Disclaimer: I don't own Zoids but only the characters I made and any new Zoid.Keep this in mind:
Author: Everyone talks like this.
*Everyone thinks like this.*
(and everyone does stuff like this)
(authors note: except if I do this)
~ this is where bits of a song come along~
-also this is were text messeging is at-
AN: It's not too late, you can still submit by the way.
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Max was looking through the computer and noticed that they have been challenged to a match with the Blitz team at 0982. The match was a 3 on 3 and also had one stipulation. Whoever the three were, they want Anne and him to be in it.
Max: What the..
Not knowing what to do, and because he wants to see what Anne's doing, he called on Dr. Layon for the details. But when the screen was on, he didn't see Layon at all, but Anne was. In the Whale King, Layon was sleeping in his movie room, watching the greatest matches of all time. Anne, meanwhile was lying down until she realized that Max was on the screen. She then hopped back on her feet and ran to the screen.
Anne: Max! Thank Zoid Eve you're calling.
Max: You really THAT desperate?
Anne: .. (sweatdrop) ahem.. I was having a good night's sleep. Geez, I'm gone for only a few minutes and now you're calling me? You really must be missing me, huh?
Max: .. Right.. Actually, I was wondering if the doc's around.
Anne: The doc? He's in the movie room, sleeping. Help me, Max. It's Hell up here. I don't wanna be here.
Max: Why?
Anne: Cause I'm forced to make noodles! Not only that, but he wants me to check data on the battle mode 1234.
Max: Well that's what you get when you get a Zoid cut in half.
Anne: Shut up! Curse Silver Lightning Saix!!! (looks around) Hey.. Where's Larry and Craig?
Max: Blitz team's.
Anne: And what about Maria?
Max: In Larry's room.
Anne: Right. Anyway, I don't see how you can actually put up with this guy. How were YOU when you joined the Alpha team?
Max: Technically, I helped formed it.
Anne: Either way, you spent time with the doc on the Whale King for a few days. How bad was it?
Max: We'll just say things got better when you all came around.
Anne: (smiles) That's a sweet thing of you to say.
Max: Wanna hear something naughty? (both laugh)
Layon: (walks into the room) Are my noodles ready? Oh. Hey, Max.
Max: Oh! I forgot! The Blitz team challenged us to a match tomorrow at 0982. 3 on 3. The thing is whoever it is, they want the two to be me and Anne.
Layon: Great! That means we can debut Anne's new Zoid!
Max: New Zoid?
Layon: ... I'll show you when we get back tomorrow. Until then, I'm going to sleep. (leaves)
Max: What did he mean by new Zoid?
Anne: We'll just say that with a Zoid like what the doc made me, we could be the ultimate team. Just be glad I pilot a Dibison.
Max: Can't wait to see it tomorrow, then.
Anne: .. I might as well get some sleep also.
Max: But it's only around 7.
Anne: Well there's nothing else to do! Well goodnight Max. I hope I get back to the base soon.
Max: (smiles) I hope so too.
Anne: Later. (screen shuts off)
Anne then walked off to where her room was, feeling happy that Max was there for her when she was getting as bored as Hell. She always knew that she and Max where "partners in crime" in AND out of the battlefield, always watching eachother's backs whenever something happens. But enough about that, she went to her room and started sleeping.
Now this was something Max doesn't get everyday. Now his team's been challenged by the Blitz team. Who would've thought his team would actually be THIS special. Oh well. He best get ready. Even though it was late at night, he was thinking about going to the hanger and grab the Iron Monkey for a test drive, but as soon as he left the computer room, he found Maria walking down the stairs.. Or at least he THOUGHT she was Maria. Even though Max was wearing sunglasses, she could already tell he was looking at her.
Max: *Holy mutha f--*
Maria: Hey Max. Whatcha lookin at?
Max: .. (shakes head back to reality) Nothing. So what happen to the biker girl look?
Maria: I dress like this on special occasion.
Max: .. (eyebrow up) SPECIAL occasion?
Maria: (smiling) You have plans tonight?
Max: .. Not really. (smiling) You have anything in mind?
Maria: I was gonna go see a movie. But I can't seem to find out where the nearest town is. Since you're not going anywhere, you think you can come with me?
Max: .. (smirks) Is this what I think it is?
Maria: Only if you say it is..
Max: .. Alright then. It's a date.
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The Whale King landed somewhere around a nearby resturaunt and all the members of the Backdraft took the night around city. Suna, Aileea, Chakra and Kiyin were together, knowing that they can only trust eachother. Nobody knew where Jason and Edylg went, nor do they care.
