NOT ONCE
AUTHOR: ToLeDa
EMAIL: pure_innocence132hotmail.com
STATUS:complete
CATEGORY: AU sorta and it dont makes sense HA!
WARNINGS: none
TIMELINE: Set after Pollo Loco, set sometime after Some Assmebley Required.
SUMMERY: Max writes a letter to Zack apologising for killing Ben.
A/N: My first fic, and i need to get the hang of it before my stories will become bigger and better. Reveiw if you like.I see there was some confusion on how Max ran from Zack, well she didnt but it feels like she did to her, you know when she sent him away to the farm in Canada (it was Canada ay?) thankyou to messymissy for letting me know about the /'s etc.....
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A girl sits in the corner of a small and dark room, a pen in one hand a piece of paper in the other.
Zack,
Im sorry, I know how much Ben meant to you I just I just didnt know, he asked me too i couldnt deny him it, oh god im so sorry. Tears roll down her slightly red cheeks, falling on the small wooden table. I didnt have the guts to tell you what I had done so I ran, just like I ran from Ben I left his body there for manticore to get, I saved my own ass, and because of that I ask that you dont forgive me, no one should forgive me i dont deserve it and I dont want it either. I wish i could go back and changed what had happened maybe if i hadnt broke his leg then maybe he would still be alive - once again my fault, its always my fault, Tinga, you Zack, its all my fault.I think of all the times you risked your life for mine and i never once repaid you, not once.
Max
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Was it good?? didnt like it??? tell me what you think in a reveiw or email.
~T~
AUTHOR: ToLeDa
EMAIL: pure_innocence132hotmail.com
STATUS:complete
CATEGORY: AU sorta and it dont makes sense HA!
WARNINGS: none
TIMELINE: Set after Pollo Loco, set sometime after Some Assmebley Required.
SUMMERY: Max writes a letter to Zack apologising for killing Ben.
A/N: My first fic, and i need to get the hang of it before my stories will become bigger and better. Reveiw if you like.I see there was some confusion on how Max ran from Zack, well she didnt but it feels like she did to her, you know when she sent him away to the farm in Canada (it was Canada ay?) thankyou to messymissy for letting me know about the /'s etc.....
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A girl sits in the corner of a small and dark room, a pen in one hand a piece of paper in the other.
Zack,
Im sorry, I know how much Ben meant to you I just I just didnt know, he asked me too i couldnt deny him it, oh god im so sorry. Tears roll down her slightly red cheeks, falling on the small wooden table. I didnt have the guts to tell you what I had done so I ran, just like I ran from Ben I left his body there for manticore to get, I saved my own ass, and because of that I ask that you dont forgive me, no one should forgive me i dont deserve it and I dont want it either. I wish i could go back and changed what had happened maybe if i hadnt broke his leg then maybe he would still be alive - once again my fault, its always my fault, Tinga, you Zack, its all my fault.I think of all the times you risked your life for mine and i never once repaid you, not once.
Max
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Was it good?? didnt like it??? tell me what you think in a reveiw or email.
~T~