Well I guess you guys want chapter 23 so I'll be quick.
This review is from my best friend Alberta-Sweetie. She says "Poor Gohan :(
But wow your spelling and grammar has improved. Hehe just buggin ya. Talk to ya laterz. Luv ya Tiff"
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Disclaimer: I don't own any of these characters, except the ones that don't appear in Dragonball, Z, or GT.
Goten, we've changed our minds, we don't want you to let your father kill you. We have a better plan on making Goku suffer, you just have to trust us Goten, but of course you will, we control your mind. We control you every thoughts. Don't we Goten? Don't we. But we still know you useless Goten, and you know that your family thinks you are useless, so does Young. But trust us Goten, we'll help you make everyone suffer. We promise.
"All right ladies and gentlemen, no more delay it is now time for the final match. Out fighters have made their way to the ring, and are now ready to start the fight."
The crowd cheered with renowned enthusiasm, as they saw the two fighters in the ring. "Sev are you ready?" Sev nodded, "Goku are you ready?" Goku nodded, "Okay…Fight!" The announcer backed as far as he could away from the ring, as the two fighters began to power-up to Super Saiyan Three.
"Goten, I don't want to do this, I don't want to hurt you." Goku said.
"Shut up and fight!" Sneered Sev. Suddenly Sev phased out and appeared above Goku, shooting a large Kamehameha at him. Goku easily blocked the blast, and then quickly counter attacked with his own Kamehameha. Which Sev dodged. Then suddenly Goku disappeared, but knowing he was somewhere near by, it didn't bother Sev.
"Ha, nice try Goku, but you can come out now!" Sev called, and then Goku appeared right in front of Sev, but just as he did Sev disappeared as well. Goku looked around for his son.
"You have to realize Goku." A voice said from behind Goku, "That I've seen instant transmission enough, to have taught to my self. You don't have the advantage anymore Goku. I know all of your tricks, and I'm also stronger than you."
And with that Sev powered up to Super Saiyan Four, and then charged at Goku, the two fighters continued fighting with a flurry of punches and kicks, until Sev caught Goku by surprise, and wrapped his tail around Goku's neck, cutting off his air supply.
Sev smirked, "I guess I forgot to mention, I'm smarter than you too." Sev tighten his tail around his neck, "Oh are you seeing spots?" Sev asked sarcastically. "Sorry."
Goku was beginning to feel faint, but then Sev threw him to the ground. "I'm not through with you yet." Snarled Sev.
Goku slowly got to his feet, and Sev landed in front of him.
"Why are you doing this?" Goku asked, gasping for air.
"Because I hate you. You ruined my life." Sev, said, "So did Vegeta, and Videl." Sev smiled slyly.
"You killed Videl didn't you?" Goku asked.
Instead of answering Sev once again charged at Goku. Goku blocked his kicks and punches, be wary of his tail, he knew he couldn't afford another mistake like that, his son was out for blood.
"Goten stop! Stop this. We all still care about you! And we want you to come home!"
"Liar!" Sev gasped trying to catch his breath from their last round of kicks and punches, "You don't care about me! You never did! Mom didn't even care about me! Now shut-up and fight!"
"Goten! Remember…remember right before your mother gave birth, how she was very sick in the hospital? Remember? You were feeling left out? So what did Gohan and I do?"
Sev thought for a moment, "You and Gohan stayed up all night playing games with me, watching movies with me, and letting me eat whatever I wanted. I remember."
NO! Goten, that's a lie! An image they put into your head! You don't believe that! Sev's mind screamed. "No!" Sev screamed out loud, "You're lying again!" Goku looked confused, and became even more confused when Sev fell to his knees screaming. "Get out of my head! I don't want you to control me!!! Why won't you just leave me alone?" Sev then stood up and looked straight a Goku, "Stop lying to me!"
"Goten I'm not lying. Look into your heart! Remember all the good memories! Please. Remember the day you ran away? When you went Super Saiyan Three for the first tine around me? When you beat me in that fight we had? Well I wasn't able to say it then, but I'll say it now, I was very proud of you."
"You were?" Sev questioned. "Oh Dad! I've been an idiot!"
"No, you were just being a teenager."
Suddenly Goten saw a figure creeping up behind Goku, he realized it was Rocko. Then to Goten's surprise and horror, Rocko sent a large energy blast flying towards Goku, who was too busy paying attention to Goten to realize it. "Dad!" Goten screamed and used instant transmission to disappear and reappear in front of the blast. The blast went right through Goten's stomach.
"NO!" Goku screamed, going Super Saiyan Four, and sending a very large, very powerful Kamehameha at Rocko, killing him instantly.
The master watched as Rocko's limp body fell to the ground, figures, it was always hard to find good help these days. The master took the hood off, and shook out her long turquoise hair. Oh well, Bra thought smiling evilly, there were plenty of others to do her bidding.
Goku dropped out of super, and fell to his knees bedside Goten. Goku was crying, he had given his bag of senzu beans to Gohan before the fight, and he couldn't see his eldest son anywhere. "Goten, hold on. You'll be alright."
Goten weakly opened his eyes. "Dad I'm sorry. Tell Bulma, Gohan, and everybody I'm sorry. I love you Dad." And after that speech, which took the rest of Goten's energy, Goten took his last breath of air.
Goku dropped his head to his son's chest and began to sob.
Well everyone that's the end of that story. But don't worry, if I get at least 65 reviews I will bring out the sequel. But I need to know if you guys want it. And to explain, the reason I changed Sev's name back to Goten about half way through is to show the transition from 'bad guy' to 'good guy' if you know what I mean.