I didn't invent Golden Sun
Chapter Three
Ivan watched helplessly as the men approached. He thought about his parents, how they had been murdered. He knew we was about to follow. Ivan braced himself for the pain... but it never came. Ivan gasped as the men suddenly burnt until there was nothing left but ashes. Looking up, he saw a red haired boy, about Isaac's age standing nearby grinning. But where was Isaac? Ivan looked around and spotted him hiding behind a barrel nearby. Ivan tried to walk over to him but when he attempted to stand, a sharp pain went through his leg and he fell back again. Isaac, realizing the men were dead, crawled over to Ivan. The red haired boy came over to Ivan. "Hi, my name is Garet," the boy said, "I live in Kalay, a city across the ocean, and when I got off the boat, I saw you two getting beat up by those guys, so I decided to help." Isaac introduced themselves to him. Ivan smiled but then suddenly moaned as another sharp pain went through his leg. Garet lifted Ivan and carried him toward the building to buy tickets from. "Hello, maam," he said to the ticket selling lady, "This boy is injured and he needs some rest." The lady gasped as Isaac entered and immediately agreed.
The next day when Ivan woke up Garet and Isaac stood over him. "I think he's waking up," said Isaac. Ivan yawned and rolled over. "Where are you headed?" asked Garet. "We were actually going to Kalay to find work," responded Isaac. Garet's stomach swelled up with pride, and he said "I was going to Tolbi to enter Collosso! I'm so powerful I know I could beat anybody there without any trouble!" Isaac smirked. "Good luck, there are many powerful warriors there, and Ivan and I may even enter this year." Ivan rolled back over at this and exclaimed "Really?" Isaac grinned at him. "Not until you get healed up atleast," he answered. Ivan rolled back over and went back to sleep.
About an hour later when Ivan woke back up, he was extremely hungry. Ivan groaned. "I'm hungry," he complained. Isaac nodded and left the room. A few minutes later, he returned with a plate of herbs. "Here you go," he said. Isaac and Ivan munched on the herbs for a while and Garet got out his own bag. When they were finished eating Ivan felt better and he got out of bed. Isaac shook his head at Ivan and carefully laid him back down on the bead. "You need more rest! Look at that bloody leg of yours," he said with a chuckle. Isaac leaned over and healed his leg. Garet's eyes got wide and he exclaimed "You have psynergy too?" Isaac looked at Garet in a confused way. "Psynergy?" he asked. Garet nodded. "Psynergy," he said "There are four types of psynergy, fire, water, earth, and wind. I have the power of fire, so people call me a fire adept. I'm guessing you are either a water adept or an earth adept, because of your healing abilities." Isaac gasped. "I never knew that," he replied. "Psynergy? I never knew my abilities had any name. Did you make it up?" Garet laughed. "No, no," he chuckled.
Ivan finally got out of bed when his leg was healed completely. Stretching he reached for his armor, helmet, and sword. When he left the building, he saw Isaac and Garet training against each other. Isaac slashed at Garet's leg, but he blocked it and sent a burst of fire back at Isaac, who quickly ducked under it. "Wow, you're fast!" said Garet admiringly. Isaac replied "Perhaps, but Ivan there is much faster." Garet looked over at Ivan who stood watching. Garet smiled at Ivan but during that time Isaac sent a pebble into the air and crashed it down on Garet's head. Garet fell down with a yelp. Rubbing his head, he stood back up and suddenly started laughing. Isaac grinned and joined in the laughing. Soon all three of them were laughing. Isaac teased, "I guess that teaches you to smile during a fight!" That only made Garet laugh harder.
A week later Isaac, Ivan, and Garet were all waiting in line at the Colloseum to try out for Collosso. Isaac walked in first, and a few moments they heard a scream, and Isaac walked out with a smile. "I had to persuade him to let me in, because he said I was too young," Isaac said. Garet laughed and entered. A few moments later he emerged with a smile. "I'm tall for my age," he said happily. Finally Ivan entered, but he didn't come back out. Isaac went in to see what was keeping him. When he entered, Isaac saw Ivan yelling at the man deciding whether people could enter or not. Ivan shouted "I'll blow you up if you don't let me in!" The man shook his head. Ivan pointed at a pebble lying on the ground and said, "Watch this!" Without a word, electricity came from Ivan's hand and blew up the rock. "That's going to happen to you if you don't let me in!" Isaac walked back out and watched as Ivan came running out and disappeared down the hill leading to the Colloseum. Isaac grinned as he and Garet followed Ivan.
After a few minutes, Isaac and Garet found Ivan laughing his sides off. "He let me join!" he exclaimed. Isaac chuckled. Garet flexed his muscles. "I could pass for fifteen years old!" said Garet. Isaac pointed at Garet and started laughing. Garet grabbed Isaac's arm and shouted "I'll rip your arm off if you mock me! You... you...," but suddenly started laughing at himself and let Isaac go. "Well," he said, "we'd better getting training for Collosso!"
