I'm very sorry if I've offended anyone with this story. I never meant to do so, and I believe I gave warning enough to anyone who read this. I would like to post each of your reviews and answer your questions in this chapter.
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Mrs. Videl Son wrote: okay, Videl?...Shopping? A little OOC everyonce in a while is okay, but that's unforgivable!
I respond: I'm sorry I didn't specify, but this story takes place after Gohan and Videl get together. She was GROCERY shopping, not like the mall kind. I was trying to create a situation in which she'd be away from Gohan, and this seemed to be it. Sayains eat a lot, right? Again, I'm sorry if this threw you off of my story.
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bubbles wrote: I just finished reading your summary was offensive to me!I my self am I christian and I like dragonball z but you don't mix fantasy about my God and My savior!!!What your are trying to do is play out the birth of Jesus in DBZ and that's just wrong. Like I said I like Dragonball Z But I don't mix it with Christianity. My God and My Jesus will not be taken place of by some stupid cartoon character. I hope you realize that I'm trying not to be mean but I find this very offensive!
I respond: Like I said, I didn't mean this to be offensive to ANYONE. Honest, I didn't. I thought that if there were stories about Goku and ChiChi being angels, than it was certainly alright to place Gohan and Videl in this kind of situation. I respect your opinion, but you must admit, I do have freedom of speech. I can write anything I want to, when I want to, about whomever I want to. I agree, no cartoon character will ever take the place of God or Jesus, but this is not what I meant to say in this story. I am a Christian myself, but that doesn't mean I obsess over it. I don't mean to sound rude, but you do not have to read my story if the topic offends you. Please accept my apology, but I am standing firm. I will not take down my story, nor will I bash your head in because you gave me your honest opinion. I think it was very rightous of you to voice yourself, but I must ask you not to be so uptight. It is, after all, just a story. No harm has ever come from a story. Please do not continue to read if you will not review my story on a neutral religious basis.
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??? wrote: write more chapters please
I respond: Thank you so much for being kind. I will certainly post more chapters A.S.A.P. You can count on it!
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GRRRRRRRRRRRR@You wrote: I agree with both Bubbles and Mrs. Videl Son...... It's sick when you are so obsessed with DBZ that you would start having fantisies about Christ being born from a chartoon character. Like Mrs. Son said......Videl a frequent shopper???? SINCE WHEN????? HELLOOOOOOOOOOO V is NOT a girly girl!!! DON'T RUIN HER REP! Please take your satanic misleading and WRONG story off before some kid comes and reads this and starts getting bad ideas about their religion.
I respond: I think you're taking this a little too far. I am not "sick" nor do I "have fantasies about Christ and cartoon characters" just because I decide to post an original story. This idea just came to me one day when I was thinking about new stories and looking at my bookshelf which, might I add, has two copies of the bible on it. I am sorry if this offended you or anyone who has read it.
As I said in my response to Mrs. Videl Son's review, Videl was GROCERY shopping for herself and Gohan. I don't think going down to the local supermarket automatically makes one a "girly girl" as you so elegantly put it. I like Videl the way she is as much as you do. Please don't misjudge other people as quickly as you have misjudged me.
I do not in any way, shape, or form think my story is "satanic". I am a Christian and I believe in Christ, but I think this story is perfectly legitimate. I see nothing wrong with making a story like this when dozens have already been made about DBZ characters being the devil, or angels. Please take your flames elsewhere, as I have no need for comments from a brainless idiot. Perhaps I could give you a list of the other stories with cartoon characters bring angels, or the devil, or even God Himself so you could go and trashily review those, but I assure you it would not be a short list. Please forgive my rudeness, but I do not stand for unjustified comments such as yours.
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In conclusion, I WILL continue my story. I do, however, respect public opinion (when it is given kindly). If you, dear reader, so truely find my story offensive, I will take it down. Let me remind you, though, that it is a mere STORY, and you should treat it as such. I do not believe this truely happened, nor do I expect you to. that is why this site is FanFICTION. net. Fiction is not real. Please remember that.
I am truely hurt by your scathing comments. That is for sure. But I will NOT be bullied.
