As if you couldn't tell, I don't have a spellchecker. At least what I'm aware of. Sorry, but typos happen, misspellings happen, grammar mistakes happen. I'm getting a B- in ADVANCED English, people, so I don't really see why it's such a big deal.
See, I'm typing fast so I can get this chapter out as soon as possible. I am very impatient and love getting reviews, and new chapters get reviews, and to get new chapters I have to type like the wind. See my delima? Did I spell that wrong? Geeez!.....^_^ we're okay.
Also, I'm starting to proofread my stories, and even though I do miss a few errors, there's no excuse, so I'm sorry I ruined the good karma of the story by making stupid mistakes.
=D
Anywho, Not many people are VOTING for a SONG, so we'll have that next chapter. I mean it, I want votes, people.So if you've already voted for a song, use a different name and vote again.(cheating is fun.) If you have not voted yet and have no clue as to what I'm talking about, see the blurb at the end of Chapa-ter 10.
The songs are still the same, yes. Adam's song, Up All Night, uhh...Ohya, or Deny. I am aware that some/most of you listen to mostly anime music, and I hate to sound mean, but if you don't know who BLINK 182 is, or DEFUALT, or even UN-FREAKIN-WRITTEN LAW is, then we need to diversify. ;)
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'Okay, so today went pretty good...' Yugi thought to himself. Yami was in a very good mood, and had no problem with nearly blowing out his speakers becuase Bowling For Soup was on the radio.
Brandon was in the backseat, and was singing along. He wasn't trying to sound good, like he did when the band performed.
The song came to an end and Yami turned the volume and bass down, the thumping sound was giving him a headache. But, he admited, it was a good headache. He ambsent-mindedly held onto the cross on the chain, and traced the tiny designs with his thumbnail.
The voice of the DJ came on, sounding unexpectedly serious. 'Okay, kids. There was a jail break at County Jail, and three of them are out right now. The cops are currently looking for them, so please get indoors as soon as possible, and stay there.'
Yugi looked at Yami, who looked at Yugi, and both looked paniced.Brandon bit his lip. "You don't think...Adrian was one of those guys, do you?" he said, wringing his hands. Yami looked back at the road. "No. I don't. Let's not worry about it, 'kay? I mean, what are the chances?"
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Yami was very pleased to walk up to his apartment door, not having Adrian leap out and kill him.
Yugi was still worried and Yami fished his pockets for the key to the door, and in his worry, he noticed something."Yami...The door isn't locked." he said. Yami looked at him, at the door, and reached out to grab the doorknob.
He turned it slowly, wondering why the door was unlocked. 'I could swear on my life I locked the door on my way out...' he thought, and pushed the door open.
Inside the apartment, everything looked just as the two had left it. There was Yugi's jacket on the floor, becuase Yugi never wanted to hang it up. The TV was off, the door to Yugi's room was slightly ajar, just like it always was.
Yami was about to go in, when Brandon came running up the stairs of the apartment to Yami. "Wait!You dropped your....keys..." he said, but was confused when he saw the door was already open. "D'you have a spare or something?" he asked, giving Yami his keys. Yugi gripped onto Yami. "I have a bad feeling about this, Yami..." he said.
Brandon luaghed and ruffled Yugi's hair. "Don't worry, little dude, I'll go check it out." And he walked into the barely lit apartment.
The silence that followed was deafining. There was the sound of Brandon running into the coffee table, but that was it.
Then there was a horrible sound. A loud blast, and a soft 'whump'. Yugi cried out when the blast sounded, and griped Yami harder.
Yami also jumped, and ran inside and flicked the lights on.
And there was Adrian, with a revolver in his hand, and Brandon on the floor."Ah, Yami!Happy birthday." he said, and shot Brandon again, and though Yami didn't know if Brandon was dead yet, he was pretty sure he was. "What do you think you're doing?" he said, hoping to God that Adrian didn't see Yugi at the door.
Unfortunently, he did, and he pointed the gun over Yami's shoudler."C'mere, Yugi." he said. Yugi squeeked and scooted into the room, shaking in fear, becuase he was looknig down the barrel of a gun. He then ran up and hugged onto Yami.
Adrian luaghed, but it was a shallow luagh. Then he pointed the gun at Yami, and Yugi closed his eyes tight.
The next few events happened slowly for Yugi. He remembered Adrian pullnig the trigger, and Yami cried out. Yugi didn't want to look, Yami might be dead.
Adrian then grabbed Yugi by the hair and held the gun to Yami's head."Listen, brat. If you struggle at all, I'll kill him." he said. Yugi opened his eyes, and saw Yami covering his side with his hand, and his blood was seeping through his fingers.
Yugi began to cry.'Please don't die, Yami, please...' he thought. He'd never seen Yami in so much pain, not ever. He nodded."Okay...Just don't hurt Yami..." he said, his voice shaking.
Adrian smiled. "Good boy." and he shot Brandon's lifeless body again. "Now, go wait for me in your room, Yugi, we're going to have so much fun..."
