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Author: Everyone talks like this.
*Everyone thinks like this.*
(and everyone does stuff like this)
(authors note: except if I do this)
~ this is where bits of a song come along~
-also this is were text messeging is at-
AN: It's not too late, you can still submit by the way.
Maxi and the Pogster(maxindpogster) give recognition to MZXTREME for changing the outcome of the fic.
One more thing, if you read the rules, you'll know that I can change some of the characters' bio. An example must be made, sadly. So here's the first character change:
Sari Altail: Sari got out herself and someone else who looks like Bit and has a Liger stopped her.
That's pretty much all I want to say, for now.
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Somewhere around the desert, all three Whale Kings landed as the mouths opened. Out of one mouth came commander Altail and out of the others came Polta and Fuma, along with Chaos and Kyle in their Zoids.
Altail: So these are the stolen Ligers...
Polta: Seems so.
Altail: Are they highly trained? I don't want the Genesis training to kill them.
Fuma: Believe me, these are the best of all the mercenaries we've picked up.
Altail: Are you sure about that?
Fuma: I'm positive.
Polta: Should we join you and see how this whole thing's going to work? They do belong to us afterall.
Altail: Once they're in Genesis, they become my property. You both have your own teams, right?
Polta: They're all in your Whale King.
Altail: Then go get them and start training. (gives both remote controllers) Here.
Polta: But shouldn't we use them at the right time?
Fuma: We have one week left, why use them now?
Altail: We've already checked them out, so now we'll test them in battle.
Polta: Uh huh. Guess that means I have to set up another match..
Chaos: What are those?
Altail: You'll see when we go in battle.
Kyle: That'll be today, right?
Altail: That's correct. We'll start by sunset.
Polta: Oh yeah, and we're running out of money.
Altail: Can't you just steal them from someone?
Fuma: Everyone's already aware of the whole thing.
Altail: .. Fine then. I'll see what I can do.
And with that, a few minutes later, Polta and Fuma grabbed their men and walked into their Whale Kings. What they didn't know was that a few miles away stood Sari. Pretty soon, all three of them took off and departed, hoping to get some things done, up in the Whale King of Altail, the old man himself walked up to two men standing on front of him. One of them was Jason and the other one was Kiyin's older brother, a 23 year old 6' tall person with slightly long dark blonde hair combed left and over his eyes. He had dark, sinister looking and pitch black eyes and wore a black long trenchcoat with matching beret. He had on a blue bandana tied around his arm as an accesory. He seems to be the tall and handsome type that would only attract 70% of the girls.
Jason: You wanted something?
???: This better me good.
Altail: The Backdraft's running out of money and we need more.
Jason: We were trained in Genesis to fight Zoids, old man. Not to run errands!
???: Best watch who you give your orders to, nobody!
Altail: I'll let you bring the Zoids if you want.
Jason: .. Then I'm taking the GVX.
Altail: Not the GVX! Suna needs it for her next match!
Jason: Tough luck! She was never cut out to be a warrior in the first place!
???: Why are we even talking about her in the first place.
Jason: (starts walking) You're right. Let's just get the job done.
Altail: Does that mean?
Jason: Screw Suna. I'm taking the GVX.
Altail: Get back here!
Jason: Shut up old man.
Altail: (grr) *It's punks like him that make the organization look bad.* Edylg, stop him!
Edylg: (walking with Jason) Next time ask the right people to do your work!
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(all black)
???: No! She can't be!
???2: I'm sorry.. Of all of the people I've seen, I'd say she's suffered the worst death of all.
???: Who did this!?
???2: I don't know.. (crash) Oh no! It's here! (AN: please go to the next scene at the speed of light)
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Suna quickly woke up from her nightmare of her mom. She found herself sitting down right against a wall, watching all the other Backdraft members rough it up. She was feeling a little bit lonely because of the fact that everyone was doing something else. As she waited for her match, she lifted her wrist up and stared into her bracelet. She remembered why she even joined the Backdraft and become a Genesis warrior. But she can't sit around because she had her match in a few.