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Chapter Three
Ivan watched helplessly as the men approached. He thought about his parents, how they had been murdered. He knew we was about to follow. Ivan braced himself for the pain... but it never came. Ivan gasped as the men suddenly burnt until there was nothing left but ashes. Looking up, he saw a red haired boy, about Isaac's age standing nearby grinning. But where was Isaac? Ivan looked around and spotted him hiding behind a barrel nearby. Ivan tried to walk over to him but when he attempted to stand, a sharp pain went through his leg and he fell back again. Isaac, realizing the men were dead, crawled over to Ivan. The red haired boy came over to Ivan. "Hi, my name is Garet," the boy said, "I live in Kalay, a city across the ocean, and when I got off the boat, I saw you two getting beat up by those guys, so I decided to help." Isaac introduced themselves to him. Ivan smiled but then suddenly moaned as another sharp pain went through his leg. Garet lifted Ivan and carried him toward the building to buy tickets from. "Hello, maam," he said to the ticket selling lady, "This boy is injured and he needs some rest." The lady gasped as Isaac entered and immediately agreed.
The next day when Ivan woke up Garet and Isaac stood over him. "I think he's waking up," said Isaac. Ivan yawned and rolled over. "Where are you headed?" asked Garet. "We were actually going to Kalay to find work," responded Isaac. Garet's stomach swelled up with pride, and he said "I was going to Tolbi to enter Collosso! I'm so powerful I know I could beat anybody there without any trouble!" Isaac smirked. "Good luck, there are many powerful warriors there, and Ivan and I may even enter this year." Ivan rolled back over at this and exclaimed "Really?" Isaac grinned at him. "Not until you get healed up atleast," he answered. Ivan rolled back over and went back to sleep.
About an hour later when Ivan woke back up, he was extremely hungry. Ivan groaned. "I'm hungry," he complained. Isaac nodded and left the room. A few minutes later, he returned with a plate of herbs. "Here you go," he said. Isaac and Ivan munched on the herbs for a while and Garet got out his own bag. When they were finished eating Ivan felt better and he got out of bed. Isaac shook his head at Ivan and carefully laid him back down on the bead. "You need more rest! Look at that bloody leg of yours," he said with a chuckle. Isaac leaned over and healed his leg. Garet's eyes got wide and he exclaimed "You have psynergy too?" Isaac looked at Garet in a confused way. "Psynergy?" he asked. Garet nodded. "Psynergy," he said "There are four types of psynergy, fire, water, earth, and wind. I have the power of fire, so people call me a fire adept. I'm guessing you are either a water adept or an earth adept, because of your healing abilities." Isaac gasped. "I never knew that," he replied. "Psynergy? I never knew my abilities had any name. Did you make it up?" Garet laughed. "No, no," he chuckled.
Ivan finally got out of bed when his leg was healed completely. Stretching he reached for his armor, helmet, and sword. When he left the building, he saw Isaac and Garet training against each other. Isaac slashed at Garet's leg, but he blocked it and sent a burst of fire back at Isaac, who quickly ducked under it. "Wow, you're fast!" said Garet admiringly. Isaac replied "Perhaps, but Ivan there is much faster." Garet looked over at Ivan who stood watching. Garet smiled at Ivan but during that time Isaac sent a pebble into the air and crashed it down on Garet's head. Garet fell down with a yelp. Rubbing his head, he stood back up and suddenly started laughing. Isaac grinned and joined in the laughing. Soon all three of them were laughing. Isaac teased, "I guess that teaches you to smile during a fight!" That only made Garet laugh harder.
A week later Isaac, Ivan, and Garet were all waiting in line at the Colloseum to try out for Collosso. Isaac walked in first, and a few moments they heard a scream, and Isaac walked out with a smile. "I had to persuade him to let me in, because he said I was too young," Isaac said. Garet laughed and entered. A few moments later he emerged with a smile. "I'm tall for my age," he said happily. Finally Ivan entered, but he didn't come back out. Isaac went in to see what was keeping him. When he entered, Isaac saw Ivan yelling at the man deciding whether people could enter or not. Ivan shouted "I'll blow you up if you don't let me in!" The man shook his head. Ivan pointed at a pebble lying on the ground and said, "Watch this!" Without a word, electricity came from Ivan's hand and blew up the rock. "That's going to happen to you if you don't let me in!" Isaac walked back out and watched as Ivan came running out and disappeared down the hill leading to the Colloseum. Isaac grinned as he and Garet followed Ivan.
After a few minutes, Isaac and Garet found Ivan laughing his sides off. "He let me join!" he exclaimed. Isaac chuckled. Garet flexed his muscles. "I could pass for fifteen years old!" said Garet. Isaac pointed at Garet and started laughing. Garet grabbed Isaac's arm and shouted "I'll rip your arm off if you mock me! You... you...," but suddenly started laughing at himself and let Isaac go. "Well," he said, "we'd better getting training for Collosso!"
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