Well, major thanks go out to my buddy Chiang (Eternal Guardian Lena),
Minaka, and Spellcasta, and everyone else who reviewed. It means a lot to
me. As you've all probably noticed, I'm not that good with writing
dialogue, details and actions, I'm pretty good at, but I hate dialogue. I'm
doing the best I can. Here is chap 3 and keep the reviews coming! The more
I get the faster I write. Hehe. Oh, if you like horror stories (original,
not based off anime or anything) I'll be posting one of my works sometime
in the next 2 weeks, I'd love to get some reviews for that. Well, on with
the story.
~* Kalibos *~
"Princess?? I'm no princess." Saori said to the dark figure.
"You are the daughter of Tiara, are you not?"
"Yes I am, but..."
"But she is no princess, she has no manners!" Laika said finishing Saori's sentence.
"Hey, I resent that!"
"Enough! You are the princess and you shall die!" Kalibos yelled as he charged at Saori.
Laika screamed as Saori simply glared and stood her ground. Kalibos' sword was raised to slice the girl in half, but she quickly pulled out her dagger and blocked the attack. He pulled his sword back and Saori slashed at his chest, leaving a gash in his shirt. Kalibos jumped back, surprised by the aggression shown by the princess. He brought his hand up to his sliced shirt as a low growl escaped from his lips. Saori stood with her dagger in hand, she knew he was evil but she couldn't help but notice how handsome he looked in the moonlight. His black hair seemed almost navy blue in the light and his grey eyes were so focused on her, she couldn't help but slightly blush. She shook the thoughts away and prepared to defend herself against an attack.
"Not bad princess, but not good enough!" He yelled as he charged at her again.
This time she jumped to the side, avoiding the attack. Laika yelled for Saori and Kalibos' attention turned to her.
"Well princess, if I can't get you, your friend will just have to do!"
Laika screamed as he charged at her, full speed. Saori quickly rammed into Kalibos, sending both of them rolling. She quickly got up and punched him in the stomach. He gasped for breath then swept her feet out from under her. She laid on the ground, disorientated while he raised the sword up, ready to stab.
"No!" Laika screamed, her eyes shutting tightly. The lake started to glow a light purple and Kalibos turned his attention to the lake. Saori took that time to kick him, sending him falling into the lake. Before he fell he grabbed her ankle, pulling her in with him.
"Laika!!" Saori screamed before she disappeared into the dark abyss.
-*- Well, that was kinda short, I'll probably write the next chapter tonight and post it tomorrow. Please review!!
~* Kalibos *~
"Princess?? I'm no princess." Saori said to the dark figure.
"You are the daughter of Tiara, are you not?"
"Yes I am, but..."
"But she is no princess, she has no manners!" Laika said finishing Saori's sentence.
"Hey, I resent that!"
"Enough! You are the princess and you shall die!" Kalibos yelled as he charged at Saori.
Laika screamed as Saori simply glared and stood her ground. Kalibos' sword was raised to slice the girl in half, but she quickly pulled out her dagger and blocked the attack. He pulled his sword back and Saori slashed at his chest, leaving a gash in his shirt. Kalibos jumped back, surprised by the aggression shown by the princess. He brought his hand up to his sliced shirt as a low growl escaped from his lips. Saori stood with her dagger in hand, she knew he was evil but she couldn't help but notice how handsome he looked in the moonlight. His black hair seemed almost navy blue in the light and his grey eyes were so focused on her, she couldn't help but slightly blush. She shook the thoughts away and prepared to defend herself against an attack.
"Not bad princess, but not good enough!" He yelled as he charged at her again.
This time she jumped to the side, avoiding the attack. Laika yelled for Saori and Kalibos' attention turned to her.
"Well princess, if I can't get you, your friend will just have to do!"
Laika screamed as he charged at her, full speed. Saori quickly rammed into Kalibos, sending both of them rolling. She quickly got up and punched him in the stomach. He gasped for breath then swept her feet out from under her. She laid on the ground, disorientated while he raised the sword up, ready to stab.
"No!" Laika screamed, her eyes shutting tightly. The lake started to glow a light purple and Kalibos turned his attention to the lake. Saori took that time to kick him, sending him falling into the lake. Before he fell he grabbed her ankle, pulling her in with him.
"Laika!!" Saori screamed before she disappeared into the dark abyss.
-*- Well, that was kinda short, I'll probably write the next chapter tonight and post it tomorrow. Please review!!