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Stardust:Oooooh....
Orion:Oh my God.
867-5309:Song?
See, I'm typing fast so I can get this chapter out as soon as possible. I am very impatient and love getting reviews, and new chapters get reviews, and to get new chapters I have to type like the wind. See my delima? Did I spell that wrong? Geeez!.....^_^ we're okay.
Also, I'm starting to proofread my stories, and even though I do miss a few errors, there's no excuse, so I'm sorry I ruined the good karma of the story by making stupid mistakes.
=D
Anywho, Not many people are VOTING for a SONG, so we'll have that next chapter. I mean it, I want votes, people.So if you've already voted for a song, use a different name and vote again.(cheating is fun.) If you have not voted yet and have no clue as to what I'm talking about, see the blurb at the end of Chapa-ter 10.
The songs are still the same, yes. Adam's song, Up All Night, uhh...Ohya, or Deny. I am aware that some/most of you listen to mostly anime music, and I hate to sound mean, but if you don't know who BLINK 182 is, or DEFUALT, or even UN-FREAKIN-WRITTEN LAW is, then we need to diversify. ;)
---
'Okay, so today went pretty good...' Yugi thought to himself. Yami was in a very good mood, and had no problem with nearly blowing out his speakers becuase Bowling For Soup was on the radio.
Brandon was in the backseat, and was singing along. He wasn't trying to sound good, like he did when the band performed.
The song came to an end and Yami turned the volume and bass down, the thumping sound was giving him a headache. But, he admited, it was a good headache. He ambsent-mindedly held onto the cross on the chain, and traced the tiny designs with his thumbnail.
The voice of the DJ came on, sounding unexpectedly serious. 'Okay, kids. There was a jail break at County Jail, and three of them are out right now. The cops are currently looking for them, so please get indoors as soon as possible, and stay there.'
Yugi looked at Yami, who looked at Yugi, and both looked paniced.Brandon bit his lip. "You don't think...Adrian was one of those guys, do you?" he said, wringing his hands. Yami looked back at the road. "No. I don't. Let's not worry about it, 'kay? I mean, what are the chances?"
---
Yami was very pleased to walk up to his apartment door, not having Adrian leap out and kill him.
Yugi was still worried and Yami fished his pockets for the key to the door, and in his worry, he noticed something."Yami...The door isn't locked." he said. Yami looked at him, at the door, and reached out to grab the doorknob.
He turned it slowly, wondering why the door was unlocked. 'I could swear on my life I locked the door on my way out...' he thought, and pushed the door open.
Inside the apartment, everything looked just as the two had left it. There was Yugi's jacket on the floor, becuase Yugi never wanted to hang it up. The TV was off, the door to Yugi's room was slightly ajar, just like it always was.
Yami was about to go in, when Brandon came running up the stairs of the apartment to Yami. "Wait!You dropped your....keys..." he said, but was confused when he saw the door was already open. "D'you have a spare or something?" he asked, giving Yami his keys. Yugi gripped onto Yami. "I have a bad feeling about this, Yami..." he said.
Brandon luaghed and ruffled Yugi's hair. "Don't worry, little dude, I'll go check it out." And he walked into the barely lit apartment.
The silence that followed was deafining. There was the sound of Brandon running into the coffee table, but that was it.
Then there was a horrible sound. A loud blast, and a soft 'whump'. Yugi cried out when the blast sounded, and griped Yami harder.
Yami also jumped, and ran inside and flicked the lights on.
And there was Adrian, with a revolver in his hand, and Brandon on the floor."Ah, Yami!Happy birthday." he said, and shot Brandon again, and though Yami didn't know if Brandon was dead yet, he was pretty sure he was. "What do you think you're doing?" he said, hoping to God that Adrian didn't see Yugi at the door.
Unfortunently, he did, and he pointed the gun over Yami's shoudler."C'mere, Yugi." he said. Yugi squeeked and scooted into the room, shaking in fear, becuase he was looknig down the barrel of a gun. He then ran up and hugged onto Yami.
Adrian luaghed, but it was a shallow luagh. Then he pointed the gun at Yami, and Yugi closed his eyes tight.
The next few events happened slowly for Yugi. He remembered Adrian pullnig the trigger, and Yami cried out. Yugi didn't want to look, Yami might be dead.
Adrian then grabbed Yugi by the hair and held the gun to Yami's head."Listen, brat. If you struggle at all, I'll kill him." he said. Yugi opened his eyes, and saw Yami covering his side with his hand, and his blood was seeping through his fingers.
Yugi began to cry.'Please don't die, Yami, please...' he thought. He'd never seen Yami in so much pain, not ever. He nodded."Okay...Just don't hurt Yami..." he said, his voice shaking.
Adrian smiled. "Good boy." and he shot Brandon's lifeless body again. "Now, go wait for me in your room, Yugi, we're going to have so much fun..."
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Stardust:Oooooh....
Orion:Oh my God.
867-5309:Song?