Here is ch.2. It's kind of like the second part of the intro (I didn't have
time to finish it) HP starts to come up.
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Everyone was about their normal business at the party ("You say you are moving, Mrs. Olam?... "Can I please have some candy, Betty?... "Don't worry Neville, I will help you clean up that spill."...) Until- "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" Both Amber and Naem screamed at the same time, but Naem louder because her hands were now on fire! Amber pushed Naem to the ground and started wiping her hand on the dirt. Naem took the hint and did it herself. Naem's mother started hugging her and Amber's mother brought a bucket of ice cold water for her to dip her hands in, Naem was crying but stopped a little when she put her hands in the bucket. "What happened?" Their mothers said at the same time, "Well mommy," Amber started "we were talking and getting food and as we were walking to the table I looked at Naem and then her plate just had a big fire in it like that! *Snaps fingers*" all the parents were thinking, Lexi finally spoke, "So you say the fire just appeared there, like magic?" the Olams (except Naem) coughed at the word. Amber nodded "why don't we call a dr. to look at my daughters hands?" Mr. Olam said breaking the unusual silence. The adults chorused in agreement, leaving Naem and Amber alone again. "I hate you" Naem said, "You hate me? Why?" Naem looked really mad "you did this to me, I know you did!!" Amber looked at Naem in utter astonishment "I saved your hands! You would have been waving them in the air, which by the way makes it worse, unless I hadn't helped you put it out! You only have minor burns because of me!" Naem looked smugger that ever "I still hate you, its lucky we are moving you know, wwaaayyy more north than here in Surry!" Amber sighed and walked away, but a thought popped into her head: Was Naem right? Did she, amber, did she star the fire? Amber held in her tears until all the guests left then ran to her room and cried silently. "Amber dear!" her mother called " time for your bath!" Amber grumbled to herself "okay mom!"
Amber started running the bath water when she saw the present Naem had given her: a sponge to wash with and a set of play make-up and fake nails. She threw the sponge into the 3/4 full tub then grabbed the set "ugh! What am I going to' do with this I hate this thing!" she glared at it and watched in horror as it burst into flames. Amber quickly dropped it into the tub before the fire reached her hands and then it hit her- she could set things on fire! What a power "I need to keep this a secret" she said emptying the tub that was filled with now dirty water and throwing away the present. "But that still doesn't explain why Naem was afraid of my glare. Oh well, it remains a mystery." and Amber proceeded with her bath.
Amber later found out that when she glared at someone you could see… it is hard to describe… like seeing fire flash in her eyes. It was strange, but scary. Hatred does have its consequences. But today was a normal day. The only difference is that it's 5 years later. And Amber was going to get the mail she brought it to her mother and then went outside on this beautiful Sat. morning. Amber climbed her usual tree and watched the birds. One large one was flying toward her she looked closely and saw it was- "an owl! Cool! Whoa it's flying close to me!" Amber gasped it landed in a branch right next to her holding an envelope. It dropped the letter in her lap and stayed there.
Amber opened the letter and began reading. "You have been accepted…. Hogwarts…. WHICHCRAFT AND WIZARDRY! What is this?!"
Ok hope ya liked it. Remember this is just the intro. Please review each ch. So if I make some mistakes I know where they are! I'll start demanding reviews later. Oh yeah and 1 question:
1. Should her name be Ember or Amber? Thanks!
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Everyone was about their normal business at the party ("You say you are moving, Mrs. Olam?... "Can I please have some candy, Betty?... "Don't worry Neville, I will help you clean up that spill."...) Until- "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" Both Amber and Naem screamed at the same time, but Naem louder because her hands were now on fire! Amber pushed Naem to the ground and started wiping her hand on the dirt. Naem took the hint and did it herself. Naem's mother started hugging her and Amber's mother brought a bucket of ice cold water for her to dip her hands in, Naem was crying but stopped a little when she put her hands in the bucket. "What happened?" Their mothers said at the same time, "Well mommy," Amber started "we were talking and getting food and as we were walking to the table I looked at Naem and then her plate just had a big fire in it like that! *Snaps fingers*" all the parents were thinking, Lexi finally spoke, "So you say the fire just appeared there, like magic?" the Olams (except Naem) coughed at the word. Amber nodded "why don't we call a dr. to look at my daughters hands?" Mr. Olam said breaking the unusual silence. The adults chorused in agreement, leaving Naem and Amber alone again. "I hate you" Naem said, "You hate me? Why?" Naem looked really mad "you did this to me, I know you did!!" Amber looked at Naem in utter astonishment "I saved your hands! You would have been waving them in the air, which by the way makes it worse, unless I hadn't helped you put it out! You only have minor burns because of me!" Naem looked smugger that ever "I still hate you, its lucky we are moving you know, wwaaayyy more north than here in Surry!" Amber sighed and walked away, but a thought popped into her head: Was Naem right? Did she, amber, did she star the fire? Amber held in her tears until all the guests left then ran to her room and cried silently. "Amber dear!" her mother called " time for your bath!" Amber grumbled to herself "okay mom!"
Amber started running the bath water when she saw the present Naem had given her: a sponge to wash with and a set of play make-up and fake nails. She threw the sponge into the 3/4 full tub then grabbed the set "ugh! What am I going to' do with this I hate this thing!" she glared at it and watched in horror as it burst into flames. Amber quickly dropped it into the tub before the fire reached her hands and then it hit her- she could set things on fire! What a power "I need to keep this a secret" she said emptying the tub that was filled with now dirty water and throwing away the present. "But that still doesn't explain why Naem was afraid of my glare. Oh well, it remains a mystery." and Amber proceeded with her bath.
Amber later found out that when she glared at someone you could see… it is hard to describe… like seeing fire flash in her eyes. It was strange, but scary. Hatred does have its consequences. But today was a normal day. The only difference is that it's 5 years later. And Amber was going to get the mail she brought it to her mother and then went outside on this beautiful Sat. morning. Amber climbed her usual tree and watched the birds. One large one was flying toward her she looked closely and saw it was- "an owl! Cool! Whoa it's flying close to me!" Amber gasped it landed in a branch right next to her holding an envelope. It dropped the letter in her lap and stayed there.
Amber opened the letter and began reading. "You have been accepted…. Hogwarts…. WHICHCRAFT AND WIZARDRY! What is this?!"
Ok hope ya liked it. Remember this is just the intro. Please review each ch. So if I make some mistakes I know where they are! I'll start demanding reviews later. Oh yeah and 1 question:
1. Should her name be Ember or Amber? Thanks!