Chakra: I just don't get why those two have to be with us. Why the hell would Altail wanna bail THEM out of jail.
Aileea: Forget them. It could get worse.
Kiyin: Yeah, I know. Remember Scott.
Suna: Two of them's bad, but three's just worse.
Chakra: Yeah, I know. I like to see what happens if we get to treat them like what they do to us. No offense, Kiyin.
Kiyin: None taken.
Suna: What are we waiting for, let's just go now.
Aileea: Let's just have a good time. It's the ladies' night out.
Somewhere around the city, Scott walked in, seeing if Michael was around. Assuming that he wasn't in this town, he was now free to find the place where he was going. Noticing the Whale King gave him a hint that a certain group of people were here. As he walked, somone from the back alley grabbed him and pulled him in. He found himself pushed against a wall with a sword close up to his neck.
Jason: Give us your money!
Edylg: Or we'll chop your head off!
Scott: Yo! It's me! Scott!
Edylg: Oh. (put sword back) It's you. I haven't seen you in a while. It's been a month you know.
Scott: Life without the Backdraft sucks, you know. To make things worse, I was being chased down the whole time.
Edylg: That doesn't matter anymore, because the three of us are here now. There may be more of us, but until then WE are Genesis.
Scott: We're the only ones?
Jason: The wussies are here also.
Scott: You mean Suna and the others!? Great! What else could get worse?
Jason: ... We have two new members.
Scott: Who?
Jason and Edylg then looked into the shadows of the alley, who was then being copied by Scott. As they looked into the dark, out of the darkness came Chaos and Kyle. Eyes locked on to eachother as everything became silent.
Scott: So you're the new members of Genesis?
Chaos: Yeah.
Scott: What the hell did Altail see in you?
Kyle: We're the best mercenaries they could find.
Scott: The old geezer needs glasses. (all three laugh)
Chaos: We also have a special kind of Liger.
Jason: So what? The GVX is also a special Zoid, but that doesn't mean the pilot should be in Genesis.
Scott: Oh yeah. Did anything happen to my Zoid while I was gone.
Edylg: No. It's all in the Whale King.
Scott: Good. So now we're back to unsanctioned battles and money, right?
Jason: No way. We have enough money from the Champs. We're ready for our real goal now.
Scott: The real goal? Are you sure?
Edylg: Is Chakra a brat?
Scott: I don't believe it. This soon?
Jason: Enough with the questions. Let's just go back to the Whale King. This place is starting to bore me.
Everyone else then started to leave to the Whale King, from Kyle, to Scott, to Edylg. The only ones who stayed behind were Chaos and Jason. A few seconds later, both of them made eye contact. Everything was silent once again until Chaos started talking.
Chaos: What do you mean by the real goal?
Jason: (laughs) Well, Chaos, what DID you think our goal was?
Chaos: To bring unsanctioned battles to the Zoid battling world. At least that's what I've heard.
Jason: .. Why do you think we do that?
Chaos: I don't know. Either to be remembered as a group or to get lots of money.
Jason: .. If you really wanna know, it's a little bit of both.
Chaos: Both?
Jason: We use the money to buy some equipment. But now we don't care anymore for buying. We're planning to take it.
Chaos: So your goal is to take some equipment. What for?
Jason: .. Just wait and see, Chaos.
Jason then walked out of the alley, who was later then followed by Chaos. As he walked, something started to bug him. All this time, the Backdraft group was taking Zoids, stealing their scrap, holding unsanctioned battles for betting, just so they can get enough money for some equipment? Something told him that things are gonna get ugly once they get what they want.
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Just a few hours ago, Polta has been recognized by Salene. Hours have passed since then and they've been talking throughout the entire afternoon. It was now night time and they were walking around the street.
Salene: It's been a long time.
Polta: I know.. 4 years..
Salene: I can't believe you. You left me to join the Backdraft Group... Why?
Polta: ... I dunno... Maybe a voice was calling on me.. But let me tell you this. I was still thinking of you those past 4 years.
Salene: .. I was thinking of you too... So you were arrested, huh?
Polta: Yeah. But I've been out a couple of times to get a Stealth Stormsworder.
Salene: A Stealth Stormsworder?
Polta: It was stolen by this one punk called Larry Champ.
Salene: What were you gonna use it for?
Polta: I was gonna bust some people out of jail at night. Now that we're all bailed, we can go for our true goal.
