Thank you for reviewing :)!
To Rachel, I liked your idea :). I would have probably used it, but I had already written the fourth chapter before I read your review, but thanks for the idea it was great :)
To Elizabeth, Yes I'm pretty new fanfic writer. I have written some fanfics, but I have never written a Friends fanfic. Glad you liked it. I remember my fist fanfic it sucked so badly... well my English was much worse and everything. I guess the saying practice makes perfect really is true :). God that sounded like I would be a very good writer... no way... I still need a lot of practice.
To Stephanie, Thank you for reviewing so many times *LOL*
To Lobster lover, Marie, ADVcatgirl@aol.com, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOU KIND WORDS :)
Chapter 4. "A random meeting"
That morning Ross woke up all sweaty. He had hardly slept at all. Everytime he closed his eyes the pictures of that strange woman came haunting back.
"What's wrong with me? Why can't I stop thinking about her?!" Ross cursed. He looked at his watch. It was only 7 am. He didn't have to go to work today,but he still decided to get up since he couldn't get any sleep anyway. He walked into the kitchen to got some fresh orange juice and started to read the paper. However he couldn't concentrate 'cause he still couldn't help but to think about that woman.
"Damn! What is going on!?" he yelled out loud. Then he got the paper and left to get showered and dressed. He figured that some fresh air might do the trick.
But it didn't help either. While he was reading in the park every little thing reminded him of her. One woman had the same jacket that she had been wearing, one woman had the same colored hair and one had the same sweet smile that she had had.
Ross tossed the paper into a trash can and started walking towards the "Central Perk". That was his fauvorite coffee house. He very often hang in there with his friends and his sister Monica.
"Maybe they are there too." he thought.
Meanwhile Rachel had already been up for a long time. She wanted to take a hotel since she now had the money for it, but she then realized that she couldn't sleep so she checked out very early.
She was now sitting in Central Park reading todays news paper which she had found in the trash can.
"Nothing in here!" she said and tossed it back where she had took it.
It just reminded her more of the hansom dark haired gentleman.
"I could use some strong cop of coffee." Rachel thought and looked around for a coffee place.
"Central perk." She read the sign. "Hmmm... sounds interesting."
(Author's note: saw that coming didn't ya? *LOL*... Damn I'm so predictable)
Ross was already in. He had just ordered a cop of coffee from Gunther. His friends weren't there right now and he was a bit dissapointed because of that. Gunther gave him his cappucino and he thanked him. Then he went to sit in his regular place at the couch.
Rachel rushed in not noticing Ross sitting there. She immediately went to order and as Gunther saw her he was charmed. Gunther had never seen such a beautiful sight before. Her smile made him shake all over.
"Cappucino, please." Rachel smiled sweetly which made Gunther melt inside.
"Co..coming ri..right away." he stuttered.
Meanwhile Ross wanted to go to the bathroom and stood up not noticing Rachel who had just gotten her cop of coffee and was now aheading to the couch. Neither of them noticed each other and they accidently bumbed into one another making Rachel's hot coffee fall all over Ross' white shirt.
"AUCH! SON OF A B****!!" Ross yelled as the hot coffee burned him.
"I'm sorry, I'm so..." Rachel looked up noticing very familiar pair of brown eyes. "sorry." she finished with a whisper and swallowed hard.
"YOU!?" Ross yelled."Why is it that everytime I run into you something bad happens!" he angrily stated.
"It was an accident!" Rachel stated back.
"No, more like a revenge! My money wasn't enough obviously! You want to see me suffer!" Ross tried to wipe the coffee away from his chest, but it didn't help the pain.
"No, no... I didn't plan for this. Come on let me help you." Rachel tried to wipe it away too, but it didn't help either. "We should go back to your place... I can help you with this. I once got my skin burned badly and I know what helps with the pain."
"Ok, but it better help!" Ross said a little calmer and they left. Gunther looking after them jealously.
"TOOTHPASTE!!!?? I have just burned my skin badly and you offer me TOOTHPASTE!?" Ross yelled.
