A:N:
Hey minna-san! Saankk yu for all your reviews for my last chappie, even though it was a really bad chappie. :'(
Anyway, hope this one is better, and I hope reviews will come and give advices as well as you always do.
Love you peeps! So here goes:
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The Monkey's Fury
Goku:
You know, it all felt surreal.
It was almost like a fairytale. A sick, sordid fairy tale.
First I saw Sanzo. Would you believe it?
Sanzo. He actually came to rescue me. Actually, I felt a bit shy at first.
My face must have swollen at least three times it usual size, and blood oozed from my nose in gallons.
The only consolation I got was that I didn't have booger coming out together with my blood.
See what I mean? If Sanzo was about to rescue me I must have at least looked presentable.
Anyway, he turned to look at me and instead of the disgust I knew that was supposed to be in there, I saw... I don't even know how to describe it.
See, it was a fairytale.
And then, he began this dialogue with Homura, saying something about the lights. Because the idiot kept playing with the switch for no reason at all.
Oh well, loons will be loons.
After that, the loon came over to me, I thought he was releasing me. Finally! But then he placed his sword on my neck. I felt it slice thinly on my throat, and I felt sick, knowing that if he kept doing that, I'd probably die of loss of water.
I mean loss of blood.
I sneaked a glance at Sanzo.
His face was blank, but I could sense his turmoil inside. His hands were clenched tightly on his sides.
Now, this might sound a bit bad, but I actually felt a shiver of pleasure at seeing him in a state like that. I felt a surge of hope.
Maybe I wasn't such a lost cause, after all. A million questions ran through my head.
Do I stand a chance with him?
Does Sanzo love me the way I do?
And, as much as he means a million pork buns to me, must I mean a million tobaccos for him? Ne? Ne?
So I try to catch his eyes, hoping I'll get clues on how he felt but instead, I saw him move toward Homura.
I heard him asking what he wants, and I shook my heads furtively, hoping he wasn't going to succumb to that loon's wishes.
I barely noticed that I've just scratched my neck even more, and now blood flowed steadily from my neck. He looked up at me again and for whatever reason, he nodded stiffly to Homura.
I watched in horror as he removed his sutra, and Homura came over to release me from my chains. But all my energy was spent already. I couldn't really move.
Here comes the surreal part.
As I was dragged by Homura along, holding me in front of him as though a silent offering when something happened.
Something completely, utterly horrible.
All I could remember was how scared I was as I watched Sanzo's body hurl through the air like a limp doll, his blood scattering everywhere. His body hit the opposite wall, twenty- five meters away. He slid down slowly, landing at a pile of jagged rocks.
Behind me, Homura didn't say anything.
He didn't smile; He didn't laugh. He merely looked at Sanzo.
Suddenly, I understood.
The lights, the sutra, me.
Some part of a deal that Sanzo couldn't win.
I couldn't move, I couldn't breathe.
"No, God, No....."
I was afraid to go near him, afraid that I might witness something I didn't wish to see.
The pain and grief was overwhelming. I feel the burden of guilt knowing that I was the one who caused him all of this. If I hadn't ran away, if I hadn't.... Then none of this would have happened.
The tears burn at my eyelids, and my heart constricted painfully inside my chest. I willed myself to move forward, hoping against hope that he is well and when I reach him, he would smack me again in the head the way he always used to.
But when I reach him, his eyes were closed, and his breathing was labored.
"Sanzo..." I choked his name, and gathered him in my arms.
His skin was cold and clammy, and he was soaked in his pool of blood.
I saw him open his eyes, and the tears fell. I hugged him to my chest.
His startled eyes searched my face and I began to cry harder. I wanted to say that I'm sorry and that he find it in his heart to forgive me.
I wanted to tell him that I love him right then and there and how I have always been.
I touched his face, outlining his cheek, his lips, his jaw.
He was so beautiful.
My Sanzo is the most beautiful person I have ever laid eyes upon.
I started to tell him this, by the closed his eyes again, and his head lolled unconsciously.
I began to panic, thinking of the worse.
"No, Sanzo! No, god, please! No!"
I shook him gently, but his eyes remained closed.
"Sanzo! Wake up!" I know my voice sounded terribly weak and shaky but I didn't care.
