Sorry for taking so long, but it was for a good reason. I got into some
scenes for my novels with a new char (whom I love to write about:)
AN: I hope you guys like this. I tried something different and have a bit more description to help the readers (I hope) better understand what will become of our God and Goddesses, and just where they are now. So make up for this, the next chapter will hopefully be a bit longer.
Thanks go out to MeltingSilver and Stuzack for reviewing:) And here's hoping that others read and review as well. I'm glad you like the different pairs that make up three different groups of good and evil Advisors. The only name I had when I began to write was Ying and Yang, I made up the others as I wrote. (I like Fire and Brimstone too:)
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The ball of blood-red light moved towards her Temple. As the Goddess neared the entrance, she saw that it looked slightly red itself, but she blamed that on the setting sun and the tricks it often played on those who view things with its help.
Fire followed her quickly, holding onto his halo and flapping his sparkling white wings quickly behind him. He looked back as Brimstone followed, began to be pushed along by some unnatural, or rather unseen, force. Behind them were two paths of light. Behind Fire was a path of bright sunset gold, and behind Brimstone the path was a dark red, much like the color of coagulated blood. They both entered the Temple to either side of the Goddess in their charge, and gasped in surprise.
*&Truly spectacular, Holy One.&* Fire stated his approval. *&If a little dark.&* He muttered under his breath.
*$I don't know what you're talking about, Fire.$* Brimstone replied, having overheard the Angel's comment easily. He grinned wickedly, his long tail moving behind him as he took in the sights (namely, the slightly bloody color of the walls, and the red tint to the window). *$I think they captured the true Acala!$*
The Goddess chuckled to herself as she moved about, checking several rooms, many with scrolls to help those who came after to remember what she had done, and the reasons they should worship her. But she did find that one door was barred to her, and she glared at it, her light turning almost painful to see.
*How dare they keep me from a room in my own Temple!* She spat, looking about to see if there was anyone who she could kill to make herself feel better.
*&That must be the Creature Cave.&* Fire said, not too much put aback by Acala's speed to get angry. *&I'm sure that the Villagers are simply making it comfortable, and we don't need it yet. We have yet to get a Creature.&*
Acala turned to face the Angel. She had a face in that light, though Mortals couldn't see it. And the look on that face, and the sneer that Acala showed was enough to chill anyone's blood.
*What's this "we" business?*
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A Monk with a rainbow trail and an Imp with a trail of smoke rushed towards a structure that looked as though it was slightly dirty, as if someone had sprinkled a thin layer of sand after a gentle rain. Behind the pair was an indigo Goddess with a bit more patience, as her slow approach showed.
~If you see inside my Temple before I do, both of you will wish that you were sent to the Void!~ Celina told them firmly. The Imp and Monk stopped to wait for their Goddess and followed her into the Temple.
The inside of the Temple had several different things painted into the windows. Every scene was balanced perfectly. A sunrise for each sunset. A birth for every death. And a storm for every clear sunny day. All in all, the Goddess found it wonderful.
Ying check out the right wall which was covered with the positive images, and Yang checked the left. Both were impressed with the level of talent the artists must have had, and both appreciated the fact that neither good nor evil won here.
~&Look at this birth!&~ The Monk called out, smiling widely. ~&You can just feel the love and peace.&~
~$Look at this storm!$~ Yang countered. ~$You can almost smell the fear! I like it.$~
~A world in perfect balance.~ Celina thought aloud. ~If only we could be sure to be this much at peace.And to ensure that, we will go to war if we have to. And since I just sensed the completion of Acala's Temple, we may just have to.~
They continued to explore, keeping the only closed door for last.
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The bright aqua light had just finished its flash of Power from the Temple's completion, when the God, Priestess and Demoness made their way towards the Temple.
The sun shone off the bright clean walls as they came closer and entered after a short pause. The windows were a mix of aqua and gold. The colors alternated perfectly, and the room-
{&Why it simply glows with benevolence!&} Daylight called out, her trail was a pure white with no trace of any other color.
{$That can change.$} Starlight replied. Her trail was pure black, but silver strips were also mixed in, making it look like a night full of shooting stars.
{But it won't.} Samuel replied, chuckling at the discouraged look the Demoness sent his way. {Now, what's this room for?} He asked as he stopped before a large door that was closed and denied him entrance.
{&That will be the home of our Creature, Holy Leader.&} Daylight explained.
{$Once we get one that is.$} Starlight added as they continued to look around the building with the shinning walls and the glorious lighting.
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Okay, so I started this about four days ago, but at least it's done! (Finally!)
Hope you like it. I fixed a few small mistakes in the AN of Part 4 but nothing that's worth checking out:) The next Part may be longer, and I hope more exciting.
AN: Double checked this as did my RL friend. No more mistakes.we hope.
Next up.? What else. With all this talk of Creatures; it's time to start the Quests!
