Ugh, I am SUCH an idiot. (No comment please, GRRRRR@You. ^_^) I post THE single most controversial story I have ever written and get THE most reviews I have ever gotten at one time, and I don't post the second chapter for forever! All I can say (digging into my bag of wonderful excuses for ticked off but hopeful reviewers) is that I have been very busy. No, my grandmother didn't die, and I wasn't stricken by an uncureable illness, I've just been busy.
That sounds SO pathetic. o.O
Anyway, I'm gonna make up for it by posting extra-fast for the next rest-of-forever, o.k? Don't kill me yet...
I know you're all getting tired of this (^_^) but I'm gonna reply to my reviewers again. WAIT! Before you scream and run for the hills, I just want to say one thing to one person. The rest of you can just read the new chapter if you want.... It starts where the line of stars ends.
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To GRRR@You: I guess I picture the mall when I hear the word 'shop' too, maybe it's just a girly reflex. ^_^ Not calling you girly or anything, but we've all got it. Sorry for not specifying, but you have to admit. You could have been a little nicer.... I called you a (quote unquote) 'brainless idiot' because you had the nerve to bash my head in for writing a piece of fiction that I had no problem with. I thought others would find it as amusing as I did.
So sue me.
I happen to know people who can hack as well, and they have been excellent teachers. I probably know more than all of your friends put together, no offence meant. I also have my bio, stories, and reviews on a backup disk, so do not 'warn' me about something that I can fix with a snap of my fingers. Just a 'warning.' As you said yourself, a warning is harmless, no?
I have a problem with Britney Spears myself, and I have seen too many 14 year old girls with thongs hanging out of their so-low-it-should-be-illegal hiphuggers to not agree with you on the fact that she is a very bad influence. I agree with you completely on this.
Nothing is wrong with the term 'girly girl.' I simply did not like the way you used it.
I also think Maria S. had a very good point about maybe changing the title, but it amuses me way too much. The title stays. Maybe I will change God to the Earth's Guardian, I'll have to think about that one...
Overall, I don't think either of us had a very good first (or second, or third....^_^) impression of each other. Let's start over, and try to be a bit more civil, o.k?
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To all my wonderful reviewers (and even to the not-so-good ones ^_^): Thank you. I really, contrary to popular belief, enjoy reading your views. Try to boost my confidence, k? I don't think I've got so much anymore...:9 Also, this will NOT go along with the DBZ storyline, o.k? This will be after Majin Buu was defeated, and I will have Goku staying at home with Gohan and Goten and ChiChi. I don't know how the series ends, but this is how I WANT it to end, got it?! ^_^
Disclaimer: Nothing but the plot belongs to me. The characters don't, and neither do the places I talk about.
(I forgot this is the last chapter! DON'T SUE!! Actually, I don't have much. Only a few leftover Cheez-its (Yum. ^_^) and my computer. I WON'T LET YOU HAVE MY BETSY!! Umm,, Betsy is my computer, not my Cheez-its. I LOVE HER!! Take my squares of cheezy goodness, but not my Betsy!!)
Holy Jesus!
Chapter 3
"Look out Gohan!"
Goten winced from the sidelines as his beloved brother took another hit from his equally beloved Dad. Something didn't seem right with Gohan today... Luckily for Gohan, who wasn't doing too well in the practice sparring match, Goku seemed to notice it too.
"Oi, Gohan, you alright?"
The half-sayajin in question took this opportunity to smash his Dad into the ground with a particularly vicious blow to the head and stagger over to his baby brother for a drink of his Mom's famous lemonade. "Yeah Dad, I'm fine. I just feel wierd, is all..."
Goku grunted from his position in the dirt.
"Oh yeah..," Gohan laughed nervously, his hand behind his head, "Sorry 'bout that..."
His only answer was another grunt as Goku tried to remove the rock embedded in his solar plexus.
"Hey Gohan?" Goten asked.
Gohan ran a hand playfully through his sibling's already tousled hair before responding, earning an annoyed growl from his victim. "Yeah squirt?"
"Why hasn't Videl come over yet? She said she was gonna, but that was a while ago. D'ya think something happened to her?"
After getting over his original blush attack at the mention of Videl's name, he managed to answer Goten's question. "Boy, I sure hope not. Although, now that you mention it, I do have a bad feeling about her."
Goku shot up from his previous sitting position. "A feeling? You know what I told you about Sayaijn feelings Gohan... We don't get 'em for nothing."
"Yeah Dad, maybe you're right. Should I check on her?"
"Yes Gohan, I really think you should. I'll tell your mother where you are. She'll understand. In fact," He said with an evil glimmer in his eyes, "I think she'll be delighted when I tell her you went to check on your girlfriend..."
Gohan blushed from head to toe. "Daaaaddddd!" He whined, embarassed at his father's knowing smirk, "You wouldn't!"
"Oh yes I would! Come on Goten, I need to tell ChiChi something." He flew off towards home, laughing all the way. Goten followed behind him after reassuring his brother that he wouldn't let their Dad say TOO much, which wasn't very reassuring after all.
Gohan considered giving chase, but a voice inside his head stopped that train of thought in its tracks. It wasn't the I-am-your-long-lost-concience kind, either. In fact, it kind of sounded like....
