Mmkay. . .so far, all three Gundam Boys that have been mentioned in this
fic are captured. And. . .that's about it!
I don't really care if the facts I have aren't correct. It's my fic; I can do what I want.
Disclaimer: I own none of the Gundam Wing characters.
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Suddenly, the heads of all three Gundams turned as the door opened and a voice said, "Duo Maxwell. Nice of you to stay with us."
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The General that had told Duo of his execution when he had been captured before walked in, swing his gun around on one finger. Heero eyed it hungrily. If he could just get a hold of the weapon. . .
Duo put a huge grin on his face. "Thanks! This is a really nice place to stay. . .if I could just suggest a decoration change? The prison look doesn't work to well. . ."
The General slapped him. "Arrogant fool. All three of you will die. You Gundams have been nothing but trouble to me! I'm going to execute all three of you after I'm told where the other two Gundams are.
"You must be pretty thick if you think we'll tell you." Quatre was furious.
"Oh, of course not. I've discovered that personal torture won't work, but I have a new weapon." He sneered at Duo, whose eyes opened wide when he realized what the General was talking about. They weren't going to torture Quatre. . .or him. . .it didn't matter. . .they would torture one in front of the other, and use cries of pain that belonged to a friend as motivation to tell. Duo's eyes narrowed. OZ was cruel.
Heero lunged at the General, aiming for the gun. The General cried out in surprise and twisted away from Heero's grasp. But he wasn't fast enough. Heero caught the gun in one hand and fell to his side, holding onto the gun as the General turned, being dragged along the floor. The second the General stopped moving, however, Heero was up and pulling at the gun, trying to twist it out of the older man's grip. The man wasn't a General for nothing, though. The two wrestled over the weapon, the General shouting for help the whole time. A moment after his first cry, a young soldier appeared and after looking at the situation, pulled his own gun and lunged towards the weak and defenseless Quatre, who was unprepared for anything. When the gun was shoved to the blonde Arabian's head, all motion stopped. The General, breathing heavy, said, "now, boy, let go of the gun or this one dies here and now." Duo's eyes widened, but Heero remained expressionless. "I care not."
The soldier looked surprised to see that his "clever" maneuver wasn't working, but he was quickly set straight when the General yelled at him. "Shoot the damned boy! He is meaningless! It doesn't matter now what you do to him."
"No!" Duo was frantic. He wouldn't let Quatre die, no matter what. He was more loyal than that to his friends. Heero glared at him.
The General was furious. "Kill him for crying out loud! This one won't let go of the gun!"
The soldier started to pull the trigger. . .
AN: Oh go me! Bum bum buuuuuum. . .
Sorry about that you guys. I couldn't help but do it. I have part of the next chapter written already, and was gonna have it in this chapter, but then I decided to be evil and just leave it here. I've had so many cliff hangers come my way lately that haven' t been updated in the longest time. . .heh.
Jefcat -- Okay, first off: You no like, you no read. Okay? Okay. Maybe I don't really have a goal here but to just write a story that I made up a year ago and show to others and see what they think of it. Only one of my friends watches Gundam Wing (there's another who's seen a few episodes because she read this to edit this (and didn't help much because she hadn't watched Gumdam Wing at the time) and fell in love with Quatre.so yeah) and she said it was good, but I wanted the opinions of others. As for the medical thing, well, in my original story it was a Ronin Warriors/Gundam Wing crossover (without the Ronins in it, they came in many years later) and Quatre was the son of the sister of the Ancient One and a human and the brother of Cye, who was the son of Talpa and the sister of the Ancient One. (Dun ask people, complicated). So of course he had more tolerance than a normal human. Sorry if some of you haven't seen that show and that doesn't make sense, but let's just say that he wasn't totally human, and was part something a lot stronger and more tolerant than a normal human.
Practical efficiency. . .meh. . .who needs it? I just write what I want to. (plus I don't know what it means. . .)
And in the show, everyone seems to hate the Gundams quite a lot (like when Duo is captured and they're driving his Gundam past the crowds of VERY angry mobs). . .so there's my reasoning behind that. Besides the fact that in my world, they all hate him that much, because it makes for good agony.
And as for my plot. . .sorry if it seems like it's stopped. Like I said, my original ending wouldn't work because it has a character in it that isn't in Gundam Wing, and this isn't the crossover section. . .so I'm having to totally improvise on it.
Oh, one more thing. . .I LIKE one stupid little agony after another, okay? That's just who I am, and what I like, and how I write.
But thank you very much for saying that I have a good vocabulary and write well. . .that's exactly the opposite of what my best friend says. . .but she's an really good editor, so it's kinda to be expected.
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Sorry about that people. . .I had to respond to a review. If it seems like I'm in a bad mood, I'm not. I'm just really tired (bus comes at 6:15 AM) and angry with myself for being stupid and missing a REALLY important Tech Crew meeting. . .
