Thank-you to the four people who reviewed the last chapter. I am very
ashamed of tamashii as she obviously "persuaded" you to review.
Tamashii- I am not phycotic at all or unstable, I was still breathing and you were mean to force people to review my story and you should always look out for saucepans as they just come and make that dent in your nose bigger- hehehehe-.
Redaura- thank you for the review and I am glad you liked it and please break another of tamashii's characters bones it will do her good.
Anaita Readfern- thank you for the review and I am affrade from the next chapater it will be quite different from before as tamashii had to get rid if the files and forgot to send them to me who was supposed to be writing it with her!
Part 2
Mary-Lynette flew through Ash's door and tripped straight over a pile of clothing. Landing flat on her face and moaning slightly, Mare pulled herself up. And she saw him. Sleeping peacefully on his bed. Relief sweaped through her.
She slowly went round to the other side of the bed. Picking up the covers she slipped underneath them. Ash was still fast asleep and her nose was still throbbing. Quietly she snuggled up against him. He moved his arm round he, still only half awake. He started to wake up and moaned "If your gonna have a nightmare. Do it quietly." She buried her face in his shoulder.
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"Hello? Is anyone home? The lives of the party have arrived!" Jez shouted throughout the house. Jez dumped her small black bag on the polished floor. Morgead came in carrying several suitcases. Iliana Walked in behind him swinging a pink fluffy bag. "It's such a shame Galen and Keller couldn't come. It would have been such fun with them."
"Jez, good to see you, Morgead, and Iliana, excellent." Thierry welcomed his latest guests. "I am sure you're tired. Come follow me to your rooms. Well after this only Galen and Keller to arrive."
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4 hours before the ball. Panic reaches every corner of the mansion. The ball was being held at a special hall that dealt with balls. Hannah had been spending every spare moment there making sure it was ready. Thierry had been dealing with the politics and Quinn had been dealing with the security arrangement. All had been dead on their feet the last few days.
Eventually everyone assembled in ether Hannah or Thierry's room, depending on male or female. Screams soon erupted from Hannah's room as the dresses were seen. They were beautiful. They shone like a liquid. Reflecting every colour and surpassing all expectations.
Rashel, Jez and Keller all had ones that could be fought in and conceal weapons (this had been arranged without anyone except the girls knowledge). They had slits up the sides and were in different styles. All were Black. Mary-Lynette and Iliana had full length ones that were in baby pink for Iliana and Midnight blue for Mary-Lynette. Rowan and Kestrel had really short spaghetti straps ones in red for Kestrel and deep purple for Rowan. Maggie had an Emerald green flowing dress, which brushed the floor.
Poppy had just arrived with her Gillian and Harmony Harman. Poppy rapidly put on a ¾ length violet dress and helped Gillian put on her flesh-coloured dress. Harmony hugged her cousin Thea and they hurriedly put on Harmony's full length black backless dress.
Gillian rushed up to the back wall. All the girls were standing together talking they were all so beautiful. Gillian reached for something to hold onto. She found something and rested her weight on it. It gave way and she fell backward through the door into Thierry's room.
David was only half dressed with no trousers on. Thierry and Morgead were comparing abs with Eric who was almost completely starkers. Galen was fully dressed along with Phil (Poppy's brother, Harmony's date) and Miles (Maggies bro, Iliana's date). Ash and Quinn were in boxers preparing to start a fight. Delos was adjusting his tie in a mirror.
None of them had noticed Gillian. All the girls had now crowded around the door staring at the guys. "It's a zoo" Maggie commented. None of the guys noticed except Delos who turned to see all the girls laughing there heads off. He looked about and coughed loudly. All the guys turned to see Delos and then the girls. Ash and Quinn stopped mid blow and froze.
Pandemonium insued. Ash and Quinn ran to find some trousers while Thierry shouted at them to get out. "We're not in" Jez smirked and Kestrel gave her a high 5. Eric grabbed the closest shirt that happened to be Ash's and Ash also wanted it. Morgead stood laughing. Miles, Phil and Galen laughed with the girls.
The girls eventually retreated back to their own room, but the sounds of ecstasy continued for another hour at least. Eric had still not turned the right colour and it took kind words from Thea for him to come out of the bathroom.
The girls put their coats on. They weren't ordinary coats. They had a hood but no sleeves. They draped on the ground. Each was the colour of the girl's dress. They had on the right hand shoulder a crest, of whichever their soulmate had. Mary-Lynette, Kestal, Rowan, Maggie and Rashel had the Redfern crest. Jez had the Blackthorn. Thea had the Harman as did Harmony, Iliana and Gillian. Poppy had the Raumessen crest. Keller had the Drache crest.
The girls all loaded themselves into a limo. Excited beyond their imagination.
