Hi sorry about chapter 2 not fully loading.
I figured out what wasen't working and it will never happen again. promise!
Special thanks to Enzeru No Yami, if he haden't told me something wasen't write with chapter 2
you guys would still be looking at the intro.
The person to review last chapter first was.... Enzeru No Yami! yes, this guy was on a role that day.
Chapter 3
Problems
She had been very gentle and the pain had been the minimum you could expect, with the amount of injuries he had.
She had then hand fed him food.
Life would have been close to perfect if he hadn't leurned about the misfortunate break-up that the girl had just gone trou. She started talking about it while feeding him. By her tone of voice and mannerism, he could tell that she was a tad more then just sad about what had happened, she was devastated.
He came to the conclusion that she would not, in her present state, react in a for him, positive way, if she all of a sudden found a naked guy in her flat, in the dead of night. Actually, in any state of mind, that would probably be hard to take in a good way.
The problem was, he was to weak to leave the place, he badly needed the rest and this could be the only place, the only chans, the only sanctuary he would find.
He could hide… maybe? Could he pull that of for, maybe a week? Would he be ok until then? That was a question he could ponder AFTER he survived the first night, he decided.
It was just after two in the morning and Van wondered if the girl would ever decide to go to bed. He was lying on his back, in her arms, like a baby.
Had he not felt so tired, he would have found it a bit embarrassing.
A few minutes later he felt completely awake. He could feel a light pain in hi muscles. The first sign that he was changing back into a human!
"Oh, damn!" Was a good way of summarising the situation.
"Ok, what would a cute little cat do in this situation?" The trick would have to be, to get away from the girl, make her give up on him for the night and then run and hide.
His mind was blank to what a cat would do to get that result.
"Okokokok, I'm just a bit stressed. That's it! Yeah, all I have to do is calm down. BreathInBreathOut, BreathInBreathOut, BreathIn, damn, not working. Ok I know! Find the cat in me. Become one with the cat. FEEL the cat. Don't just act the cat, BE the cat. I can do this. I am one with the cat. I am one with the cat. So, would "I" the cute cat do?"
He looked up at hitomi and tried to look pleading and cute at the same time, but she didn't see…
"Ok, sound effects! That always works in the movies." He tried sounding like a cat a few times.
Well, it did kind of work. The girl stuffed his mouth full of food, figuring that he was still hungry.
"Eeh, not what I was hoping for… I hope I don't choke, that was a big chunk of food."
Next plan, pawing and mjouwing.
Van tried turning so he wasn't facing the body. No luck, he wasn't budging a millimetre. Not good! The only thing he could reach from here was one of her breast's!
"I can't paw one of her breast's! I completely refuse! I don't even know her!" He was getting red cheeks just thinking about it.
"I'll just end it here and change infront of her. Yeah, that's right. Won't be that bad. I'll just lie here in her lap and wait for it. "
A picture formed in his mind of him in human form, lying on her lap, butt naked, made him change his mind again.
"I can't believe I'm doing this! I feel like a total hentai." Stretching out his paw, he mjoued a bit, just for good measure. She didn't look angry or any of the things, he had decided would show in her face.
She looked like what he was doing was nothing out of the ordinary. Well, he WAS a cat. But the question now was, for how much longer.
Hitomi had by now figured out that the cute little cat of hers, didn't want to be in her lap anymore. So, she loosened her grip. He was free to run and hide somewhere.
She was running after, to check that he didn't go someplace where he would get hurt.
He leaped into a room, There was a bed and clothing where all over the place. But it looked like they hadn't been there very long.
"Ok, great you ran into her bedroom!" one of her wardrobes doors was open.
"it's that or under the bed. Hiding under the bed gives me bad vibes. Well, here goes nothing." In his last leap into the wardrobe, he could feel his body growing longer and the cramps kicking in.
He surprised himself with not screaming out in pain. The time it took, not more then a minute, felt like for ever. By the time he could breath again, the girl was in the room and had given up. She'd changed into a silk nightshift in a creamy whit colour.
"Well, if pawing her breast wasn't going over the line to being a hentai, this will definitely do it…"
She jumped into the bed, switched of the light and said "night cat, sleep tight!"