AN: I can't believe I forgot this part. Now that you've read, please review! Or send a mail (Celina66@mailcity.com)
AN: I hope you guys like this. I tried something different and have a bit more description to help the readers (I hope) better understand what will become of our God and Goddesses, and just where they are now. So make up for this, the next chapter will hopefully be a bit longer.
Thanks go out to MeltingSilver and Stuzack for reviewing:) And here's hoping that others read and review as well. I'm glad you like the different pairs that make up three different groups of good and evil Advisors. The only name I had when I began to write was Ying and Yang, I made up the others as I wrote. (I like Fire and Brimstone too:)
****** ******* ******
The ball of blood-red light moved towards her Temple. As the Goddess neared the entrance, she saw that it looked slightly red itself, but she blamed that on the setting sun and the tricks it often played on those who view things with its help.
Fire followed her quickly, holding onto his halo and flapping his sparkling white wings quickly behind him. He looked back as Brimstone followed, began to be pushed along by some unnatural, or rather unseen, force. Behind them were two paths of light. Behind Fire was a path of bright sunset gold, and behind Brimstone the path was a dark red, much like the color of coagulated blood. They both entered the Temple to either side of the Goddess in their charge, and gasped in surprise.
*&Truly spectacular, Holy One.&* Fire stated his approval. *&If a little dark.&* He muttered under his breath.
*$I don't know what you're talking about, Fire.$* Brimstone replied, having overheard the Angel's comment easily. He grinned wickedly, his long tail moving behind him as he took in the sights (namely, the slightly bloody color of the walls, and the red tint to the window). *$I think they captured the true Acala!$*
The Goddess chuckled to herself as she moved about, checking several rooms, many with scrolls to help those who came after to remember what she had done, and the reasons they should worship her. But she did find that one door was barred to her, and she glared at it, her light turning almost painful to see.
*How dare they keep me from a room in my own Temple!* She spat, looking about to see if there was anyone who she could kill to make herself feel better.
*&That must be the Creature Cave.&* Fire said, not too much put aback by Acala's speed to get angry. *&I'm sure that the Villagers are simply making it comfortable, and we don't need it yet. We have yet to get a Creature.&*
Acala turned to face the Angel. She had a face in that light, though Mortals couldn't see it. And the look on that face, and the sneer that Acala showed was enough to chill anyone's blood.
*What's this "we" business?*
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A Monk with a rainbow trail and an Imp with a trail of smoke rushed towards a structure that looked as though it was slightly dirty, as if someone had sprinkled a thin layer of sand after a gentle rain. Behind the pair was an indigo Goddess with a bit more patience, as her slow approach showed.
~If you see inside my Temple before I do, both of you will wish that you were sent to the Void!~ Celina told them firmly. The Imp and Monk stopped to wait for their Goddess and followed her into the Temple.
The inside of the Temple had several different things painted into the windows. Every scene was balanced perfectly. A sunrise for each sunset. A birth for every death. And a storm for every clear sunny day. All in all, the Goddess found it wonderful.
Ying check out the right wall which was covered with the positive images, and Yang checked the left. Both were impressed with the level of talent the artists must have had, and both appreciated the fact that neither good nor evil won here.
~&Look at this birth!&~ The Monk called out, smiling widely. ~&You can just feel the love and peace.&~
~$Look at this storm!$~ Yang countered. ~$You can almost smell the fear! I like it.$~
~A world in perfect balance.~ Celina thought aloud. ~If only we could be sure to be this much at peace.And to ensure that, we will go to war if we have to. And since I just sensed the completion of Acala's Temple, we may just have to.~
They continued to explore, keeping the only closed door for last.
+-+-+ +-+-*-+-+ +-+-+
The bright aqua light had just finished its flash of Power from the Temple's completion, when the God, Priestess and Demoness made their way towards the Temple.
The sun shone off the bright clean walls as they came closer and entered after a short pause. The windows were a mix of aqua and gold. The colors alternated perfectly, and the room-
{&Why it simply glows with benevolence!&} Daylight called out, her trail was a pure white with no trace of any other color.
{$That can change.$} Starlight replied. Her trail was pure black, but silver strips were also mixed in, making it look like a night full of shooting stars.
{But it won't.} Samuel replied, chuckling at the discouraged look the Demoness sent his way. {Now, what's this room for?} He asked as he stopped before a large door that was closed and denied him entrance.
{&That will be the home of our Creature, Holy Leader.&} Daylight explained.
{$Once we get one that is.$} Starlight added as they continued to look around the building with the shinning walls and the glorious lighting.
****** ******* ******
Okay, so I started this about four days ago, but at least it's done! (Finally!)
Hope you like it. I fixed a few small mistakes in the AN of Part 4 but nothing that's worth checking out:) The next Part may be longer, and I hope more exciting.
AN: Double checked this as did my RL friend. No more mistakes.we hope.
Next up.? What else. With all this talk of Creatures; it's time to start the Quests!
AN: I can't believe I forgot this part. Now that you've read, please review! Or send a mail (Celina66@mailcity.com)