Yo yo yo! Wuz up? Here's the second chapter to the exciting story of Goten's
Abandonment. But first, a word from our sponsors.
Goten: You Don't have Sponsors.
Yes I do, it's the readers.
Goten: Well forget about them, get on with the story, I want to hear
what happens to me.
I have to be nice Goten
Goten: Fine
Okay this review is from Mav, which says…
"good story so far. i like it, and there aren't many of these out there. when
ur done with this one, write another!"
Well Thank you Mav, I will try to write others, but I need ideas! And they
HAVE to be about Goten, He's my fave!
Goten: Of course I am, I am the cutest.
So I have decided to be nice, and give you the second chapter although... I won't be doing this again. So enjoy
Yes you are, now on with the story...oh wait
Goten: Now what?
Disclaimer: I don't own any of these characters except for Gosin!
Goten: Now?
Yes Now
Goten: ON WITH THE STORY
* Big sign says APPLAUSE! *
"See ya!"
Goku slowly walked down the stairs to the kitchen. What is wrong
with Goten? He wondered as he walked into the kitchen.
"Dad! What's wrong? What happened?"
"Gohan do you mind taking Gosin with you today? I need to go find
your brother and talk to him. Something's wrong." Goku asked Gohan quietly.
"Yea, sure Dad, no problem, but isn't Goten going to school today?" Gohan
asked
Goku shook his head, "No, he took off into the woods. I'm worried about him."
Goku explained, "Something's wrong." Goku repeated.
Gohan nodded his understanding, and finished his breakfast, then stood up,
put his dishes in the sink and picked up Gosin, "Well I've got to get going, come on
Gosin time to fly."
"Here's his diaper bag, which also has some extra bottles in it and a few toys too.
Sorry about pushing him on you. Are you sure Videl won't mind?" Goku asked
while handing his eldest son the diaper bag.
"It's alright Dad, Videl loves Gosin so she won't mind, and he's a lot better
than that other brat I have for a brother. I shouldn't even classify him AS a
brother, he's a pain in the neck." Gohan told his father cruelly.
"Gohan!" Goku scolded, "Don't talk about Goten that way, he's just having
a hard time dealing with that fact that I am back in his life and his mother is dead.
Give him some time! But I don't want to hear you ever talking about Goten that
way again!"
Gohan hung his head, "Sorry Dad, I won't. I've got to go, bye!"
"Be careful!" Goku said as Gohan left.
Goku sat down at the kitchen table, something was wrong with his middle
son and he had to find out what it was. What was Goten doing out in the woods
anyways? Goku realized that Goten had been spending a lot of time out there since
his mother died, 11 months ago. Well Goku thought, standing up, Guess I should
go find him. Goku stood very quiet in the middle of the kitchen, concentrating,
trying to find Goten's Ki. He found it and used the instant transmission technique
to appear where Goten was.
Goten was training as a Super Saiyan 2 when he felt his father appear.
He didn't care. Goten just ignored his fathers presence and continued training,
knowing that Goku was watching.
"Goten?" His father called out to him. But Goten just ignored him.
"Goten!" Goku said more harshly.
Goten stopped training, landed (he was flying), and stood facing his father.
"What do you want?!" Goten demanded, "Can't you see that I'm busy!"
"Goten, please don't talk to me like that. I want to know what's going on.
There's something wrong and I am worried about you." Goku explained to
his son softly.
"Wrong? Nothings Wrong! I don't know what you are talking about so
stop worrying and go away, and leave me alone!" Goten yelled at his father.
"Don't lie to me Goten! I know something's wrong, you used to love school."
"Yea, that was until I realized I was a failure! I'm never gonna complete school!"
"What makes you think that?" Goku asked his upset son.
"Do you want to know my letter average on my last report card?" Goten asked his father is distain.
"Your last report card? You didn't give it to me? I thought it had been
quite awhile. Yes I do want to know your average."
"Well I want to warn you, it's not very good."
"Oh Goten, I'm sure it's not that bad." Goku reassured him.
"It's an F dad! My grade average is an F." Goten snorted. "I've given up
dad!"
Okay there's the second chapter. I need 5 reviews please!
Goten: Stop begging.
I'm not, I just like reviews.
Goten: Whatever.
