Thank you for your reviews and to those who have read it but haven't
reviewed and I have a couple of apologies to get the sequel to a story I am
reading.
Tamashii- I am very sorry and I will bang myself over the head 50 times to make up for it (did I do alright in that quiz of yours?)- My head hurts now! Sniff, sniff.
Redaura- I am sorry it is just that I know that she would do that and you see I like to annoy her and her me. So we don't take it to heart, we just insult the other person back. (She started it really, by deleting peace in the first place without my approval!)
Part 3-
When the girls got to the hall the guys had not arrived yet, so they pulled their hoods up - the hoods were designed so that they were treated as equals not as species - and went to look around. There were lots of other women there already with their hoods up and so the men that were there already took advantage of that and were flirting with any one they could get near, especially the Redfern men.
One vampire was harassing the Rdfern girls when the guys arrived. Ash and Quinn just walked straight through the crowd and told the vampire to get lost (which he did when he saw who it was). Ash walked round to Mare and asked if she was ok. This shocked the girls as their hoods were all still up.
"How did know it was me Ash?" Mare asked after they had all recovered. "Did you bug me or something?"
"Um that would be what I have done to us all," confessed a quiet voice belonging to Hannah, "For once Ash is only guilty of one thing, using the locator to find you! By the way we have to start the ball officially now, so girls follow me, guys follow us until we get to the top of the stair then turn left. Oh and if you see Thierry could you tell him to wait five minutes then start announcing the couples."
Five minutes later:
"I Thierry Descouedres shall now introduce the couples who helped to organize this ball: I start with Mr. Gorgon Redfern and his partner Mrs. Opal Redfern.
"Please say that is a mistake, Quinn? It has to be a mistake!" Ash started to panic, "what are my god-dammed parents doing here" Quinn mentally shook him and reminded him of Mare just as Thierry called out, "Mr. Ash Redfern and his partner Miss. Mary-Lynette Carter. When Ash saw Mare at the top of the stairs he nearly fell over the banisters but managed to stop himself as Thierry glared at him and took hold of Mares arm and escorted her down the stairs. Ash took her as far away from his parents as possible as he was scared what they would say. When he saw Rowan and Kestrel come down the stairs her mentally called them over.
" Ash what is it now? Shit mum and dad are coming over. Lets escape! We'll explain every thing once we hide." Said Rowan rushing off towards the back rooms and the fire exits.
Tamashii- I am very sorry and I will bang myself over the head 50 times to make up for it (did I do alright in that quiz of yours?)- My head hurts now! Sniff, sniff.
Redaura- I am sorry it is just that I know that she would do that and you see I like to annoy her and her me. So we don't take it to heart, we just insult the other person back. (She started it really, by deleting peace in the first place without my approval!)
Part 3-
When the girls got to the hall the guys had not arrived yet, so they pulled their hoods up - the hoods were designed so that they were treated as equals not as species - and went to look around. There were lots of other women there already with their hoods up and so the men that were there already took advantage of that and were flirting with any one they could get near, especially the Redfern men.
One vampire was harassing the Rdfern girls when the guys arrived. Ash and Quinn just walked straight through the crowd and told the vampire to get lost (which he did when he saw who it was). Ash walked round to Mare and asked if she was ok. This shocked the girls as their hoods were all still up.
"How did know it was me Ash?" Mare asked after they had all recovered. "Did you bug me or something?"
"Um that would be what I have done to us all," confessed a quiet voice belonging to Hannah, "For once Ash is only guilty of one thing, using the locator to find you! By the way we have to start the ball officially now, so girls follow me, guys follow us until we get to the top of the stair then turn left. Oh and if you see Thierry could you tell him to wait five minutes then start announcing the couples."
Five minutes later:
"I Thierry Descouedres shall now introduce the couples who helped to organize this ball: I start with Mr. Gorgon Redfern and his partner Mrs. Opal Redfern.
"Please say that is a mistake, Quinn? It has to be a mistake!" Ash started to panic, "what are my god-dammed parents doing here" Quinn mentally shook him and reminded him of Mare just as Thierry called out, "Mr. Ash Redfern and his partner Miss. Mary-Lynette Carter. When Ash saw Mare at the top of the stairs he nearly fell over the banisters but managed to stop himself as Thierry glared at him and took hold of Mares arm and escorted her down the stairs. Ash took her as far away from his parents as possible as he was scared what they would say. When he saw Rowan and Kestrel come down the stairs her mentally called them over.
" Ash what is it now? Shit mum and dad are coming over. Lets escape! We'll explain every thing once we hide." Said Rowan rushing off towards the back rooms and the fire exits.