Salene: True goal? I don't get it. Why are you doing this?
Polta: Yeah. But there's this Zoid that keeps getting in our way called the Liger Zero. But that's alright, we have what we believe are Zoids that could actually match the Liger Zero. But still.. If there was a weakness to that thing, then maybe our names would be heard.
Salene: But do you really have to do this?
Polta: .. It's like what I said. A voice was calling me. It's like a dream of mine to be doing this. Don't you have a dream?
Polta: It's getting late, I have to get ready for something next week.
Salene: Next week?
Polta: I promise I'll see you again.
Salene: Then here. (gives card to Polta)
The man behind the sunglasses then smiled as he waved his last goodbye and left. As he walked, Polta took off his sunglasses and looked around to see in anyone was watching. He then took his visors out of his jacket and wore them as he walked into his Whale King.
Salene was at her shop, cleaning up and hoping she could go see Polta again. But out of the blue came the Hover Cargo. The doc and Bit then walked inside to find whoever was working there until they spotted Salene.
Bit: Hey. You think you can fix my Liger.
Salene: Sorry, the store's closed.
Doc: But it won't be of any trouble. You see, the command system's jammed with a crowbar and I was hoping that you can fix it.
Salene: .. Ok .. just bring it in.
And with that, the Liger Zero walked in as if he was crippled. Salene couldn't believe. Of all the ironies, this would have to happen. A few minutes later, Bit and the doc went back to the Hover Cargo, hoping that the Liger Zero is alright. Alone in the repair shop, Salene went into the cockpit and took some notes on the condition the Liger Zero is at now.
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*Attention*
This is very important. Everyone needs to answer:
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*After deep consideration from a review of Safire Griffin, I had to ask this question. I ask this because:
1) More characters will only give lesser appearances to the older characters.
2) As Safire Griffin said, the characters need to be enchanced. The only characters that should be submitted are those who enchance the main characters.
Do you support Safire Griffin's suggestion?
*Also, there are people who submit a character, but once they're in, they never EVER review. Are they even reading!? So here's my question:
In my opinion, I think those who don't review should be out of the story. Some of them may be important, but I have ways of getting rid of them. What do you think?
Please review and tell me what you think. Tell me what you want to see and maybe I'll think it over.
Author: Everyone talks like this.
*Everyone thinks like this.*
(and everyone does stuff like this)
(authors note: except if I do this)
~ this is where bits of a song come along~
-also this is were text messeging is at-
AN: It's not too late, you can still submit by the way.
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Max was looking through the computer and noticed that they have been challenged to a match with the Blitz team at 0982. The match was a 3 on 3 and also had one stipulation. Whoever the three were, they want Anne and him to be in it.
Max: What the..
Not knowing what to do, and because he wants to see what Anne's doing, he called on Dr. Layon for the details. But when the screen was on, he didn't see Layon at all, but Anne was. In the Whale King, Layon was sleeping in his movie room, watching the greatest matches of all time. Anne, meanwhile was lying down until she realized that Max was on the screen. She then hopped back on her feet and ran to the screen.
Anne: Max! Thank Zoid Eve you're calling.
Max: You really THAT desperate?
Anne: .. (sweatdrop) ahem.. I was having a good night's sleep. Geez, I'm gone for only a few minutes and now you're calling me? You really must be missing me, huh?
Max: .. Right.. Actually, I was wondering if the doc's around.
Anne: The doc? He's in the movie room, sleeping. Help me, Max. It's Hell up here. I don't wanna be here.
Max: Why?
Anne: Cause I'm forced to make noodles! Not only that, but he wants me to check data on the battle mode 1234.
Max: Well that's what you get when you get a Zoid cut in half.
Anne: Shut up! Curse Silver Lightning Saix!!! (looks around) Hey.. Where's Larry and Craig?
Max: Blitz team's.
Anne: And what about Maria?
Max: In Larry's room.
Anne: Right. Anyway, I don't see how you can actually put up with this guy. How were YOU when you joined the Alpha team?
Max: Technically, I helped formed it.
Anne: Either way, you spent time with the doc on the Whale King for a few days. How bad was it?
Max: We'll just say things got better when you all came around.
Anne: (smiles) That's a sweet thing of you to say.
Max: Wanna hear something naughty? (both laugh)
Layon: (walks into the room) Are my noodles ready? Oh. Hey, Max.
