I didn't invent Golden Sun
Chapter Two
Ivan looked up to see the bear thing swing a heavy claw at him and rolled to the side just in time, but his shoulder got scratched and started bleeding. Ivan let out a houl of pain and grabbed at his shoulder with his other hand. At this moment Isaac rushed up and sent a large boulder at the beast which hit him dead on. The thing staggered a bit but continued toward Ivan. Isaac panicked and charged at the bear, hitting him in the stomach with his head. It roared and turned on Isaac, who drew his sword. Glad that he had distracted it from Ivan, Isaac hurled his sword into the bear's face. He struck it on the face and it moaned. It's face was bleeding nastily and it fell to the ground. Retrieving his sword first, Isaac knelt beside Ivan and checked to see if he was still breathing. To his relief, Ivan was still alive. Isaac ripped a bit of fabric off of his tunic and made a bandage to put on Ivan's bleeding shoulder. Isaac sighed and lifted Ivan. Isaac headed slowly toward the docks hoping desperately not to meet any more monster before making it to the docks. To his relief, several minutes later he entered the docks.
"Please, he's unconcious!" Isaac pleaded with the lady selling tickets. "Oh all right," she finally consented, "he can stay in one of the beds for tonight, but it will cost 10 coins." Isaac sighed and handed the money to the lady. She led him to a back room and pointed at a bed. Isaac carefully put Ivan in and tended to his shoulder. By this time, it wasn't bleeding anymore. Isaac pointed his hand at Ivan's shoulder and said softly "Cure!" Within a few hours of curing, Ivan finally awoke. Ivan yawned. "Where are we?" he asked. "We made it to the docks," answered Isaac, "You went unconcious and I carried you all the way here. Don't you remember the monster?" Ivan nodded slowly. Ivan started to get out of bed but Isaac stopped him. "You need some rest, Ivan," he said, "You aren't fully healed." Ivan looked down at his shoulder where a scar had formed. "I'm going to see if we can get tickets to go on the boat," said Isaac as he left the room.
Isaac glared icily. "What do you mean, the tickets cost three hundred coins each?" he shouted in the lady's face. "That's about all the money I have!" drawing his sword Isaac yelled, "If you don't give me the tickets for less, I'll cut your head off!" Hearing the commotion inside two men ran inside with their swords drawn. One of them asked, "What's this all about?" The lady answered, "This kid said he'd cut my head off if I didn't sell the tickets to him for less." The first man laughed and drew his sword. "We're here to stop trouble like this. Since you are a kid we'll give you a chance to take back what you said before we kill you." Isaac laughed at the man who glared back. "I will not take it back, I meant it fully!" he shouted. By this time Ivan had been roused by the noise. "What's going on, Isaac?" he asked. Isaac didn't respond but ran with his sword in front of him toward the first man who wasn't expecting it. The sword nicked him on the side enough to make a wound. Screaming in pain, the man hacked at Isaac, but missed by a lot. Ivan drew his sword as did the other man. Suddenly, without warning, a bolt of electricity flew from Ivan's outstretched hand and hit the first man burning a hole through his finger. The man gasped at Ivan and clutched at his hand. As his companion fell to the ground screaming and clutching his hand, the other man rushed from the building. Isaac snickered and turned again to the lady. "If you don't give me the tickets for less, my brother here will fry you!" he said with a grin. She trembled and gave them each tickets. "H-h- here you are sirs, you can h-have them f-f-free!" she stuttered. Isaac grinned at Ivan and beckoned for him to follow. They exited the building not expecting what they saw.
Upon exiting, a group of men charged at them with their sword out. Ivan, with his lightning fast speed got away in time, but Isaac was hit on his shoulder and leg. Screaming in pain Isaac fell to the ground. Before the men could kill him, Ivan rushed in and stabbed one man. The man fell slashing at Ivan's legs. Ivan got a large cut in his leg. He fell without a sound. Isaac meanwhile had gotten up and was crawling away. Ivan lay on the ground as five men approached him. He knew he was going to die, and there was no way out of it.
