This is the first Star Wars fanfic I've done and I don't know how good it is. It's a short one chapter story. I might add more later if I can think of anything.*Indicates thought
Summary: A discussion between a master and his former apprentice.
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All She Is
'See all that you have left her as? Nothing more than a hallow shell of the woman she once was. She has nothing left. She is all you. Anakin, all you, her mind, spirit, and soul. You are her, and she is you. Your souls are forever entwined. But Anakin is dead and you took her with you.'
As the Anakin inside this hideous monster heard from Obi-Wan's mouth what had happened, he cried inside. But no one could tell because of the mask that covered his face. *Oh my sweet innocent Padme. What have I done!? What have I become?!!*
Obi-Wan continued 'You carry her with you still. I can feel it. Come back Anakin. Come back!'
In his mechanical speech he replied 'I know not that name anymore.' *NO stop let me out! Padme!*
'Then Anakin Skywalker is truly dead. It seems that I cannot save you. Even your beloved Padme can't. But maybe someone else can...'
And the hologram of his former master faded and disappeared until only Anakin and the monster he had become were left.
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Ok sorry that was so short. I don't even think I did the characterizations right. If you have any feedback good or bad would be greatly appreciated! Thanks!
Summary: A discussion between a master and his former apprentice.
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All She Is
'See all that you have left her as? Nothing more than a hallow shell of the woman she once was. She has nothing left. She is all you. Anakin, all you, her mind, spirit, and soul. You are her, and she is you. Your souls are forever entwined. But Anakin is dead and you took her with you.'
As the Anakin inside this hideous monster heard from Obi-Wan's mouth what had happened, he cried inside. But no one could tell because of the mask that covered his face. *Oh my sweet innocent Padme. What have I done!? What have I become?!!*
Obi-Wan continued 'You carry her with you still. I can feel it. Come back Anakin. Come back!'
In his mechanical speech he replied 'I know not that name anymore.' *NO stop let me out! Padme!*
'Then Anakin Skywalker is truly dead. It seems that I cannot save you. Even your beloved Padme can't. But maybe someone else can...'
And the hologram of his former master faded and disappeared until only Anakin and the monster he had become were left.
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Ok sorry that was so short. I don't even think I did the characterizations right. If you have any feedback good or bad would be greatly appreciated! Thanks!