Max: Oh! I forgot! The Blitz team challenged us to a match tomorrow at 0982. 3 on 3. The thing is whoever it is, they want the two to be me and Anne.
Layon: Great! That means we can debut Anne's new Zoid!
Max: New Zoid?
Layon: ... I'll show you when we get back tomorrow. Until then, I'm going to sleep. (leaves)
Max: What did he mean by new Zoid?
Anne: We'll just say that with a Zoid like what the doc made me, we could be the ultimate team. Just be glad I pilot a Dibison.
Max: Can't wait to see it tomorrow, then.
Anne: .. I might as well get some sleep also.
Max: But it's only around 7.
Anne: Well there's nothing else to do! Well goodnight Max. I hope I get back to the base soon.
Max: (smiles) I hope so too.
Anne: Later. (screen shuts off)
Anne then walked off to where her room was, feeling happy that Max was there for her when she was getting as bored as Hell. She always knew that she and Max where "partners in crime" in AND out of the battlefield, always watching eachother's backs whenever something happens. But enough about that, she went to her room and started sleeping.
Now this was something Max doesn't get everyday. Now his team's been challenged by the Blitz team. Who would've thought his team would actually be THIS special. Oh well. He best get ready. Even though it was late at night, he was thinking about going to the hanger and grab the Iron Monkey for a test drive, but as soon as he left the computer room, he found Maria walking down the stairs.. Or at least he THOUGHT she was Maria. Even though Max was wearing sunglasses, she could already tell he was looking at her.
Max: *Holy mutha f--*
Maria: Hey Max. Whatcha lookin at?
Max: .. (shakes head back to reality) Nothing. So what happen to the biker girl look?
Maria: I dress like this on special occasion.
Max: .. (eyebrow up) SPECIAL occasion?
Maria: (smiling) You have plans tonight?
Max: .. Not really. (smiling) You have anything in mind?
Maria: I was gonna go see a movie. But I can't seem to find out where the nearest town is. Since you're not going anywhere, you think you can come with me?
Max: .. (smirks) Is this what I think it is?
Maria: Only if you say it is..
Max: .. Alright then. It's a date.
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The Whale King landed somewhere around a nearby resturaunt and all the members of the Backdraft took the night around city. Suna, Aileea, Chakra and Kiyin were together, knowing that they can only trust eachother. Nobody knew where Jason and Edylg went, nor do they care.
Chakra: I just don't get why those two have to be with us. Why the hell would Altail wanna bail THEM out of jail.
Aileea: Forget them. It could get worse.
Kiyin: Yeah, I know. Remember Scott.
Suna: Two of them's bad, but three's just worse.
Chakra: Yeah, I know. I like to see what happens if we get to treat them like what they do to us. No offense, Kiyin.
Kiyin: None taken.
Suna: What are we waiting for, let's just go now.
Aileea: Let's just have a good time. It's the ladies' night out.
Somewhere around the city, Scott walked in, seeing if Michael was around. Assuming that he wasn't in this town, he was now free to find the place where he was going. Noticing the Whale King gave him a hint that a certain group of people were here. As he walked, somone from the back alley grabbed him and pulled him in. He found himself pushed against a wall with a sword close up to his neck.
Jason: Give us your money!
Edylg: Or we'll chop your head off!
Scott: Yo! It's me! Scott!
Edylg: Oh. (put sword back) It's you. I haven't seen you in a while. It's been a month you know.
Scott: Life without the Backdraft sucks, you know. To make things worse, I was being chased down the whole time.
Edylg: That doesn't matter anymore, because the three of us are here now. There may be more of us, but until then WE are Genesis.
Scott: We're the only ones?
Jason: The wussies are here also.
Scott: You mean Suna and the others!? Great! What else could get worse?
Jason: ... We have two new members.
Scott: Who?
Jason and Edylg then looked into the shadows of the alley, who was then being copied by Scott. As they looked into the dark, out of the darkness came Chaos and Kyle. Eyes locked on to eachother as everything became silent.
Scott: So you're the new members of Genesis?
Chaos: Yeah.
Scott: What the hell did Altail see in you?
Kyle: We're the best mercenaries they could find.
Scott: The old geezer needs glasses. (all three laugh)
Chaos: We also have a special kind of Liger.
Jason: So what? The GVX is also a special Zoid, but that doesn't mean the pilot should be in Genesis.
Scott: Oh yeah. Did anything happen to my Zoid while I was gone.
Edylg: No. It's all in the Whale King.
Scott: Good. So now we're back to unsanctioned battles and money, right?