"Well believe it or not it helps for the pain." Rachel grinned. "Now we must open this shirt." Rachel started to unbutton his shirt and the burning pain from the coffee was forgotten. Instead came a totally different kind of burning. The feel of her warm breath against his chest and the feel of her warm fingers touching his skin while she gently opened his shirt, button by button.
"Oh god." Rachel whispered when she saw his now little bit reddish chest. "I burned you badly, didn't I?".
"What?" Ross woke up from his daydream.
"I burned you badly... with the coffee I mean." Rachel repeated.
"Oh..." Ross nodded and looked at his reddish chest.
Rachel took some of the toothpaste in her hands and started to put it on his chest. Her every touch made him shiver.
They looked deeply into each others eyes as the silence became akward.
"Does it help?" Rachel finally broke the silence after which seemed like hours, but in fact was only two minutes.
"Yes it actually does help a little... thanks." Ross got up and smiled.
"It was the least I could do." Rachel smiled back. For awhile they just stared at each other.
"Well I think I better go now." Rachel again broke the silence and took her backpack from the chair.
"Yeah... but hey before you go could I at least ask you something." Ross grinned.
"Sure... Anything."
"This might sound silly, but What's your name?" Ross smiled and Rachel laughed a little.
"Yeah... I guess we haven't really introduced ourselves. How rude of me. Well I'm Rachel... Rachel Green." Rachel smiled sweetly and offered her hand to Ross.
"I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS!?" Ross then yelled shockedly leaving Rach very confused.
They say it's a river, that circles the Earth
A beam of light shinin' to the edge of the universe
It conquers all
It changes everything
They say it's a blessing
They say it's a gift
They say it's a miracle and I believe that it is
It conquers all
But it's a mystery
Love breaks your heart
Love takes no less than everything
Love makes it hard
And it fades away
So easily
(song by Vanessa Williams - Love is)
So that was kind of a cliff hanger... sorry :P
Rachel hope you liked the way I wrote it. New suggestions are of course always welcome and I might just use them. Also critism is welcome if you think I should've written somthing differently let me know :)
Ok, keep the reviews coming :)
To Rachel, I liked your idea :). I would have probably used it, but I had already written the fourth chapter before I read your review, but thanks for the idea it was great :)
To Elizabeth, Yes I'm pretty new fanfic writer. I have written some fanfics, but I have never written a Friends fanfic. Glad you liked it. I remember my fist fanfic it sucked so badly... well my English was much worse and everything. I guess the saying practice makes perfect really is true :). God that sounded like I would be a very good writer... no way... I still need a lot of practice.
To Stephanie, Thank you for reviewing so many times *LOL*
To Lobster lover, Marie, ADVcatgirl@aol.com, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOU KIND WORDS :)
Chapter 4. "A random meeting"
That morning Ross woke up all sweaty. He had hardly slept at all. Everytime he closed his eyes the pictures of that strange woman came haunting back.
"What's wrong with me? Why can't I stop thinking about her?!" Ross cursed. He looked at his watch. It was only 7 am. He didn't have to go to work today,but he still decided to get up since he couldn't get any sleep anyway. He walked into the kitchen to got some fresh orange juice and started to read the paper. However he couldn't concentrate 'cause he still couldn't help but to think about that woman.
"Damn! What is going on!?" he yelled out loud. Then he got the paper and left to get showered and dressed. He figured that some fresh air might do the trick.
But it didn't help either. While he was reading in the park every little thing reminded him of her. One woman had the same jacket that she had been wearing, one woman had the same colored hair and one had the same sweet smile that she had had.
Ross tossed the paper into a trash can and started walking towards the "Central Perk". That was his fauvorite coffee house. He very often hang in there with his friends and his sister Monica.
"Maybe they are there too." he thought.
Meanwhile Rachel had already been up for a long time. She wanted to take a hotel since she now had the money for it, but she then realized that she couldn't sleep so she checked out very early.
She was now sitting in Central Park reading todays news paper which she had found in the trash can.
"Nothing in here!" she said and tossed it back where she had took it.
It just reminded her more of the hansom dark haired gentleman.
