Okay everyone, it's time for chapter 5 of Goten's abandonment,
but I have a special guest to help me introduce this chapter.
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Okay now time for my special guest. Vegeta will you come
out here to introduce the next chapter?
* Vegeta walks on to stage with his usual scowl *
Vegeta: All right, here's the fifth chapter of
Prinzess_Pippi's story, Goten's Abandonment,
and you better clap, or I'll destroy you all!
Gohan began looking for his Dad's Ki, "Found it!" Were the
last words Gohan uttered before, pop, he disappeared.
"Finally!" Vegeta sighed out loud, "Home alone at last, maybe
I can actually get some good training at last." Vegeta started
walking to the anti-gravity room, when the doorbell rang.
Growling, he turned around and rushed towards the door, and
opened it. Standing there was Kakarotts 13-year-old son.
"What do you want!?" Vegeta growled
"I need your help." Goten replied.Vegeta groaned outwardly, but inside was very surprised.
No one ever asked him for his help, especially not part of the Son family.
Vegeta was about to send Goten on his way when he saw the look on
Goten's face. The look on the young semi-saiyans face was serious
and Vegeta couldn't send him away. "Come in." Vegeta said.
Goten followed Vegeta in to the house. Goten was really nervous,
he can't believe he was doing this, maybe this was a mistake. Oh well
may as well play it out to the end.
The two of them arrived in the living room, and Vegeta sat down,
motioning for Goten to do the same. Goten sat down.
"Now speak boy!" Vegeta demanded, "What do you need my
help on? I hope you know it is quite surprising for a son of Kakarotts
to ask me for help!"
"Umm, I know that sir, but I really need you help, but I am not
sure how to word it." Goten started as tears filled his eyes. He wiped
them away remembering how both Goku and Trunks had told him
crying was weak.
Vegeta saw the tear before Goten had wiped them away, he's a
strong boy, I can feel it, so what had gotten him so upset? Vegeta thought
to himself. He got up from where he was sitting and sat down beside
Goten. "Come on, tell me what's wrong." What am I doing?! Am I
being nice???
Goten looked surprised at Vegeta, what's going on? Goten
thought, why's Vegeta being nice?
"Vegeta," Goten said out loud, "Why doesn't my family
care about me?"
Vegeta was shocked, why would such a young boy think
that? Of course his family cared about them.
"Why do you think that?" Vegeta asked.
" 'Cause Dad always ignores me, unless I am doing something
wrong, and in Gohan's eyes, I can't do anything right, he's always
scolding me!" Goten told Vegeta while trying to stop the tears that
were running down his face, he didn't want to seem weak in front of Vegeta.
"Goten, I want you to listen me very carefully, okay?" Goten
nodded his head. "Your dad is very busy with the new baby, and
trying to raise a baby without it's mother is a tough thing to do, but
he still cares about you. Gohan is very busy with planning the wedding,
and I know that is very stressful. Those women have to have everything
perfect. And don't forget the three of you are still grieving about Chi Chi's
death, it has only been 11 months. Help your Dad and your brother out.
They'll appreciate it."
"You think so Vegeta?" Goten asked, the tears drying on his face.
"I am almost positive. Now go wash your face and I'll fix use
something to eat."
"Thanks Vegeta!" Goten said as he ran off to the bathroom.
Gohan looked around to where he appeared. He had actually
done instant transmission right. Dad would be so proud. He turned
around and right in front of him was Goku, lying on the ground,
unconscious. Gohan bent down and shook his dad.
"Dad? Come on Dad! Wake up!"
But Goku wouldn't wake up. So Gohan picked him and used
the instant transmission to go home.
"Gohan appeared in front of the house with his father in his
arms. Gohan walked into the house and placed his father on the couch,
then walked into the kitchen, got a cold washcloth, which he then
placed on Goku's forehead. Then Gohan sat down on the chair facing
the couch and drifted off to sleep.
Vegeta: All right, I know that, that is a short chapter, but they are
all probably going to be that way, but the chapters will be up quicker,
And Prinzess_Pippi has decided to quit begging for reveiws.
I wasn't begging!
Vegeta: Anyways, read and review, 'cause I'll destroy you if you don't!