Jason: No way. We have enough money from the Champs. We're ready for our real goal now.
Scott: The real goal? Are you sure?
Edylg: Is Chakra a brat?
Scott: I don't believe it. This soon?
Jason: Enough with the questions. Let's just go back to the Whale King. This place is starting to bore me.
Everyone else then started to leave to the Whale King, from Kyle, to Scott, to Edylg. The only ones who stayed behind were Chaos and Jason. A few seconds later, both of them made eye contact. Everything was silent once again until Chaos started talking.
Chaos: What do you mean by the real goal?
Jason: (laughs) Well, Chaos, what DID you think our goal was?
Chaos: To bring unsanctioned battles to the Zoid battling world. At least that's what I've heard.
Jason: .. Why do you think we do that?
Chaos: I don't know. Either to be remembered as a group or to get lots of money.
Jason: .. If you really wanna know, it's a little bit of both.
Chaos: Both?
Jason: We use the money to buy some equipment. But now we don't care anymore for buying. We're planning to take it.
Chaos: So your goal is to take some equipment. What for?
Jason: .. Just wait and see, Chaos.
Jason then walked out of the alley, who was later then followed by Chaos. As he walked, something started to bug him. All this time, the Backdraft group was taking Zoids, stealing their scrap, holding unsanctioned battles for betting, just so they can get enough money for some equipment? Something told him that things are gonna get ugly once they get what they want.
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Just a few hours ago, Polta has been recognized by Salene. Hours have passed since then and they've been talking throughout the entire afternoon. It was now night time and they were walking around the street.
Salene: It's been a long time.
Polta: I know.. 4 years..
Salene: I can't believe you. You left me to join the Backdraft Group... Why?
Polta: ... I dunno... Maybe a voice was calling on me.. But let me tell you this. I was still thinking of you those past 4 years.
Salene: .. I was thinking of you too... So you were arrested, huh?
Polta: Yeah. But I've been out a couple of times to get a Stealth Stormsworder.
Salene: A Stealth Stormsworder?
Polta: It was stolen by this one punk called Larry Champ.
Salene: What were you gonna use it for?
Polta: I was gonna bust some people out of jail at night. Now that we're all bailed, we can go for our true goal.
Salene: True goal? I don't get it. Why are you doing this?
Polta: Yeah. But there's this Zoid that keeps getting in our way called the Liger Zero. But that's alright, we have what we believe are Zoids that could actually match the Liger Zero. But still.. If there was a weakness to that thing, then maybe our names would be heard.
Salene: But do you really have to do this?
Polta: .. It's like what I said. A voice was calling me. It's like a dream of mine to be doing this. Don't you have a dream?
Polta: It's getting late, I have to get ready for something next week.
Salene: Next week?
Polta: I promise I'll see you again.
Salene: Then here. (gives card to Polta)
The man behind the sunglasses then smiled as he waved his last goodbye and left. As he walked, Polta took off his sunglasses and looked around to see in anyone was watching. He then took his visors out of his jacket and wore them as he walked into his Whale King.
Salene was at her shop, cleaning up and hoping she could go see Polta again. But out of the blue came the Hover Cargo. The doc and Bit then walked inside to find whoever was working there until they spotted Salene.
Bit: Hey. You think you can fix my Liger.
Salene: Sorry, the store's closed.
Doc: But it won't be of any trouble. You see, the command system's jammed with a crowbar and I was hoping that you can fix it.
Salene: .. Ok .. just bring it in.
And with that, the Liger Zero walked in as if he was crippled. Salene couldn't believe. Of all the ironies, this would have to happen. A few minutes later, Bit and the doc went back to the Hover Cargo, hoping that the Liger Zero is alright. Alone in the repair shop, Salene went into the cockpit and took some notes on the condition the Liger Zero is at now.
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*Attention*
This is very important. Everyone needs to answer:
------------------------------------
*After deep consideration from a review of Safire Griffin, I had to ask this question. I ask this because:
1) More characters will only give lesser appearances to the older characters.
2) As Safire Griffin said, the characters need to be enchanced. The only characters that should be submitted are those who enchance the main characters.
Do you support Safire Griffin's suggestion?
*Also, there are people who submit a character, but once they're in, they never EVER review. Are they even reading!? So here's my question:
In my opinion, I think those who don't review should be out of the story. Some of them may be important, but I have ways of getting rid of them. What do you think?
Please review and tell me what you think. Tell me what you want to see and maybe I'll think it over.