Disclaimer: I don't own Lita or Duo or any other cartoon characters that
may be in this story. Don't sue me cos I'm broke anyway.
Hi again! Thanks to everyone who read this story reviewed and voted! I means so much to me to know what you guys think and it really helps me to get motivated to write, so keep that in mind if you read any of my other stories.
A big 'THANK YOU' to Bluejello for this idea as I was trying to think of a good way to finish this and this idea is better than any that I had come up with. Also thank you to anyone else who tried to help. Thank-you so much!
And now on with the story!
One week later~
Duo stood alone in the desolate graveyard, as the cold rain was driven at him by the wind, stinging his bare arms but he paid no attention to it as he stared at the gravestone in front of him. A sad smile graced his lips, as he looked yet again at the inscription in the cold stone. It had been at his request that her parents had written it.
Lita Maxwell 14/1/1983-22/1/2002 A Shooting Star Although her life was short, while she was here she lit up the lives of all around her.
Then underneath that:
She will be dearly missed by her parents, friends and all who knew her.
"I'm sorry Lita." Duo whispered softly but his words were gone so quickly, carried away by the wind like the one he had loved. "I'm sorry that I wasn't there for you. I can't here for you any longer. I can't stand it," he continued just as softly the tears began to silently stream down his face. They too went unnoticed as they mixed with the rain making it impossible to tell that he was crying. "Every where I go I'm reminded of you! I loved you so much and now you're gone. I can't take these memories popping up every day. They're everywhere and I can't escape them. So I'm leaving, I have to. Everyone keep on telling me to get on with my life and I can't do that here."
He walked forward and placed a single purple pansy on the grave, amongst the many other flowers. He stepped back again, water dripping down his face, his long braid soaked with rain.
He turned to leave then as an after thought turned back and whispered, "Good-bye Lita, my angel, I'll always love you." With that Duo gave way to the emotions that had been threatening to take over and fell to his knees. Duo stayed there for quite awhile, his face buried in his hands and his braid trailing in mud as his whole body was racked by his sobs. "I love you. I love you," he repeated over and over through his tears, as thought saying it would bring her back but he knew that is wouldn't.
Suddenly Duo felt the rain stop and a hand placed on his shoulder. He looked up, tears staining his face, to see Lita's friend Mina holding an umbrella over them both. I'm leaving he said bluntly, and with that he left, leaving the town forever.
Mina stood alone as she watched him go, confused that he had been so nasty towards her. And no one noticed the solitary purple flower take flight towards the heavens, swept away by the vicious wind.
Well, hope that makes people happy, although it's more likely to make them sad as I was nearly crying as I wrote it. Poor Duo!
Please review! I want to know what people thought. Thanks again to Bluejello.
If anyone is still confused or wants and explanation of how this story came to be cos it might seem kind of confusing with out it then review and tell me or you can e-mail me.
Bye Lita.
Hi again! Thanks to everyone who read this story reviewed and voted! I means so much to me to know what you guys think and it really helps me to get motivated to write, so keep that in mind if you read any of my other stories.
A big 'THANK YOU' to Bluejello for this idea as I was trying to think of a good way to finish this and this idea is better than any that I had come up with. Also thank you to anyone else who tried to help. Thank-you so much!
And now on with the story!
One week later~
Duo stood alone in the desolate graveyard, as the cold rain was driven at him by the wind, stinging his bare arms but he paid no attention to it as he stared at the gravestone in front of him. A sad smile graced his lips, as he looked yet again at the inscription in the cold stone. It had been at his request that her parents had written it.
Lita Maxwell 14/1/1983-22/1/2002 A Shooting Star Although her life was short, while she was here she lit up the lives of all around her.
Then underneath that:
She will be dearly missed by her parents, friends and all who knew her.
"I'm sorry Lita." Duo whispered softly but his words were gone so quickly, carried away by the wind like the one he had loved. "I'm sorry that I wasn't there for you. I can't here for you any longer. I can't stand it," he continued just as softly the tears began to silently stream down his face. They too went unnoticed as they mixed with the rain making it impossible to tell that he was crying. "Every where I go I'm reminded of you! I loved you so much and now you're gone. I can't take these memories popping up every day. They're everywhere and I can't escape them. So I'm leaving, I have to. Everyone keep on telling me to get on with my life and I can't do that here."
He walked forward and placed a single purple pansy on the grave, amongst the many other flowers. He stepped back again, water dripping down his face, his long braid soaked with rain.
He turned to leave then as an after thought turned back and whispered, "Good-bye Lita, my angel, I'll always love you." With that Duo gave way to the emotions that had been threatening to take over and fell to his knees. Duo stayed there for quite awhile, his face buried in his hands and his braid trailing in mud as his whole body was racked by his sobs. "I love you. I love you," he repeated over and over through his tears, as thought saying it would bring her back but he knew that is wouldn't.
Suddenly Duo felt the rain stop and a hand placed on his shoulder. He looked up, tears staining his face, to see Lita's friend Mina holding an umbrella over them both. I'm leaving he said bluntly, and with that he left, leaving the town forever.
Mina stood alone as she watched him go, confused that he had been so nasty towards her. And no one noticed the solitary purple flower take flight towards the heavens, swept away by the vicious wind.
Well, hope that makes people happy, although it's more likely to make them sad as I was nearly crying as I wrote it. Poor Duo!
Please review! I want to know what people thought. Thanks again to Bluejello.
If anyone is still confused or wants and explanation of how this story came to be cos it might seem kind of confusing with out it then review and tell me or you can e-mail me.
Bye Lita.