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Chapter Two
Ivan looked up to see the bear thing swing a heavy claw at him and rolled to the side just in time, but his shoulder got scratched and started bleeding. Ivan let out a houl of pain and grabbed at his shoulder with his other hand. At this moment Isaac rushed up and sent a large boulder at the beast which hit him dead on. The thing staggered a bit but continued toward Ivan. Isaac panicked and charged at the bear, hitting him in the stomach with his head. It roared and turned on Isaac, who drew his sword. Glad that he had distracted it from Ivan, Isaac hurled his sword into the bear's face. He struck it on the face and it moaned. It's face was bleeding nastily and it fell to the ground. Retrieving his sword first, Isaac knelt beside Ivan and checked to see if he was still breathing. To his relief, Ivan was still alive. Isaac ripped a bit of fabric off of his tunic and made a bandage to put on Ivan's bleeding shoulder. Isaac sighed and lifted Ivan. Isaac headed slowly toward the docks hoping desperately not to meet any more monster before making it to the docks. To his relief, several minutes later he entered the docks.
"Please, he's unconcious!" Isaac pleaded with the lady selling tickets. "Oh all right," she finally consented, "he can stay in one of the beds for tonight, but it will cost 10 coins." Isaac sighed and handed the money to the lady. She led him to a back room and pointed at a bed. Isaac carefully put Ivan in and tended to his shoulder. By this time, it wasn't bleeding anymore. Isaac pointed his hand at Ivan's shoulder and said softly "Cure!" Within a few hours of curing, Ivan finally awoke. Ivan yawned. "Where are we?" he asked. "We made it to the docks," answered Isaac, "You went unconcious and I carried you all the way here. Don't you remember the monster?" Ivan nodded slowly. Ivan started to get out of bed but Isaac stopped him. "You need some rest, Ivan," he said, "You aren't fully healed." Ivan looked down at his shoulder where a scar had formed. "I'm going to see if we can get tickets to go on the boat," said Isaac as he left the room.
Isaac glared icily. "What do you mean, the tickets cost three hundred coins each?" he shouted in the lady's face. "That's about all the money I have!" drawing his sword Isaac yelled, "If you don't give me the tickets for less, I'll cut your head off!" Hearing the commotion inside two men ran inside with their swords drawn. One of them asked, "What's this all about?" The lady answered, "This kid said he'd cut my head off if I didn't sell the tickets to him for less." The first man laughed and drew his sword. "We're here to stop trouble like this. Since you are a kid we'll give you a chance to take back what you said before we kill you." Isaac laughed at the man who glared back. "I will not take it back, I meant it fully!" he shouted. By this time Ivan had been roused by the noise. "What's going on, Isaac?" he asked. Isaac didn't respond but ran with his sword in front of him toward the first man who wasn't expecting it. The sword nicked him on the side enough to make a wound. Screaming in pain, the man hacked at Isaac, but missed by a lot. Ivan drew his sword as did the other man. Suddenly, without warning, a bolt of electricity flew from Ivan's outstretched hand and hit the first man burning a hole through his finger. The man gasped at Ivan and clutched at his hand. As his companion fell to the ground screaming and clutching his hand, the other man rushed from the building. Isaac snickered and turned again to the lady. "If you don't give me the tickets for less, my brother here will fry you!" he said with a grin. She trembled and gave them each tickets. "H-h- here you are sirs, you can h-have them f-f-free!" she stuttered. Isaac grinned at Ivan and beckoned for him to follow. They exited the building not expecting what they saw.
Upon exiting, a group of men charged at them with their sword out. Ivan, with his lightning fast speed got away in time, but Isaac was hit on his shoulder and leg. Screaming in pain Isaac fell to the ground. Before the men could kill him, Ivan rushed in and stabbed one man. The man fell slashing at Ivan's legs. Ivan got a large cut in his leg. He fell without a sound. Isaac meanwhile had gotten up and was crawling away. Ivan lay on the ground as five men approached him. He knew he was going to die, and there was no way out of it.
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