Well, that's all for this chapter. tell me what you think! common, I dare you! ;-)
I figured out what wasen't working and it will never happen again. promise!
Special thanks to Enzeru No Yami, if he haden't told me something wasen't write with chapter 2
you guys would still be looking at the intro.
The person to review last chapter first was.... Enzeru No Yami! yes, this guy was on a role that day.
Chapter 3
Problems
She had been very gentle and the pain had been the minimum you could expect, with the amount of injuries he had.
She had then hand fed him food.
Life would have been close to perfect if he hadn't leurned about the misfortunate break-up that the girl had just gone trou. She started talking about it while feeding him. By her tone of voice and mannerism, he could tell that she was a tad more then just sad about what had happened, she was devastated.
He came to the conclusion that she would not, in her present state, react in a for him, positive way, if she all of a sudden found a naked guy in her flat, in the dead of night. Actually, in any state of mind, that would probably be hard to take in a good way.
The problem was, he was to weak to leave the place, he badly needed the rest and this could be the only place, the only chans, the only sanctuary he would find.
He could hide… maybe? Could he pull that of for, maybe a week? Would he be ok until then? That was a question he could ponder AFTER he survived the first night, he decided.
It was just after two in the morning and Van wondered if the girl would ever decide to go to bed. He was lying on his back, in her arms, like a baby.
Had he not felt so tired, he would have found it a bit embarrassing.
A few minutes later he felt completely awake. He could feel a light pain in hi muscles. The first sign that he was changing back into a human!
"Oh, damn!" Was a good way of summarising the situation.
"Ok, what would a cute little cat do in this situation?" The trick would have to be, to get away from the girl, make her give up on him for the night and then run and hide.
His mind was blank to what a cat would do to get that result.
"Okokokok, I'm just a bit stressed. That's it! Yeah, all I have to do is calm down. BreathInBreathOut, BreathInBreathOut, BreathIn, damn, not working. Ok I know! Find the cat in me. Become one with the cat. FEEL the cat. Don't just act the cat, BE the cat. I can do this. I am one with the cat. I am one with the cat. So, would "I" the cute cat do?"
He looked up at hitomi and tried to look pleading and cute at the same time, but she didn't see…
"Ok, sound effects! That always works in the movies." He tried sounding like a cat a few times.
Well, it did kind of work. The girl stuffed his mouth full of food, figuring that he was still hungry.
"Eeh, not what I was hoping for… I hope I don't choke, that was a big chunk of food."
Next plan, pawing and mjouwing.
Van tried turning so he wasn't facing the body. No luck, he wasn't budging a millimetre. Not good! The only thing he could reach from here was one of her breast's!
"I can't paw one of her breast's! I completely refuse! I don't even know her!" He was getting red cheeks just thinking about it.
"I'll just end it here and change infront of her. Yeah, that's right. Won't be that bad. I'll just lie here in her lap and wait for it. "
A picture formed in his mind of him in human form, lying on her lap, butt naked, made him change his mind again.
"I can't believe I'm doing this! I feel like a total hentai." Stretching out his paw, he mjoued a bit, just for good measure. She didn't look angry or any of the things, he had decided would show in her face.
She looked like what he was doing was nothing out of the ordinary. Well, he WAS a cat. But the question now was, for how much longer.
Hitomi had by now figured out that the cute little cat of hers, didn't want to be in her lap anymore. So, she loosened her grip. He was free to run and hide somewhere.
She was running after, to check that he didn't go someplace where he would get hurt.
He leaped into a room, There was a bed and clothing where all over the place. But it looked like they hadn't been there very long.
"Ok, great you ran into her bedroom!" one of her wardrobes doors was open.
"it's that or under the bed. Hiding under the bed gives me bad vibes. Well, here goes nothing." In his last leap into the wardrobe, he could feel his body growing longer and the cramps kicking in.
He surprised himself with not screaming out in pain. The time it took, not more then a minute, felt like for ever. By the time he could breath again, the girl was in the room and had given up. She'd changed into a silk nightshift in a creamy whit colour.
"Well, if pawing her breast wasn't going over the line to being a hentai, this will definitely do it…"
She jumped into the bed, switched of the light and said "night cat, sleep tight!"
Well, that's all for this chapter. tell me what you think! common, I dare you! ;-)