~Lady V.
I don't really care if the facts I have aren't correct. It's my fic; I can do what I want.
Disclaimer: I own none of the Gundam Wing characters.
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Suddenly, the heads of all three Gundams turned as the door opened and a voice said, "Duo Maxwell. Nice of you to stay with us."
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
The General that had told Duo of his execution when he had been captured before walked in, swing his gun around on one finger. Heero eyed it hungrily. If he could just get a hold of the weapon. . .
Duo put a huge grin on his face. "Thanks! This is a really nice place to stay. . .if I could just suggest a decoration change? The prison look doesn't work to well. . ."
The General slapped him. "Arrogant fool. All three of you will die. You Gundams have been nothing but trouble to me! I'm going to execute all three of you after I'm told where the other two Gundams are.
"You must be pretty thick if you think we'll tell you." Quatre was furious.
"Oh, of course not. I've discovered that personal torture won't work, but I have a new weapon." He sneered at Duo, whose eyes opened wide when he realized what the General was talking about. They weren't going to torture Quatre. . .or him. . .it didn't matter. . .they would torture one in front of the other, and use cries of pain that belonged to a friend as motivation to tell. Duo's eyes narrowed. OZ was cruel.
Heero lunged at the General, aiming for the gun. The General cried out in surprise and twisted away from Heero's grasp. But he wasn't fast enough. Heero caught the gun in one hand and fell to his side, holding onto the gun as the General turned, being dragged along the floor. The second the General stopped moving, however, Heero was up and pulling at the gun, trying to twist it out of the older man's grip. The man wasn't a General for nothing, though. The two wrestled over the weapon, the General shouting for help the whole time. A moment after his first cry, a young soldier appeared and after looking at the situation, pulled his own gun and lunged towards the weak and defenseless Quatre, who was unprepared for anything. When the gun was shoved to the blonde Arabian's head, all motion stopped. The General, breathing heavy, said, "now, boy, let go of the gun or this one dies here and now." Duo's eyes widened, but Heero remained expressionless. "I care not."
The soldier looked surprised to see that his "clever" maneuver wasn't working, but he was quickly set straight when the General yelled at him. "Shoot the damned boy! He is meaningless! It doesn't matter now what you do to him."
"No!" Duo was frantic. He wouldn't let Quatre die, no matter what. He was more loyal than that to his friends. Heero glared at him.
The General was furious. "Kill him for crying out loud! This one won't let go of the gun!"
The soldier started to pull the trigger. . .
AN: Oh go me! Bum bum buuuuuum. . .
Sorry about that you guys. I couldn't help but do it. I have part of the next chapter written already, and was gonna have it in this chapter, but then I decided to be evil and just leave it here. I've had so many cliff hangers come my way lately that haven' t been updated in the longest time. . .heh.
Jefcat -- Okay, first off: You no like, you no read. Okay? Okay. Maybe I don't really have a goal here but to just write a story that I made up a year ago and show to others and see what they think of it. Only one of my friends watches Gundam Wing (there's another who's seen a few episodes because she read this to edit this (and didn't help much because she hadn't watched Gumdam Wing at the time) and fell in love with Quatre.so yeah) and she said it was good, but I wanted the opinions of others. As for the medical thing, well, in my original story it was a Ronin Warriors/Gundam Wing crossover (without the Ronins in it, they came in many years later) and Quatre was the son of the sister of the Ancient One and a human and the brother of Cye, who was the son of Talpa and the sister of the Ancient One. (Dun ask people, complicated). So of course he had more tolerance than a normal human. Sorry if some of you haven't seen that show and that doesn't make sense, but let's just say that he wasn't totally human, and was part something a lot stronger and more tolerant than a normal human.
Practical efficiency. . .meh. . .who needs it? I just write what I want to. (plus I don't know what it means. . .)
And in the show, everyone seems to hate the Gundams quite a lot (like when Duo is captured and they're driving his Gundam past the crowds of VERY angry mobs). . .so there's my reasoning behind that. Besides the fact that in my world, they all hate him that much, because it makes for good agony.
And as for my plot. . .sorry if it seems like it's stopped. Like I said, my original ending wouldn't work because it has a character in it that isn't in Gundam Wing, and this isn't the crossover section. . .so I'm having to totally improvise on it.
Oh, one more thing. . .I LIKE one stupid little agony after another, okay? That's just who I am, and what I like, and how I write.
But thank you very much for saying that I have a good vocabulary and write well. . .that's exactly the opposite of what my best friend says. . .but she's an really good editor, so it's kinda to be expected.
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Sorry about that people. . .I had to respond to a review. If it seems like I'm in a bad mood, I'm not. I'm just really tired (bus comes at 6:15 AM) and angry with myself for being stupid and missing a REALLY important Tech Crew meeting. . .
~Lady V.