Well hello to all of you!! When I red all your reviews about my 2 other comedy fic(when a tensai tried to cook his breakfast, the boys go to a restaurant) I was happy because you really like it and I red very good comment so I tried to right another sequel to the 2 stories because I know you really like it. And I was enjoying writing comedy fic this time so I think its time to go on the story
But before that I want to thank sLL and tensaipaira for all the reviews you've given me!!!!
Mitsui and the Tooth Fairy
Mitsui: Ow! *rubs his cheek*
Kogure: What's wrong now?
Mitsui: I don't know! My tooth hurts!
Kogure: It looks like you'll have to go to the dentist.
Mitsui: *eyes widen* NOOOOOOOOOOOO-
~2 hours later~
Mitsui: -OOOOOOOO!!
*everyone blinks*
Kogure: Um… Ok. Let's go now.
Mitsui: NOO-
Anzai: *point him* Don't start that again… *glares*
Mitsui: *gulps* Yessir! *salutes*
Anzai: *rolls eyes*and laugh
Ryotaa: Ok, let's see… The nearest dentist is five blocks away…
~At the dentist's office~
Mitsui: *rocks back and forth in his seat* I'm scared… I'm scared…
Sakuragi: Hmph! The great "three point shooter" is scared of getting his tooth pulled out? Even though he went here to replace his 3 precious teeth!!!* and laugh*
Mitsui: shut up or I'll wring your roll neck! * look at sakuragi furiously*
Ryota: Baka.
A woman walks into the room and calls Mitsui's name. Everybody pushes him
forward.
Woman: The dentist is ready to see you Mr. Mitsui… *cough* Coffee House *cough*
Mitsui: What was that?
Woman: Chocolate mouse?
Mitsui: That's what I thought. *eats chocolate mouse*
*everybody eats chocolate mice……. I mean mouse*
Mitsui: *sits down in one of the chairs and looks at all the tools around him*
THEY'RE GONNA KILL MEEEEE!!!
~Outside~
Rukawa: I wonder if he's ok.
Inside they can hear Mitsui screaming.
Duo: Haruko?!?!?!?!?!?!
Everybody: Wha?!
MItsui: I said Ayako .
Everybody: That's what I thought.
~MItsui~
Mitsui: Y-y-you're the dentist?!
Ayako: Yes. Is something wrong?
Mitsui: Um… lemme think-YES!! *scrambles out of his seat*
Ayako: *straps him down* You're not going anywhere! Let's see that tooth of yours!
MItsui: Ahhhh!! *his mouth is pried open*
Ayako: Hmm… what the heck have you been eating?!
Mitsui: Oh nothing… Just some table scraps, donuts, , peanuts, coconuts, chocolate, more chocolate, pan cakes, staples, -
Ayako: …Staples?
Mitsui: A MAN HAS TO EAT YOU KNOW! Well actually I said maple… ssssssss…yrup for my PAN CAKES you know?
Ayako: Umm… whatever you say. *gases him*
Mitsui: Hey-
Ayako: *pulls out his tooth*
~With the others~
Rukawa: he's also a doaho.
Ryota: Why?
Rukawa: I don't know… I felt like saying that.
Ryota: *sweatdrop*
Akagi: What's taking so long?!
Sakuragi: Shut up GORI!!!.
Akagi: What did you say?
Sakuragi: Ketchup? *holds up a hot dog*
Akagii: That's what I thought… Yes please. *eats a hot dog*
*everybody eats hot dogs*
~Back with Mitsui~
Mitsui: *finally wakes up* Ugh… Where am I? Who am I? Why am I here? Who are-
Ayako: Be quiet already! You're at the tooth fairy's, you're MItsui, you have a cavity, and I'm Ayako!!!
Mitsui: … *blinks* Tooth fairy…?
Ayako: Er… yeah! If you put your tooth under your pillow then the tooth fairy will come and give you bananas! Everybody knows that!
Mitsui: Ohhhh, I see…
Ayako: No you don't.
MItsui: You're so right. Help! I'm outta here! *takes tooth and leaves*
Ayako: GIVE ME MY MONEEEEYYYY!!
*door slams shut*
~Outside~
Ryota: Hey, there's Mitsui ! How are you?
Mitsui: I'm ok. *grins and shows a missing tooth* I'm gonna get bananas tonight!
Akagi: Uh… bananas?
Mitsui: Yeah! If you put your tooth under your pillow then the tooth fairy will come and give you bananas! Everybody knows that!
Akagii: … Oh… yeah… yeah… I knew that… Of course I did.
Rukawa: No you didn't.
Sakuragi: Hush up!
Rukawa: What'd you say?
Sakuragii: Push-ups?
Rukawa: That's what I thought. *starts doing push-ups*
*everybody does push-ups*
Ruota: What was that about?
Mitsui: I don't know, but let's go! I want my bananas!
~At home~
Mitsui: *puts his tooth under his pillow* Now we have to wait for the tooth fairy!
Ryota: Yay!
Sakuragi: …Uh huh. Wake me in the morning. *goes to his room*
Ryota: Are you sure there's a tooth fairy?
Mitsui: Of course! Jeez Ryota! What are you going to say next?! "Are you sure a Santa Claus?"? Hahahahaha!
Ryota: …. Are you sure there's such thing as Santa Claus?
Mitsui: Hahahaha- Of course not. *falls asleep*
Sakuragi: *gets teary-eyed* There's not?
Rukawa: No. You're so naïve.
sakuragi: *sniffles* But-but… Then…
Rukawa: *whispers* Cry baby and a DOAHO!
Sakuragi: *stops sniffling* What was that?
Rukawa: Fly maybe? *swats the air*
Sakuragi: That's what I thought. *starts swatting the air also*
*everybody swats the air… even Mitsui while he's asleep*
~The next morning~
Mitsui: Look at all these bananas!!!! *eats one*
Akagi: *runs into the room* Nani?! How is this possible?!
Mitsui: Duh! The tooth fair you nerd! *keeps eating*
Ryota: I guess it's true after all…
SAkuragi & Rukawa: *walk in* What is?
Ryota: There are gnomes in the drawer. *runs out of the room screaming*
Mitsui: *munch munch* Hmmm…
Rukawa: Freaks.
Everyone: What did you say?
Rukawa: Weeks. It's been weeks since we've watched TV! *runs into the living room*
*everybody else follows him and watches TV*
authors note: akagi is also in the same house with the boys and the reason????????? Welll I don't know!!!
Why I choose ayako as the dentist? Because I like her and her character is exactly what I want to portray. And I didn't included here the scene when ayako has a paper fan in her clinic because its not suitable here in the story.
So how did you find this sequel to my 2 story??? Corny? Hilarious?? So what are you waiting for please review my work because I like reading many reviews and I really appreciate all the good and bad comments so please, REVIEW!!!!!!!!
Thanks, mitchi_girl