Altail walked into the hanger and found everyone getting ready for their match. Aileea had an excuse because she needed alittle bit more training for a Zoid she's sure to get. Chakra had her Zabat built up and ready to go while Kiyin made some last minute modifications. Suna then walked in.
Altail: Suna, you're not going into battle today.
Suna: What? Why?
Altail: Jason took the GVX.
Suna: Damn!
Chakra: But that means the only ones going into battle are me and Kiyin.
Altail: No. You have two more members.
The door opened and out came the footsteps of one person. The footsteps were then followed by another set of footsteps. All three girls looked down and slowly moved their heads up as the paid attention to the details. The people who were going into battle were Chaos and Kyle.
Altail: This is Chaos and Kyle.
Chakra: What kinda name is Chaos?
Chaos: It's a nickname.
Kyle: So this is Genesis.. Must be a very elite team, considering there's only 3 people.
Altail: We have a few more, but for today, you four will be going into battle.
Kiyin: You sure we can take care of this one?
Altail: You're a Genesis warrior. There's your answer. Now get ready. (leaves)
Kiyin: This isn't fair. We can't win without the GVX.
Chakra: I know. Suna's like our top warrior for us.
Suna: I can't believe Jason took the GVX! What does he need with it anyway!?
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In the main room, Altail walked in and decided to take a look through the window. Now that the count's out of the way, it seems like he has became the leader of the Backdraft. Not only that, but he has trained the most skilled, making them a group called Genesis. As he looked down on the ground, he started thinking about the Blitz team and how they've humiliated him in many different ways. It doesn't matter anymore, because what they have coming will be next week.
Altail: ... (smiles)
The Whale King flew right over the desert, not knowing that under it was the Liger Zero X. Right next to the Zoid was Sari, who was now looking at her picture of Altail as disgrace was written over her face. She put away the picture and then went back to her Zoid. As the Liger Zero X moved to the next stop, Sari started thinking of what she'd do once she gets to the commander of the Backdraft.
Sari: It's been a long time..
(flashback)
Sari was walking through the Whale King, but was then Altail grabbed her and knocked her out. A few hours later Altail went to the Backdraft science lab and shoved Sari into a stasis pod (AN: bear with me, think enchanced organoid style). A few minutes later, in the sky, the Whale King opened its bottom hatch as the pod flew out.
(flash)
A few later, the pod opened in the middle of the desert, letting Sari out. Knowing that it was Altail who did this, she ran to the nearest city, hoping to get her revenge. She does know that it's wrong, but if you get knocked out and stuffed in a stasis pod for a long time, who the hell gives?
(flash)
Everything then came to a flash and Sari fell onto the ground. She was just given a few more seconds before she faints as she looked up. Looking up, she sees a blonde boy with his Liger in the back. And then she fainted. Her perfect plan to get back at the commander was stopped by this guy.
(flash)
As she woke up, she found herself in bed at a nearby hospital and was badly injured. As she looked around, she looked up into the TV and saw a match. As she watched, she found out something very important: The person who stopped her was right there. He went by the name of Bit Cloud and he piloted the Liger Zero. As she watched, anger flowed through her veins. She did want revenge on the one who stuffed her in the pod, but for now, she wanted revenge on someone named Bit Cloud. A few minute later, people were being mugged and were beaten to the ground as Sari left the hospital and headed to the Gareel Plateau, where the remains of the Death Stinger lay.
(flash)
Sari did everything she could. She tried using Warsharks, Hel Digunners and even tried to blow away the sand with air type Zoids. No matter what she did, she never got anything. But just when she was about to give up, she found Altail again. She then dropped the whole act with Bit for later and stole what happened to be the only Zoid left, the Liger Zero X.
(end flashback)
Sari: *Bit can come later. But you're my victim for now. I'll never forget all the torchure you've given me in that hell hole. You thought you can get rid of me, huh? .. Now I'm back and now I only have one thing to say...* The hunt is on, brother!
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Please review and tell me what you think. Tell me what you want to see and maybe I'll think it over.
