Hey y'all I need suggestions please, is there some way I could make it more clear as too who's who? Eventually I will rewrite this fic in a final format with all the revisions and repost it (somewhere, probably over the original). Any way that's why I need your help (as it is I'm already going over and revising the chapters). ^-^ so pweasee help^-^ plus any suggestions as to plot, urgh my mind is gonna explode trying to think of a good story in which to develop this partial fic into, I mean I got lots of ideas but nothing very specific.
Switches Witches Nervous-twitches
Chapter: 5 There and back again, a Hanyo's fairytale Part: 2
Shippo proceeded to the circle of friends and took a seat in Kagome's lap, but was forced to get up when he remembered Kagome and Inu-yasha had switched bodies, ie: he was running a risk by sitting where he had been. "Well it seams to me you two need to switch back as soon as possible," he said looking Kagome up and down with slight disgust at the thought of the Hanyo who now possessed her body.
"No duh," said Kagome's body with an expression on her face that looked so much like Inu-yasha it wasn't funny.
"Shut… UP!" Shippo spat slapping a silencing scroll on her mouth, which like most of his illusions, was pulled from one of the many bottomless pockets in his shirt. "Any way, I was trying to say that we need to get you back to normal as soon as possible."
"Why?" asked Inu-yasha's body.
"So we can stop confusing the readers!" he yelled.
"Really?"
Squabble, Squabble, Squabble, Squabble, Squabble, Squabble, Squabble.
*Ahem * "We will now take an intermission" say's Miroku turning to face the camera momentarily (a few hours of mindless squabble pass).
"No! We need you back because according to the book it say's…" *Squish*
"We know what it say's squirt!" said Kagome's body putting her hand on Shippo's head and flattening him into the floor.
"Hey when did you take the silencing scroll off?" asked Miroku.
"Never mind that," said Shippo who was brushing him self off. "Look in the back of the book."
Sango flipped the book open to the few last pages. "Hey there's something written here!" she said excitedly.
"No… Really!" said Shippo looking slightly peeved.
"Yeah, really!" Sango said excitedly.
*Sweat drops*
"Look, look what it say's here!" she said pointing to a entry. "Today is the third of August and I have learned of yet another effect of the curse. My wife (the demon whom I switched bodies with) is turning in to a demon again well kinda. But SHE'S STILL IN MY BODY!!! I guess some how the powers slowly transfer back to there original owners. I confronted Nrab about it today and she told me that once the powers move back to there original owners the change will be complete. In other words once all of my wife's powers move to her current body (MINE!) the change will be permanent and I will be forever in a female Yokai's body (which will be powerless) and my wife will be stuck in a human body with the powers of a female Yokai.
It took much discussing to figure out what it meant but finally they decided on something they all agreed upon.
"So we all agree?" said Sango, while Shippo shook his head the others nodded. "We all agree this doesn't sound good."
"Let's just go find Nrab," said Shippo deciding to give up and try his best to help the confused group in another way that didn't really concern thinking.
"Good idea Shippo!" said Kagome's body cracking her fingers where slight evidence of claws where visible. "Lets go!" she yelled running out the door.
I'm sorry I kinda made all the characters stupid (I have a tendency to do that). ^-^ Any way I hope this chapter is clearer as too who's talking and what's going on. If not please tell me and I'll work harder to amend my stories before posting them.