Little Sister
Ch 8
*Original ending*
Nikki felt her knees go week as he walked straight up to her and stained two inches from her.
Nikki, "Well it was just a kiss, I thought we were going to die!" she said then turned around to walk away.
Johnny grabbed her arm, "Were dieing every day" he said than pulled her in for a kiss.
Val, "Oh happy ending, how I love them" she said grabbing her coffee.
Kay, "Tousha you owe me ten bucks."
Tousha, "oh what's that, Kay your moms calling you."
Kay, "Ha-ha"
Camera zooms out of bay window and into the streets.
And in the end Mara stayed living with her grandpa and visiting with Nikki and the gang almost everyday. The man who killed Mara's mom was sentenced to life in prison.
So what do you think? Was it one of my best or worst fics? Thanks for reading it! LiLHeatherD
Ch 8
*Original ending*
Nikki felt her knees go week as he walked straight up to her and stained two inches from her.
Nikki, "Well it was just a kiss, I thought we were going to die!" she said then turned around to walk away.
Johnny grabbed her arm, "Were dieing every day" he said than pulled her in for a kiss.
Val, "Oh happy ending, how I love them" she said grabbing her coffee.
Kay, "Tousha you owe me ten bucks."
Tousha, "oh what's that, Kay your moms calling you."
Kay, "Ha-ha"
Camera zooms out of bay window and into the streets.
And in the end Mara stayed living with her grandpa and visiting with Nikki and the gang almost everyday. The man who killed Mara's mom was sentenced to life in prison.
So what do you think? Was it one of my best or worst fics? Thanks for reading it! LiLHeatherD