Author: Everyone talks like this.
*Everyone thinks like this.*
(and everyone does stuff like this)
(authors note: except if I do this)
~ this is where bits of a song come along~
-also this is were text messeging is at-
AN: It's not too late, you can still submit by the way.
Maxi and the Pogster(maxindpogster) give recognition to MZXTREME for changing the outcome of the fic.
One more thing, if you read the rules, you'll know that I can change some of the characters' bio. An example must be made, sadly. So here's the first character change:
Sari Altail: Sari got out herself and someone else who looks like Bit and has a Liger stopped her.
That's pretty much all I want to say, for now.
************************************
Somewhere around the desert, all three Whale Kings landed as the mouths opened. Out of one mouth came commander Altail and out of the others came Polta and Fuma, along with Chaos and Kyle in their Zoids.
Altail: So these are the stolen Ligers...
Polta: Seems so.
Altail: Are they highly trained? I don't want the Genesis training to kill them.
Fuma: Believe me, these are the best of all the mercenaries we've picked up.
Altail: Are you sure about that?
Fuma: I'm positive.
Polta: Should we join you and see how this whole thing's going to work? They do belong to us afterall.
Altail: Once they're in Genesis, they become my property. You both have your own teams, right?
Polta: They're all in your Whale King.
Altail: Then go get them and start training. (gives both remote controllers) Here.
Polta: But shouldn't we use them at the right time?
Fuma: We have one week left, why use them now?
Altail: We've already checked them out, so now we'll test them in battle.
Polta: Uh huh. Guess that means I have to set up another match..
Chaos: What are those?
Altail: You'll see when we go in battle.
Kyle: That'll be today, right?
Altail: That's correct. We'll start by sunset.
Polta: Oh yeah, and we're running out of money.
Altail: Can't you just steal them from someone?
Fuma: Everyone's already aware of the whole thing.
Altail: .. Fine then. I'll see what I can do.
And with that, a few minutes later, Polta and Fuma grabbed their men and walked into their Whale Kings. What they didn't know was that a few miles away stood Sari. Pretty soon, all three of them took off and departed, hoping to get some things done, up in the Whale King of Altail, the old man himself walked up to two men standing on front of him. One of them was Jason and the other one was Kiyin's older brother, a 23 year old 6' tall person with slightly long dark blonde hair combed left and over his eyes. He had dark, sinister looking and pitch black eyes and wore a black long trenchcoat with matching beret. He had on a blue bandana tied around his arm as an accesory. He seems to be the tall and handsome type that would only attract 70% of the girls.
Jason: You wanted something?
???: This better me good.
Altail: The Backdraft's running out of money and we need more.
Jason: We were trained in Genesis to fight Zoids, old man. Not to run errands!
???: Best watch who you give your orders to, nobody!
Altail: I'll let you bring the Zoids if you want.
Jason: .. Then I'm taking the GVX.
Altail: Not the GVX! Suna needs it for her next match!
Jason: Tough luck! She was never cut out to be a warrior in the first place!
???: Why are we even talking about her in the first place.
Jason: (starts walking) You're right. Let's just get the job done.
Altail: Does that mean?
Jason: Screw Suna. I'm taking the GVX.
Altail: Get back here!
Jason: Shut up old man.
Altail: (grr) *It's punks like him that make the organization look bad.* Edylg, stop him!
Edylg: (walking with Jason) Next time ask the right people to do your work!
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(all black)
???: No! She can't be!
???2: I'm sorry.. Of all of the people I've seen, I'd say she's suffered the worst death of all.
???: Who did this!?
???2: I don't know.. (crash) Oh no! It's here! (AN: please go to the next scene at the speed of light)
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Suna quickly woke up from her nightmare of her mom. She found herself sitting down right against a wall, watching all the other Backdraft members rough it up. She was feeling a little bit lonely because of the fact that everyone was doing something else. As she waited for her match, she lifted her wrist up and stared into her bracelet. She remembered why she even joined the Backdraft and become a Genesis warrior. But she can't sit around because she had her match in a few.