Videl?!
*Please Gohan....Help me.....*
He growled at the pain and fear that laced through her voice and sped off, pinpointing her distinct ki along the way.
"I'm coming Videl. Just hold on..."
That sounds SO pathetic. o.O
Anyway, I'm gonna make up for it by posting extra-fast for the next rest-of-forever, o.k? Don't kill me yet...
I know you're all getting tired of this (^_^) but I'm gonna reply to my reviewers again. WAIT! Before you scream and run for the hills, I just want to say one thing to one person. The rest of you can just read the new chapter if you want.... It starts where the line of stars ends.
***********************************************************************
To GRRR@You: I guess I picture the mall when I hear the word 'shop' too, maybe it's just a girly reflex. ^_^ Not calling you girly or anything, but we've all got it. Sorry for not specifying, but you have to admit. You could have been a little nicer.... I called you a (quote unquote) 'brainless idiot' because you had the nerve to bash my head in for writing a piece of fiction that I had no problem with. I thought others would find it as amusing as I did.
So sue me.
I happen to know people who can hack as well, and they have been excellent teachers. I probably know more than all of your friends put together, no offence meant. I also have my bio, stories, and reviews on a backup disk, so do not 'warn' me about something that I can fix with a snap of my fingers. Just a 'warning.' As you said yourself, a warning is harmless, no?
I have a problem with Britney Spears myself, and I have seen too many 14 year old girls with thongs hanging out of their so-low-it-should-be-illegal hiphuggers to not agree with you on the fact that she is a very bad influence. I agree with you completely on this.
Nothing is wrong with the term 'girly girl.' I simply did not like the way you used it.
I also think Maria S. had a very good point about maybe changing the title, but it amuses me way too much. The title stays. Maybe I will change God to the Earth's Guardian, I'll have to think about that one...
Overall, I don't think either of us had a very good first (or second, or third....^_^) impression of each other. Let's start over, and try to be a bit more civil, o.k?
***********************************************************************
To all my wonderful reviewers (and even to the not-so-good ones ^_^): Thank you. I really, contrary to popular belief, enjoy reading your views. Try to boost my confidence, k? I don't think I've got so much anymore...:9 Also, this will NOT go along with the DBZ storyline, o.k? This will be after Majin Buu was defeated, and I will have Goku staying at home with Gohan and Goten and ChiChi. I don't know how the series ends, but this is how I WANT it to end, got it?! ^_^
Disclaimer: Nothing but the plot belongs to me. The characters don't, and neither do the places I talk about.
(I forgot this is the last chapter! DON'T SUE!! Actually, I don't have much. Only a few leftover Cheez-its (Yum. ^_^) and my computer. I WON'T LET YOU HAVE MY BETSY!! Umm,, Betsy is my computer, not my Cheez-its. I LOVE HER!! Take my squares of cheezy goodness, but not my Betsy!!)
Holy Jesus!
Chapter 3
"Look out Gohan!"
Goten winced from the sidelines as his beloved brother took another hit from his equally beloved Dad. Something didn't seem right with Gohan today... Luckily for Gohan, who wasn't doing too well in the practice sparring match, Goku seemed to notice it too.
"Oi, Gohan, you alright?"
The half-sayajin in question took this opportunity to smash his Dad into the ground with a particularly vicious blow to the head and stagger over to his baby brother for a drink of his Mom's famous lemonade. "Yeah Dad, I'm fine. I just feel wierd, is all..."
Goku grunted from his position in the dirt.
"Oh yeah..," Gohan laughed nervously, his hand behind his head, "Sorry 'bout that..."
His only answer was another grunt as Goku tried to remove the rock embedded in his solar plexus.
"Hey Gohan?" Goten asked.
Gohan ran a hand playfully through his sibling's already tousled hair before responding, earning an annoyed growl from his victim. "Yeah squirt?"
"Why hasn't Videl come over yet? She said she was gonna, but that was a while ago. D'ya think something happened to her?"
After getting over his original blush attack at the mention of Videl's name, he managed to answer Goten's question. "Boy, I sure hope not. Although, now that you mention it, I do have a bad feeling about her."
Goku shot up from his previous sitting position. "A feeling? You know what I told you about Sayaijn feelings Gohan... We don't get 'em for nothing."
"Yeah Dad, maybe you're right. Should I check on her?"
"Yes Gohan, I really think you should. I'll tell your mother where you are. She'll understand. In fact," He said with an evil glimmer in his eyes, "I think she'll be delighted when I tell her you went to check on your girlfriend..."
Gohan blushed from head to toe. "Daaaaddddd!" He whined, embarassed at his father's knowing smirk, "You wouldn't!"
"Oh yes I would! Come on Goten, I need to tell ChiChi something." He flew off towards home, laughing all the way. Goten followed behind him after reassuring his brother that he wouldn't let their Dad say TOO much, which wasn't very reassuring after all.
Gohan considered giving chase, but a voice inside his head stopped that train of thought in its tracks. It wasn't the I-am-your-long-lost-concience kind, either. In fact, it kind of sounded like....
Videl?!
*Please Gohan....Help me.....*
He growled at the pain and fear that laced through her voice and sped off, pinpointing her distinct ki along the way.
"I'm coming Videl. Just hold on..."