Suddenly, I felt a hand touch my shoulder, and thinking it was Homura, I turned around and jabbed him across the cheek.
Sweat drop.
It wasn't Homura! It was Hakkai, staring down at me, with Gojyo at his back.
"Don't worry Goku, he's still alive. He's not dead yet." He said, motioning towards the motionless body of Sanzo.
"Are you sure, Hakkai?"
"Yes, I'm sure." He said, feeling Sanzo's weak pulse.
I felt relieved, but only for a while. I touched his face one last time, and stood up.
My anger was boiling inside of me, and I feel some of my energy returning back to me.
"Hakkai," I said with every authority I could muster.
"Hai?"
"Can you promise me something? Really promise?"
"Just say it, Goku."
"Promise me you'll take care of Sanzo for me."
"W-what?"
"Promise me you'll do everything to make him alright."
"B-But-"
"Promise me, Hakkai."
"Goku... please."
Hakkai's voice was pleading. I look at him straight in the eye.
"Promise me."
His shoulders dropped; A sign of defeat.
"I promise."
I nodded, and asked them to bring Sanzo back to inn and get some help. I said that I would join them as soon as I was done killing Homura.
They both acknowledged me with a nod, and Gojyo carried Sanzo on his back.
It was then that I only realized that they were also battered, and that they must have also fought hard. My energy level kept increasing and increasing.
Hakkai took one last look at me, and the three of them disappeared.
I faced Homura, who was lovingly holding the sutra in his hands, looking amused.
"I enjoyed your little freak show."
"I've warned you before. But you didn't listen."
"Oh? Was it a warning? I didn't really notice."
"I've told you once and I've told you before. Lay a hand on Sanzo and I'll kill you."
With an amazing speed, I lunged at him, calling out my staff.
I promise you Sanzo, I'll kill him.
This is your end Homura.
t.b.c.
A:N:
Hai! That done! Whew. Hope you like that. It's sad ne? I guess I was influenced reading all that Nicholas Sparks novels! Anyways, next chappie soon up,( I hope!).
Hope you'll review this one okay? I really love reading them so much.
Okay, ja for now, and reviews please!!
Love you
^__^
Hey minna-san! Saankk yu for all your reviews for my last chappie, even though it was a really bad chappie. :'(
Anyway, hope this one is better, and I hope reviews will come and give advices as well as you always do.
Love you peeps! So here goes:
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The Monkey's Fury
Goku:
You know, it all felt surreal.
It was almost like a fairytale. A sick, sordid fairy tale.
First I saw Sanzo. Would you believe it?
Sanzo. He actually came to rescue me. Actually, I felt a bit shy at first.
My face must have swollen at least three times it usual size, and blood oozed from my nose in gallons.
The only consolation I got was that I didn't have booger coming out together with my blood.
See what I mean? If Sanzo was about to rescue me I must have at least looked presentable.
Anyway, he turned to look at me and instead of the disgust I knew that was supposed to be in there, I saw... I don't even know how to describe it.
See, it was a fairytale.
And then, he began this dialogue with Homura, saying something about the lights. Because the idiot kept playing with the switch for no reason at all.
Oh well, loons will be loons.
After that, the loon came over to me, I thought he was releasing me. Finally! But then he placed his sword on my neck. I felt it slice thinly on my throat, and I felt sick, knowing that if he kept doing that, I'd probably die of loss of water.
I mean loss of blood.
I sneaked a glance at Sanzo.
His face was blank, but I could sense his turmoil inside. His hands were clenched tightly on his sides.
Now, this might sound a bit bad, but I actually felt a shiver of pleasure at seeing him in a state like that. I felt a surge of hope.
Maybe I wasn't such a lost cause, after all. A million questions ran through my head.
Do I stand a chance with him?
Does Sanzo love me the way I do?
And, as much as he means a million pork buns to me, must I mean a million tobaccos for him? Ne? Ne?
So I try to catch his eyes, hoping I'll get clues on how he felt but instead, I saw him move toward Homura.
I heard him asking what he wants, and I shook my heads furtively, hoping he wasn't going to succumb to that loon's wishes.
I barely noticed that I've just scratched my neck even more, and now blood flowed steadily from my neck. He looked up at me again and for whatever reason, he nodded stiffly to Homura.
