to the others and saw Goten on the ground. Jabaka was standing behind them while everyone looked in terror. Vegeta and Gohan charged at him after going super sayian 2. Dende ran over to Goten and healed him. Jabaka saw Dende's power so he knocked the 2 sayians out of the way and hit Dende in the back of the neck, nearly killing him. After that he flew up and told them he would return in 9 hours. In a flash of light he was gone. They just stood there for a minute, but were disturbed when a couple hundred little fuzzy aliens came running past them.
"What the fuck?" Vegeta asked.
"Gosh Vegeta, you sure have a potty mouth, but I guess they live on this planet," Chichi said. "Where are all of you going?" she asked one of them.
"We are running from the monsters! They want to use us to build them weapons because we are good craft-maker-things." It said. "Where are we?" Chichi asked it. "you are on the planet Zethro, now let me go!" it said.
All the fighters except Yamcha flew off to fight the monsters. They only flew about 200 feet before finding 50 monsters. They looked like small raptors with human traits, like being able to fight, talk, and they were shaped a little like humans. Ten of them ran past the Z fighters but 3 were blown up by an energy attack from Vegeta. The sayians both went super sayian and each started fighting about ten each. Piccolo went to fight the ones that got past them, but only caught up to 4 of them. The other 3 went toward Chichi, Bulma, Goten, Trunks, Dende, and Yamcha. When they attacked Yamcha defended everyone else. One of them saw the injured Dende and jumped on his head, crushing his skull. After this it just blew up Dende's body. Trunks and Goten started to cry when Dende was destroyed. They jumped on the raptor's head and started attacking him. Not knowing they had this attack, they both accidentally shot powerful energy attacks. The attacks were so powerful they put a hole through the monster's heart. They both started laughing at what happened, and then just fell asleep. Yamcha kept fighting the other two, but wasn't able to kill them.
Gohan and Vegeta were doing fine. Tien and Piccolo weren't as good, but still killed some of them. Chaotzu on the other hand wasn't doing that well. He was only fighting 1 at a time, until 7 more attacked him. They started tearing him limb by limb (literally). After 5 minutes of getting killed, Chaotzu was in 3 pieces. When Tien saw what happened to his little buddy he became furious. He went head on to all 8 of the raptors, and was able to kill all of them in a matter of seconds. He went over to Chaotzu.
"Chaotzu, are you ok?" he said knowing the answer would be no. Chaotzu just layed there for a minute before waking up.
"Tien, is that you? Go get Dende to heal me," Chaotzu said. "Ya, its me. But Dende can't heal you, he was killed by those raptors," Tien replied.
As Tien was talking Gohan, Vegeta, and Piccolo killed most of the other raptors, and finishing off the last few. Yamcha killed his 2 raptors a few minutes earlier so him and the others went over to Tien and Chaotzu. The Z fighters thought the battle was over, but it was just beginning.
From behind they heard something coming. All of a sudden a giant raptor about 20 feet tall came up from behind. It grabbed Yamcha, and its claws pierced right through his body, killing him instantly. The giant raptor grabbed the pieces of Chaotzu's body and did what no one expected, HE ATE HIM!
Gohan and Vegeta and Piccolo started to attack the raptor while Tien just stared at it. He started yelling, and powering up. Everyone looked at him, even the monster. Tien started to transform. His third eye started to close and after a while it shut completely. His muscles grew so big he was nearly twice his normal size. He started to grow some hair. It was forest green and looked like super sayian 3 hair. His skin also became a little yellower, and his eyes became red with green pupils. He was much stronger than before, and was even stronger than Gohan and Vegeta. He went into a head on attack on the monster. Even with his increase in size he was still faster than ever. He was dodging every attack and threw in plenty of attacks. But while Tien had his back turned his back for just a second, the raptor struck him in the back, making him fly to the ground. It attacked Gohan and Vegeta and threw them to the ground. It was about to attack the others until something happened. HIS HAND FELL OFF!
Everyone was wondering what happened until they saw a person with a sword standing behind him. They knew it couldn't have been future Trunks because he would have no idea they needed help. The raptor hit the stranger out of the way, so Chichi and Bulma went to see who he was and see if he was ok. Tien got back up to attack since the monster was injured. He flew up to the raptor, and put his hand in front of its face. An energy attack came out of his palm. It was something he had never done before so he had no clue what would happen. The attack went all the way around the raptor, and he was completely inside it. With him inside it, the energy came back to Tien's palm, making it tiny and it looked like it was inside a small crystal. Tien destroyed the crystal and was amazed he was still standing after the attack because of all the energy he used. He decided to call his new attack "Reign of Fire". After a while he realized he didn't lose any energy because the energy came back to his hand.
Meanwhile the others went over to the kid with the sword to see who he was. When they got to where he was they saw what he looked like for the first time. He looked like he was about a year or two older than Gohan. He had dark-red hair spiked up in every direction. He had gray pants, a black sleeveless shirt, and silver wristbands and a silver sweatband. A sword was coming out of the back of his shirt (the thing that held it was inside his shirt). He also had 2 more swords coming out of either side of his main sword, and they were both white and were called dragon swords because they were curvy. The only other weapon he had was a blade you throw which comes back to you.
"Who are you?" Vegeta finally asked. "My name is Shyro, and I live on this planet. I have lived here for 11 years now," the boy said. "Where did you come from? And do you like, protect those fuzzy dudes or something?" Tien asked him. "No, I just train in the woods hardly ever see them. I came out here because I live a couple miles south and thought I could help a little." He replied. "Oh, ok. I sensed you didn't have as much physical strength, but DAMN! I've never seen anyone with as much sword skills as you have, not even our friend Trunks. And what planet did you come from?" Gohan said. "Well, the planet I came from is pretty far away. I got here cuz I stole a rocket from some guy, and I ended up here. My ship was totaled and no rockets are here. And the planet I came from was, I think it was called Earth," he said.
After hearing 'Earth' everyone was amazed. They told him their story and how Earth blew up, and how the others died. Shyro was amazed after hearing the story and since he was from their home planet, they invited him to join them on their journey. But their time of talk was cut short because their new enemy arrived earlier than expected. Jabaka was ready to fight them again. Tien quickly went to attack with reign of fire, but when he got to Jabaka to attack, Jabaka put his hands in front of him. This somehow made the attack backfire, and it crystallized Tien instead! Gohan saw the small crystal and grabbed it. Him and everyone else ran to the ships, including Shyro. They new they had to train so they ran.
Author's Note~ So, tell me how you like my story, is it good, bad, or OK? Do I need to improve? There's only one way to tell me, called Reviewing!! Oh and Shyro is my original character. My friend is using him in a story that will soon come called the Chibi Tournament (His user name is SS4 Chibi Vegeta)