YEAH!!! I'm back.
Sorry that I was gone so long but shortly after posting my last chapter, I got the Newsies Soundtrack and that has been fulfilling my Newsies needs for a while and then my teachers decided to try and make me quit school by giving me too much homework, but now I'm back!!
Shoutouts
Athena- Thanks Shanneen, and I am sorry about not using my break for useful things like this story. Oh, and I am also glad that my secret room idea is not so far fetched because I really wish that I had a secret room.
Rumor- Thanks, you are an awesome reviewer. I never really thought of Spot as being much of a pervert but that just seemed to fit him.
Blink's Tiger- *Happy author* I know the tenses are so screwed up. I can't really help it because I am trying to write in present but it isn't really working all that well. I think that I am going to change the first chapter so this is happening in the present. Anyway, thanks for the review.
Spark- Stuff to you too!
Mondie- I would pay for air conditioning in a room that I didn't know exists because I would just assume that the house was an energy suck. The only thing that would tip me off to the secret room would be the huge gap in the floor plan and the fact that the outside of the house wouldn't match the inside. Thanks for the profile. You will be in there soon I think, maybe at the school. Any way thank you. PS. Could you spell out whatever it is that you write at the bottom of all of your reviews, the part that isn't your name? I have no clue what you are saying.
Falco- Thanks, think that teenage boys are crazy so there is no telling how they would react. Not to mention in the movie the sing and dance, so in real life they should be very excited about corny things.
Cards- Sure, I would love to have in my story. I really think that steel shower curtains should be made because my little sister likes to hit me through our shower curtain.
Little notes
I am soo excited about my Newsies Soundtrack. It is so great and the only thing that I need now is the DVD!
Other note, I have a friend named Chris and the makes the best Newsie! I know this because I had him wear my Newsie hat and he looked so great. I think that I will take a picture and post it in one of the chapters!
Last note, do you guys want me to make a floor plan of the house so you have an idea where everything is? Please say if yes or no in your review.
On with the Story
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Okay, so apparently my father did know about the secret room. That explains a lot.
Klopman- (As he walks in the door) Oh, the cars are here but the boys aren't. They must be in that room off of your bathroom.
Belle- WHAT??!! You knew about the room this whole time?!
Klop- Of course, that was the first place I looked when I lost you or your brother.
Belle- We thought it was a secret place that the only people who knew about were us!
Klop- Most definitely not. Now, are they in the room or not?
Belle- Yes Sir, they are.
AUURRRGGGHHH! I hate it when parents know something and then don't bother to let any one know that they know it. It is like some sort of Parent Trap that they set up. And I am not talking the get-your-divorced-parents-back-together one.
Belle- Okay, so if we have a kritique of the horrible Indian case, then do we need it to be fiat?
Caroline- I don't think so. Maybe we should make two just in case.
Thud thud thud.
OWWWW. I hit my head. *snickers*
Belle- Sounds like the guys are coming up for some air. We might want to pack up real quick. Who knows what they are going to find funny after being locked up in that room with no sane person to keep them under control.
Spot- Sorry, I guess I was wrong, I'm going to get to see you two times tonight. So, what do you have to eat in the kitchen?
Caroline- Please don't act coy, and don't remind us about your shower promise.
Spot- *mock shock* Shower?! What are you talking about, this supposed 'shower comment'? All I was implying was that I would come up to tell you two good night! You dirty little girls!
Belle- Haha. Real funny Spot. But if you keep suggesting sneaking into my bathroom, then I am going to lock all of you in for about two hours. I hope you are getting a chamber pot to take back with you. By the way, what are you doing out of the lodging room?
David- Collecting everything on this list.
Caroline- HUH?
Belle- This list doesn't include us does it?
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Sorry that this is so short but I have a ton of things to do and I thought that I could post some little part of the story so that you guys don't completely give up me. Anyway, review please
Amo,
Belle
Sorry that I was gone so long but shortly after posting my last chapter, I got the Newsies Soundtrack and that has been fulfilling my Newsies needs for a while and then my teachers decided to try and make me quit school by giving me too much homework, but now I'm back!!
Shoutouts
Athena- Thanks Shanneen, and I am sorry about not using my break for useful things like this story. Oh, and I am also glad that my secret room idea is not so far fetched because I really wish that I had a secret room.
Rumor- Thanks, you are an awesome reviewer. I never really thought of Spot as being much of a pervert but that just seemed to fit him.
Blink's Tiger- *Happy author* I know the tenses are so screwed up. I can't really help it because I am trying to write in present but it isn't really working all that well. I think that I am going to change the first chapter so this is happening in the present. Anyway, thanks for the review.
Spark- Stuff to you too!
Mondie- I would pay for air conditioning in a room that I didn't know exists because I would just assume that the house was an energy suck. The only thing that would tip me off to the secret room would be the huge gap in the floor plan and the fact that the outside of the house wouldn't match the inside. Thanks for the profile. You will be in there soon I think, maybe at the school. Any way thank you. PS. Could you spell out whatever it is that you write at the bottom of all of your reviews, the part that isn't your name? I have no clue what you are saying.
Falco- Thanks, think that teenage boys are crazy so there is no telling how they would react. Not to mention in the movie the sing and dance, so in real life they should be very excited about corny things.
Cards- Sure, I would love to have in my story. I really think that steel shower curtains should be made because my little sister likes to hit me through our shower curtain.
Little notes
I am soo excited about my Newsies Soundtrack. It is so great and the only thing that I need now is the DVD!
Other note, I have a friend named Chris and the makes the best Newsie! I know this because I had him wear my Newsie hat and he looked so great. I think that I will take a picture and post it in one of the chapters!
Last note, do you guys want me to make a floor plan of the house so you have an idea where everything is? Please say if yes or no in your review.
On with the Story
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Okay, so apparently my father did know about the secret room. That explains a lot.
Klopman- (As he walks in the door) Oh, the cars are here but the boys aren't. They must be in that room off of your bathroom.
Belle- WHAT??!! You knew about the room this whole time?!
Klop- Of course, that was the first place I looked when I lost you or your brother.
Belle- We thought it was a secret place that the only people who knew about were us!
Klop- Most definitely not. Now, are they in the room or not?
Belle- Yes Sir, they are.
AUURRRGGGHHH! I hate it when parents know something and then don't bother to let any one know that they know it. It is like some sort of Parent Trap that they set up. And I am not talking the get-your-divorced-parents-back-together one.
Belle- Okay, so if we have a kritique of the horrible Indian case, then do we need it to be fiat?
Caroline- I don't think so. Maybe we should make two just in case.
Thud thud thud.
OWWWW. I hit my head. *snickers*
Belle- Sounds like the guys are coming up for some air. We might want to pack up real quick. Who knows what they are going to find funny after being locked up in that room with no sane person to keep them under control.
Spot- Sorry, I guess I was wrong, I'm going to get to see you two times tonight. So, what do you have to eat in the kitchen?
Caroline- Please don't act coy, and don't remind us about your shower promise.
Spot- *mock shock* Shower?! What are you talking about, this supposed 'shower comment'? All I was implying was that I would come up to tell you two good night! You dirty little girls!
Belle- Haha. Real funny Spot. But if you keep suggesting sneaking into my bathroom, then I am going to lock all of you in for about two hours. I hope you are getting a chamber pot to take back with you. By the way, what are you doing out of the lodging room?
David- Collecting everything on this list.
Caroline- HUH?
Belle- This list doesn't include us does it?
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Sorry that this is so short but I have a ton of things to do and I thought that I could post some little part of the story so that you guys don't completely give up me. Anyway, review please
Amo,
Belle