I watched in horror as he removed his sutra, and Homura came over to release me from my chains. But all my energy was spent already. I couldn't really move.
Here comes the surreal part.
As I was dragged by Homura along, holding me in front of him as though a silent offering when something happened.
Something completely, utterly horrible.
All I could remember was how scared I was as I watched Sanzo's body hurl through the air like a limp doll, his blood scattering everywhere. His body hit the opposite wall, twenty- five meters away. He slid down slowly, landing at a pile of jagged rocks.
Behind me, Homura didn't say anything.
He didn't smile; He didn't laugh. He merely looked at Sanzo.
Suddenly, I understood.
The lights, the sutra, me.
Some part of a deal that Sanzo couldn't win.
I couldn't move, I couldn't breathe.
"No, God, No....."
I was afraid to go near him, afraid that I might witness something I didn't wish to see.
The pain and grief was overwhelming. I feel the burden of guilt knowing that I was the one who caused him all of this. If I hadn't ran away, if I hadn't.... Then none of this would have happened.
The tears burn at my eyelids, and my heart constricted painfully inside my chest. I willed myself to move forward, hoping against hope that he is well and when I reach him, he would smack me again in the head the way he always used to.
But when I reach him, his eyes were closed, and his breathing was labored.
"Sanzo..." I choked his name, and gathered him in my arms.
His skin was cold and clammy, and he was soaked in his pool of blood.
I saw him open his eyes, and the tears fell. I hugged him to my chest.
His startled eyes searched my face and I began to cry harder. I wanted to say that I'm sorry and that he find it in his heart to forgive me.
I wanted to tell him that I love him right then and there and how I have always been.
I touched his face, outlining his cheek, his lips, his jaw.
He was so beautiful.
My Sanzo is the most beautiful person I have ever laid eyes upon.
I started to tell him this, by the closed his eyes again, and his head lolled unconsciously.
I began to panic, thinking of the worse.
"No, Sanzo! No, god, please! No!"
I shook him gently, but his eyes remained closed.
"Sanzo! Wake up!" I know my voice sounded terribly weak and shaky but I didn't care.
Suddenly, I felt a hand touch my shoulder, and thinking it was Homura, I turned around and jabbed him across the cheek.
Sweat drop.
It wasn't Homura! It was Hakkai, staring down at me, with Gojyo at his back.
"Don't worry Goku, he's still alive. He's not dead yet." He said, motioning towards the motionless body of Sanzo.
"Are you sure, Hakkai?"
"Yes, I'm sure." He said, feeling Sanzo's weak pulse.
I felt relieved, but only for a while. I touched his face one last time, and stood up.
My anger was boiling inside of me, and I feel some of my energy returning back to me.
"Hakkai," I said with every authority I could muster.
"Hai?"
"Can you promise me something? Really promise?"
"Just say it, Goku."
"Promise me you'll take care of Sanzo for me."
"W-what?"
"Promise me you'll do everything to make him alright."
"B-But-"
"Promise me, Hakkai."
"Goku... please."
Hakkai's voice was pleading. I look at him straight in the eye.
"Promise me."
His shoulders dropped; A sign of defeat.
"I promise."
I nodded, and asked them to bring Sanzo back to inn and get some help. I said that I would join them as soon as I was done killing Homura.
They both acknowledged me with a nod, and Gojyo carried Sanzo on his back.
It was then that I only realized that they were also battered, and that they must have also fought hard. My energy level kept increasing and increasing.
Hakkai took one last look at me, and the three of them disappeared.
I faced Homura, who was lovingly holding the sutra in his hands, looking amused.
"I enjoyed your little freak show."
"I've warned you before. But you didn't listen."
"Oh? Was it a warning? I didn't really notice."
"I've told you once and I've told you before. Lay a hand on Sanzo and I'll kill you."
With an amazing speed, I lunged at him, calling out my staff.
I promise you Sanzo, I'll kill him.
This is your end Homura.
t.b.c.
A:N:
Hai! That done! Whew. Hope you like that. It's sad ne? I guess I was influenced reading all that Nicholas Sparks novels! Anyways, next chappie soon up,( I hope!).
Hope you'll review this one okay? I really love reading them so much.
Okay, ja for now, and reviews please!!
Love you
^__^