A little note:
This is my proposal that Marvel (yes the comic company) asked me to write up for a new X-Men story, thanks to my Heroes and Rivals story. So tell me what you think of it
Synopsis:
What if Nate, when he died as a shaman, lost his worry of his power killing him, his power had dropped back to an Alpha mutant? When his power dropped, it de-aged him, giving him a chance to enjoy his childhood. Now enter Jean into this factor, some how Nate reaches one of the X-Corporations branch offices, looking for his "mommy". Now this new Nate has some of his past life memory but yet he can't remember how he got here. So what will Jean and Scott do if they find out that the child that was grown from their DNA is back and believes that the Summers are his parents?
Page One:
Panel One
From behind we see a young boy around the age of thirteen, from the back we can see him walking through a crowded street. People are rushing past him, not paying much attention to him.
Panel Two
Cut to the front of him so we can see his face, the boy has white bangs; his right eye appears to be gold. This is what normal humans would call a mutant.
Panel Three:
We see the boy walk to a building with X engravings all over it. This is one of the many X-Corporation offices situated throughout the globe
Panel Four:
The boy is now inside, he is walking across a large marble floor, an X is embossed on the floor
Panel Five:
We see a secretary, with pale blue face; she has six arms covered in scales. In one of her six hands she is holding a telephone, chatting oblivious to the boy's entrance
SECRETARY: So I say, "Well that's how things are, men are nothing but pigs", especially if they are flatscans who have a fetish for mutant
Panel Six
BOY (coughs)
The secretary continues her conversation on the phone
SECRETARY: Yeah Shirley what about that new Vin Diesel movie, god, what I wouldn't do to him
Panel Seven:
BOY: (coughs louder)
The secretary finally looks down at the boy
SECRETARY: (to phone) I'll call you back (to boy) and what might I do for you?
Panel Eight:
BOY: I'm here to see my mother
Panel Nine:
SECRETARY: And who might that be?
Panel Ten:
CLOSEUP ON THE BOY
BOY: Jean Grey-Summers
Page Two:
Panel One:
We are in a darkened office. There are dark curtains pulled over the windows. We see Professor Xaiver sitting in a high backed chair across from Jean Grey; it appears that Xaiver is testing Jean on her growing powers the phoenix entity is giving her
Panel Two:
We see a coffee table covered with bent spoons and forks; they are all perfectly bent in the middle.
XAIVER: The Phoenix is growing inside of you again Jean, your telekinesis is extradonary
Panel Three:
Jean sits up, her red hair falls over her shoulders
JEAN: There is something else Charles
Panel Four
Close up on XAIVER: Yes I feel it too
Panel Five
We see a phone on a table next to Xaiver begin to ring
Panel Six
Xaiver answers the phone
XAIVER (to phone): Yes, Yes send him up
Panel Seven:
Xaiver hangs up the phone and looks back to Jean
XAIVER: Jean, there is someone coming up to see you
Panel Eight:
Jean looks confused
JEAN: To see me??
Panel Nine: Jean crosses to the room and opens the door, revealing the boy from before the boy rushes in and hugs Jean
BOY: MOM!!
Jean looks back to Xaiver
JEAN (telepathically) Charles, I scanned his mind, he thinks he is Nate Grey, the X-Man, but Nate died, how did he get here?
Panel Ten:
Xaiver is sitting with his legs crossed
XAIVER (telepathically) Yes, I am wondering the same thing
This is my proposal that Marvel (yes the comic company) asked me to write up for a new X-Men story, thanks to my Heroes and Rivals story. So tell me what you think of it
Synopsis:
What if Nate, when he died as a shaman, lost his worry of his power killing him, his power had dropped back to an Alpha mutant? When his power dropped, it de-aged him, giving him a chance to enjoy his childhood. Now enter Jean into this factor, some how Nate reaches one of the X-Corporations branch offices, looking for his "mommy". Now this new Nate has some of his past life memory but yet he can't remember how he got here. So what will Jean and Scott do if they find out that the child that was grown from their DNA is back and believes that the Summers are his parents?
Page One:
Panel One
From behind we see a young boy around the age of thirteen, from the back we can see him walking through a crowded street. People are rushing past him, not paying much attention to him.
Panel Two
Cut to the front of him so we can see his face, the boy has white bangs; his right eye appears to be gold. This is what normal humans would call a mutant.
Panel Three:
We see the boy walk to a building with X engravings all over it. This is one of the many X-Corporation offices situated throughout the globe
Panel Four:
The boy is now inside, he is walking across a large marble floor, an X is embossed on the floor
Panel Five:
We see a secretary, with pale blue face; she has six arms covered in scales. In one of her six hands she is holding a telephone, chatting oblivious to the boy's entrance
SECRETARY: So I say, "Well that's how things are, men are nothing but pigs", especially if they are flatscans who have a fetish for mutant
Panel Six
BOY (coughs)
The secretary continues her conversation on the phone
SECRETARY: Yeah Shirley what about that new Vin Diesel movie, god, what I wouldn't do to him
Panel Seven:
BOY: (coughs louder)
The secretary finally looks down at the boy
SECRETARY: (to phone) I'll call you back (to boy) and what might I do for you?
Panel Eight:
BOY: I'm here to see my mother
Panel Nine:
SECRETARY: And who might that be?
Panel Ten:
CLOSEUP ON THE BOY
BOY: Jean Grey-Summers
Page Two:
Panel One:
We are in a darkened office. There are dark curtains pulled over the windows. We see Professor Xaiver sitting in a high backed chair across from Jean Grey; it appears that Xaiver is testing Jean on her growing powers the phoenix entity is giving her
Panel Two:
We see a coffee table covered with bent spoons and forks; they are all perfectly bent in the middle.
XAIVER: The Phoenix is growing inside of you again Jean, your telekinesis is extradonary
Panel Three:
Jean sits up, her red hair falls over her shoulders
JEAN: There is something else Charles
Panel Four
Close up on XAIVER: Yes I feel it too
Panel Five
We see a phone on a table next to Xaiver begin to ring
Panel Six
Xaiver answers the phone
XAIVER (to phone): Yes, Yes send him up
Panel Seven:
Xaiver hangs up the phone and looks back to Jean
XAIVER: Jean, there is someone coming up to see you
Panel Eight:
Jean looks confused
JEAN: To see me??
Panel Nine: Jean crosses to the room and opens the door, revealing the boy from before the boy rushes in and hugs Jean
BOY: MOM!!
Jean looks back to Xaiver
JEAN (telepathically) Charles, I scanned his mind, he thinks he is Nate Grey, the X-Man, but Nate died, how did he get here?
Panel Ten:
Xaiver is sitting with his legs crossed
XAIVER (telepathically) Yes, I am wondering the same thing