Please review.
Fanfictionally Yours,
Lady C.
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Mrs. Videl Son wrote: okay, Videl?...Shopping? A little OOC everyonce in a while is okay, but that's unforgivable!
I respond: I'm sorry I didn't specify, but this story takes place after Gohan and Videl get together. She was GROCERY shopping, not like the mall kind. I was trying to create a situation in which she'd be away from Gohan, and this seemed to be it. Sayains eat a lot, right? Again, I'm sorry if this threw you off of my story.
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bubbles wrote: I just finished reading your summary was offensive to me!I my self am I christian and I like dragonball z but you don't mix fantasy about my God and My savior!!!What your are trying to do is play out the birth of Jesus in DBZ and that's just wrong. Like I said I like Dragonball Z But I don't mix it with Christianity. My God and My Jesus will not be taken place of by some stupid cartoon character. I hope you realize that I'm trying not to be mean but I find this very offensive!
I respond: Like I said, I didn't mean this to be offensive to ANYONE. Honest, I didn't. I thought that if there were stories about Goku and ChiChi being angels, than it was certainly alright to place Gohan and Videl in this kind of situation. I respect your opinion, but you must admit, I do have freedom of speech. I can write anything I want to, when I want to, about whomever I want to. I agree, no cartoon character will ever take the place of God or Jesus, but this is not what I meant to say in this story. I am a Christian myself, but that doesn't mean I obsess over it. I don't mean to sound rude, but you do not have to read my story if the topic offends you. Please accept my apology, but I am standing firm. I will not take down my story, nor will I bash your head in because you gave me your honest opinion. I think it was very rightous of you to voice yourself, but I must ask you not to be so uptight. It is, after all, just a story. No harm has ever come from a story. Please do not continue to read if you will not review my story on a neutral religious basis.
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??? wrote: write more chapters please
I respond: Thank you so much for being kind. I will certainly post more chapters A.S.A.P. You can count on it!
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GRRRRRRRRRRRR@You wrote: I agree with both Bubbles and Mrs. Videl Son...... It's sick when you are so obsessed with DBZ that you would start having fantisies about Christ being born from a chartoon character. Like Mrs. Son said......Videl a frequent shopper???? SINCE WHEN????? HELLOOOOOOOOOOO V is NOT a girly girl!!! DON'T RUIN HER REP! Please take your satanic misleading and WRONG story off before some kid comes and reads this and starts getting bad ideas about their religion.
I respond: I think you're taking this a little too far. I am not "sick" nor do I "have fantasies about Christ and cartoon characters" just because I decide to post an original story. This idea just came to me one day when I was thinking about new stories and looking at my bookshelf which, might I add, has two copies of the bible on it. I am sorry if this offended you or anyone who has read it.
As I said in my response to Mrs. Videl Son's review, Videl was GROCERY shopping for herself and Gohan. I don't think going down to the local supermarket automatically makes one a "girly girl" as you so elegantly put it. I like Videl the way she is as much as you do. Please don't misjudge other people as quickly as you have misjudged me.
I do not in any way, shape, or form think my story is "satanic". I am a Christian and I believe in Christ, but I think this story is perfectly legitimate. I see nothing wrong with making a story like this when dozens have already been made about DBZ characters being the devil, or angels. Please take your flames elsewhere, as I have no need for comments from a brainless idiot. Perhaps I could give you a list of the other stories with cartoon characters bring angels, or the devil, or even God Himself so you could go and trashily review those, but I assure you it would not be a short list. Please forgive my rudeness, but I do not stand for unjustified comments such as yours.
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In conclusion, I WILL continue my story. I do, however, respect public opinion (when it is given kindly). If you, dear reader, so truely find my story offensive, I will take it down. Let me remind you, though, that it is a mere STORY, and you should treat it as such. I do not believe this truely happened, nor do I expect you to. that is why this site is FanFICTION. net. Fiction is not real. Please remember that.
I am truely hurt by your scathing comments. That is for sure. But I will NOT be bullied.
Please review.
Fanfictionally Yours,
Lady C.