Altail walked into the hanger and found everyone getting ready for their match. Aileea had an excuse because she needed alittle bit more training for a Zoid she's sure to get. Chakra had her Zabat built up and ready to go while Kiyin made some last minute modifications. Suna then walked in.
Altail: Suna, you're not going into battle today.
Suna: What? Why?
Altail: Jason took the GVX.
Suna: Damn!
Chakra: But that means the only ones going into battle are me and Kiyin.
Altail: No. You have two more members.
The door opened and out came the footsteps of one person. The footsteps were then followed by another set of footsteps. All three girls looked down and slowly moved their heads up as the paid attention to the details. The people who were going into battle were Chaos and Kyle.
Altail: This is Chaos and Kyle.
Chakra: What kinda name is Chaos?
Chaos: It's a nickname.
Kyle: So this is Genesis.. Must be a very elite team, considering there's only 3 people.
Altail: We have a few more, but for today, you four will be going into battle.
Kiyin: You sure we can take care of this one?
Altail: You're a Genesis warrior. There's your answer. Now get ready. (leaves)
Kiyin: This isn't fair. We can't win without the GVX.
Chakra: I know. Suna's like our top warrior for us.
Suna: I can't believe Jason took the GVX! What does he need with it anyway!?
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In the main room, Altail walked in and decided to take a look through the window. Now that the count's out of the way, it seems like he has became the leader of the Backdraft. Not only that, but he has trained the most skilled, making them a group called Genesis. As he looked down on the ground, he started thinking about the Blitz team and how they've humiliated him in many different ways. It doesn't matter anymore, because what they have coming will be next week.
Altail: ... (smiles)
The Whale King flew right over the desert, not knowing that under it was the Liger Zero X. Right next to the Zoid was Sari, who was now looking at her picture of Altail as disgrace was written over her face. She put away the picture and then went back to her Zoid. As the Liger Zero X moved to the next stop, Sari started thinking of what she'd do once she gets to the commander of the Backdraft.
Sari: It's been a long time..
(flashback)
Sari was walking through the Whale King, but was then Altail grabbed her and knocked her out. A few hours later Altail went to the Backdraft science lab and shoved Sari into a stasis pod (AN: bear with me, think enchanced organoid style). A few minutes later, in the sky, the Whale King opened its bottom hatch as the pod flew out.
(flash)
A few later, the pod opened in the middle of the desert, letting Sari out. Knowing that it was Altail who did this, she ran to the nearest city, hoping to get her revenge. She does know that it's wrong, but if you get knocked out and stuffed in a stasis pod for a long time, who the hell gives?
(flash)
Everything then came to a flash and Sari fell onto the ground. She was just given a few more seconds before she faints as she looked up. Looking up, she sees a blonde boy with his Liger in the back. And then she fainted. Her perfect plan to get back at the commander was stopped by this guy.
(flash)
As she woke up, she found herself in bed at a nearby hospital and was badly injured. As she looked around, she looked up into the TV and saw a match. As she watched, she found out something very important: The person who stopped her was right there. He went by the name of Bit Cloud and he piloted the Liger Zero. As she watched, anger flowed through her veins. She did want revenge on the one who stuffed her in the pod, but for now, she wanted revenge on someone named Bit Cloud. A few minute later, people were being mugged and were beaten to the ground as Sari left the hospital and headed to the Gareel Plateau, where the remains of the Death Stinger lay.
(flash)
Sari did everything she could. She tried using Warsharks, Hel Digunners and even tried to blow away the sand with air type Zoids. No matter what she did, she never got anything. But just when she was about to give up, she found Altail again. She then dropped the whole act with Bit for later and stole what happened to be the only Zoid left, the Liger Zero X.
(end flashback)
Sari: *Bit can come later. But you're my victim for now. I'll never forget all the torchure you've given me in that hell hole. You thought you can get rid of me, huh? .. Now I'm back and now I only have one thing to say...* The hunt is on, brother!
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Please review and tell me what you think. Tell me what you want to see and maybe I'll think it over.