Ok, I know everyone says I should make longer chapters, but the thing is,
I'm having writer's block recently and it takes me a while to write this,
plus I'm in marching band and I haven't really had time recently to write.
So I'm very sorry. But yea, I'll ask a question and we'll see what you guys
want.
Shorter chapters but more frequent Long chapters but less frequent You suck, stop writing.
So yea it's up to you guys and I absolutely love the review. The more reviews the more I want to write. So it's a mutual thing. I love all of you and don't forget to read ShamanicGuardianLena's work. It's very good. Well, keep the reviews coming and here's the next chap.
"Belle!" Saori yelled.
"Who is Belle?" Kalibos asked but there was no response. Saori was running at full speed towards the house. A shrill scream echoed in the darkness and Saori's heart jumped at the sound. She couldn't hear the yells of her friends behind her; all she could hear was Belle's cries. Saori ran through the burnt door and looked frantically for the girl. "Belle?!" She yelled, "Belle!?" Tears started to fall down her face. Saori knew that she was the cause of all this and she would be damned if that innocent child was killed. She yelled the girls name but abruptly turned at the sound behind her.
"Has she gone insane?" Kalibos asked to no one in particular. "Saori" he yelled. He heard it again, the screams of a little girl. He stared at the rapidly burning cottage, unable to move, fearing the worst for the woman he cared for.
"Nina." Saori said as she looked at the tiger lying on the floor. Saori coughed as the smoke filled her lungs. The smoke was pitch black and the heat was unbearable. She looked around then screamed as a tile from the ceiling fell and hit her head. All she could see was darkness before she collapsed to the floor.
His heart leapt at the sound; Saori's scream. Kalibos ran as fast as he could towards the sound. He almost lost her once, he wouldn't lose her now. He pushed through the fallen debris, calling her name. He looked around frantically then spotted her. She was lying on the ground holding a tiger. He ran to her and picked her up and cradled her. "Laika, help me!" Laika ran in, fear in her eyes. She looked at Saori's limp form and began to cry. "Cry later, get the tiger." She nodded then picked up the tiger. They ran out of the burning cottage, avoiding the pieces of falling ceiling. Away from the cottage Kalibos laid Saori down and looked at her weak form. "Saori, wake up" he begged, but to no avail. She lay still not breathing. Tears started to fall from his eyes as he looked at her. Behind him Laika was crying as well, still holding the tiger. Kalibos wiped his tears then covered her nose and pressed his lips against hers. He breathed in then pushed down on the center of her chest, silently begging her to breath. He repeated this several times until he heard her gasp. He looked at her as she sat up, coughing. She looked around, dizzy and confused. Her memory hit her and she yelled for Belle. She got up to run towards the cottage but was stopped by strong arms around her waist.
"If you go back there you'll die!" Kalibos yelled. "I have to save her!" "You can't go! It's not your fault. Saori she's gone." "No.." she muttered as she cried. She turned and buried her face in his chest while he held her. Her mind flashed pictures of belle dancing and smiling, which made Saori cry harder. "I failed her. I failed everyone." "You haven't failed me." Kalibos said as he looked into her eyes. She smiled briefly then looked at Laika who was still crying. She walked to her friend and embraced her in a hug. "I thought we lost you again." Laika said. "I'm here." Saori looked down at Nina who was alive but unconscious. She picked up the tiger and held her. "Who is she?" Laika asked. "Nina. a member of their family. She will stay with us." Neither Kalibos nor Laika argued. They looked at the cottage once more than walked into the night.
~*~ Short, I know but better then nothing. I hope you liked the Saori/Kalibos interaction, I sure did. Hehe. I have drawings of Saori and Laika but they are used of a template of someone else's. so I'm gonna be making my own template then drawing them. So when I'm done with that I may put it on a site. So that'll be kewl to get a visual of them. Well, ja!
Shorter chapters but more frequent Long chapters but less frequent You suck, stop writing.
So yea it's up to you guys and I absolutely love the review. The more reviews the more I want to write. So it's a mutual thing. I love all of you and don't forget to read ShamanicGuardianLena's work. It's very good. Well, keep the reviews coming and here's the next chap.
"Belle!" Saori yelled.
"Who is Belle?" Kalibos asked but there was no response. Saori was running at full speed towards the house. A shrill scream echoed in the darkness and Saori's heart jumped at the sound. She couldn't hear the yells of her friends behind her; all she could hear was Belle's cries. Saori ran through the burnt door and looked frantically for the girl. "Belle?!" She yelled, "Belle!?" Tears started to fall down her face. Saori knew that she was the cause of all this and she would be damned if that innocent child was killed. She yelled the girls name but abruptly turned at the sound behind her.
"Has she gone insane?" Kalibos asked to no one in particular. "Saori" he yelled. He heard it again, the screams of a little girl. He stared at the rapidly burning cottage, unable to move, fearing the worst for the woman he cared for.
"Nina." Saori said as she looked at the tiger lying on the floor. Saori coughed as the smoke filled her lungs. The smoke was pitch black and the heat was unbearable. She looked around then screamed as a tile from the ceiling fell and hit her head. All she could see was darkness before she collapsed to the floor.
His heart leapt at the sound; Saori's scream. Kalibos ran as fast as he could towards the sound. He almost lost her once, he wouldn't lose her now. He pushed through the fallen debris, calling her name. He looked around frantically then spotted her. She was lying on the ground holding a tiger. He ran to her and picked her up and cradled her. "Laika, help me!" Laika ran in, fear in her eyes. She looked at Saori's limp form and began to cry. "Cry later, get the tiger." She nodded then picked up the tiger. They ran out of the burning cottage, avoiding the pieces of falling ceiling. Away from the cottage Kalibos laid Saori down and looked at her weak form. "Saori, wake up" he begged, but to no avail. She lay still not breathing. Tears started to fall from his eyes as he looked at her. Behind him Laika was crying as well, still holding the tiger. Kalibos wiped his tears then covered her nose and pressed his lips against hers. He breathed in then pushed down on the center of her chest, silently begging her to breath. He repeated this several times until he heard her gasp. He looked at her as she sat up, coughing. She looked around, dizzy and confused. Her memory hit her and she yelled for Belle. She got up to run towards the cottage but was stopped by strong arms around her waist.
"If you go back there you'll die!" Kalibos yelled. "I have to save her!" "You can't go! It's not your fault. Saori she's gone." "No.." she muttered as she cried. She turned and buried her face in his chest while he held her. Her mind flashed pictures of belle dancing and smiling, which made Saori cry harder. "I failed her. I failed everyone." "You haven't failed me." Kalibos said as he looked into her eyes. She smiled briefly then looked at Laika who was still crying. She walked to her friend and embraced her in a hug. "I thought we lost you again." Laika said. "I'm here." Saori looked down at Nina who was alive but unconscious. She picked up the tiger and held her. "Who is she?" Laika asked. "Nina. a member of their family. She will stay with us." Neither Kalibos nor Laika argued. They looked at the cottage once more than walked into the night.
~*~ Short, I know but better then nothing. I hope you liked the Saori/Kalibos interaction, I sure did. Hehe. I have drawings of Saori and Laika but they are used of a template of someone else's. so I'm gonna be making my own template then drawing them. So when I'm done with that I may put it on a site. So that'll be kewl to get a visual of them. Well, ja!