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Reviews always inspire so pressing that button on the screen will help the next part come that ever bit quicker.
Tamashii- I am not phycotic at all or unstable, I was still breathing and you were mean to force people to review my story and you should always look out for saucepans as they just come and make that dent in your nose bigger- hehehehe-.
Redaura- thank you for the review and I am glad you liked it and please break another of tamashii's characters bones it will do her good.
Anaita Readfern- thank you for the review and I am affrade from the next chapater it will be quite different from before as tamashii had to get rid if the files and forgot to send them to me who was supposed to be writing it with her!
Part 2
Mary-Lynette flew through Ash's door and tripped straight over a pile of clothing. Landing flat on her face and moaning slightly, Mare pulled herself up. And she saw him. Sleeping peacefully on his bed. Relief sweaped through her.
She slowly went round to the other side of the bed. Picking up the covers she slipped underneath them. Ash was still fast asleep and her nose was still throbbing. Quietly she snuggled up against him. He moved his arm round he, still only half awake. He started to wake up and moaned "If your gonna have a nightmare. Do it quietly." She buried her face in his shoulder.
-*-
"Hello? Is anyone home? The lives of the party have arrived!" Jez shouted throughout the house. Jez dumped her small black bag on the polished floor. Morgead came in carrying several suitcases. Iliana Walked in behind him swinging a pink fluffy bag. "It's such a shame Galen and Keller couldn't come. It would have been such fun with them."
"Jez, good to see you, Morgead, and Iliana, excellent." Thierry welcomed his latest guests. "I am sure you're tired. Come follow me to your rooms. Well after this only Galen and Keller to arrive."
-*-
4 hours before the ball. Panic reaches every corner of the mansion. The ball was being held at a special hall that dealt with balls. Hannah had been spending every spare moment there making sure it was ready. Thierry had been dealing with the politics and Quinn had been dealing with the security arrangement. All had been dead on their feet the last few days.
Eventually everyone assembled in ether Hannah or Thierry's room, depending on male or female. Screams soon erupted from Hannah's room as the dresses were seen. They were beautiful. They shone like a liquid. Reflecting every colour and surpassing all expectations.
Rashel, Jez and Keller all had ones that could be fought in and conceal weapons (this had been arranged without anyone except the girls knowledge). They had slits up the sides and were in different styles. All were Black. Mary-Lynette and Iliana had full length ones that were in baby pink for Iliana and Midnight blue for Mary-Lynette. Rowan and Kestrel had really short spaghetti straps ones in red for Kestrel and deep purple for Rowan. Maggie had an Emerald green flowing dress, which brushed the floor.
Poppy had just arrived with her Gillian and Harmony Harman. Poppy rapidly put on a ¾ length violet dress and helped Gillian put on her flesh-coloured dress. Harmony hugged her cousin Thea and they hurriedly put on Harmony's full length black backless dress.
Gillian rushed up to the back wall. All the girls were standing together talking they were all so beautiful. Gillian reached for something to hold onto. She found something and rested her weight on it. It gave way and she fell backward through the door into Thierry's room.
David was only half dressed with no trousers on. Thierry and Morgead were comparing abs with Eric who was almost completely starkers. Galen was fully dressed along with Phil (Poppy's brother, Harmony's date) and Miles (Maggies bro, Iliana's date). Ash and Quinn were in boxers preparing to start a fight. Delos was adjusting his tie in a mirror.
None of them had noticed Gillian. All the girls had now crowded around the door staring at the guys. "It's a zoo" Maggie commented. None of the guys noticed except Delos who turned to see all the girls laughing there heads off. He looked about and coughed loudly. All the guys turned to see Delos and then the girls. Ash and Quinn stopped mid blow and froze.
Pandemonium insued. Ash and Quinn ran to find some trousers while Thierry shouted at them to get out. "We're not in" Jez smirked and Kestrel gave her a high 5. Eric grabbed the closest shirt that happened to be Ash's and Ash also wanted it. Morgead stood laughing. Miles, Phil and Galen laughed with the girls.
The girls eventually retreated back to their own room, but the sounds of ecstasy continued for another hour at least. Eric had still not turned the right colour and it took kind words from Thea for him to come out of the bathroom.
The girls put their coats on. They weren't ordinary coats. They had a hood but no sleeves. They draped on the ground. Each was the colour of the girl's dress. They had on the right hand shoulder a crest, of whichever their soulmate had. Mary-Lynette, Kestal, Rowan, Maggie and Rashel had the Redfern crest. Jez had the Blackthorn. Thea had the Harman as did Harmony, Iliana and Gillian. Poppy had the Raumessen crest. Keller had the Drache crest.
The girls all loaded themselves into a limo. Excited beyond their imagination.
-*-
Reviews always inspire so pressing that button on the screen will help the next part come that ever bit quicker.