"I could use some strong cop of coffee." Rachel thought and looked around for a coffee place.
"Central perk." She read the sign. "Hmmm... sounds interesting."
(Author's note: saw that coming didn't ya? *LOL*... Damn I'm so predictable)
Ross was already in. He had just ordered a cop of coffee from Gunther. His friends weren't there right now and he was a bit dissapointed because of that. Gunther gave him his cappucino and he thanked him. Then he went to sit in his regular place at the couch.
Rachel rushed in not noticing Ross sitting there. She immediately went to order and as Gunther saw her he was charmed. Gunther had never seen such a beautiful sight before. Her smile made him shake all over.
"Cappucino, please." Rachel smiled sweetly which made Gunther melt inside.
"Co..coming ri..right away." he stuttered.
Meanwhile Ross wanted to go to the bathroom and stood up not noticing Rachel who had just gotten her cop of coffee and was now aheading to the couch. Neither of them noticed each other and they accidently bumbed into one another making Rachel's hot coffee fall all over Ross' white shirt.
"AUCH! SON OF A B****!!" Ross yelled as the hot coffee burned him.
"I'm sorry, I'm so..." Rachel looked up noticing very familiar pair of brown eyes. "sorry." she finished with a whisper and swallowed hard.
"YOU!?" Ross yelled."Why is it that everytime I run into you something bad happens!" he angrily stated.
"It was an accident!" Rachel stated back.
"No, more like a revenge! My money wasn't enough obviously! You want to see me suffer!" Ross tried to wipe the coffee away from his chest, but it didn't help the pain.
"No, no... I didn't plan for this. Come on let me help you." Rachel tried to wipe it away too, but it didn't help either. "We should go back to your place... I can help you with this. I once got my skin burned badly and I know what helps with the pain."
"Ok, but it better help!" Ross said a little calmer and they left. Gunther looking after them jealously.
"TOOTHPASTE!!!?? I have just burned my skin badly and you offer me TOOTHPASTE!?" Ross yelled.
"Well believe it or not it helps for the pain." Rachel grinned. "Now we must open this shirt." Rachel started to unbutton his shirt and the burning pain from the coffee was forgotten. Instead came a totally different kind of burning. The feel of her warm breath against his chest and the feel of her warm fingers touching his skin while she gently opened his shirt, button by button.
"Oh god." Rachel whispered when she saw his now little bit reddish chest. "I burned you badly, didn't I?".
"What?" Ross woke up from his daydream.
"I burned you badly... with the coffee I mean." Rachel repeated.
"Oh..." Ross nodded and looked at his reddish chest.
Rachel took some of the toothpaste in her hands and started to put it on his chest. Her every touch made him shiver.
They looked deeply into each others eyes as the silence became akward.
"Does it help?" Rachel finally broke the silence after which seemed like hours, but in fact was only two minutes.
"Yes it actually does help a little... thanks." Ross got up and smiled.
"It was the least I could do." Rachel smiled back. For awhile they just stared at each other.
"Well I think I better go now." Rachel again broke the silence and took her backpack from the chair.
"Yeah... but hey before you go could I at least ask you something." Ross grinned.
"Sure... Anything."
"This might sound silly, but What's your name?" Ross smiled and Rachel laughed a little.
"Yeah... I guess we haven't really introduced ourselves. How rude of me. Well I'm Rachel... Rachel Green." Rachel smiled sweetly and offered her hand to Ross.
"I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS!?" Ross then yelled shockedly leaving Rach very confused.
They say it's a river, that circles the Earth
A beam of light shinin' to the edge of the universe
It conquers all
It changes everything
They say it's a blessing
They say it's a gift
They say it's a miracle and I believe that it is
It conquers all
But it's a mystery
Love breaks your heart
Love takes no less than everything
Love makes it hard
And it fades away
So easily
(song by Vanessa Williams - Love is)
So that was kind of a cliff hanger... sorry :P
Rachel hope you liked the way I wrote it. New suggestions are of course always welcome and I might just use them. Also critism is welcome if you think I should've written somthing differently let me know :)
Ok, keep the reviews coming :)