a/n: okay. . .Even I'm starting to think the ending was a little lame. .
.but I just wanted to make it a little different since all the other ccs
stories I've read is all so happy when it ended, so I thought I could make
it a little tragic on my story.
BUT. . .now some of the reviewers had convinced me and now I will rewrite the ending to my story. (hehehe I liked your idea *Vic*)
REVERSAL LOVE
Afterwords (Version 2)
"Excuse me, may I please buy some peony and cherry blossoms?" Tomoyo asks the florist.
The store owner hands the two bundle of flowers to Tomoyo. "Thank you, please come again."
Eriol was standing beside Tomoyo. He helped Tomoyo with the flowers and they headed to the grave yard across the street.
They walked for a while and found two graves that have Sakura and Syaoran's names carved on it. Tomoyo gently lay the flowers on top of them.
"Sakura, we have put your grave close to Syaoran's so you may be with him forever," Tomoyo said quietly. She tried her best to hold back her tears, but she couldn't help but cry out loud.
Eriol comforted her by giving her a small hug. Eriol turned to Sakura and Syaoran's grave. "You have made everyone proud. You're everyone's hero in this planet."
Eriol took out the book that contained all of Sakura's cards. He opened it with ease and took the cards out. Tomoyo watched his every move.
"These cards are not longer useful and they should not be here since their master does not live in this world anymore," Eriol stated. "Tomoyo, could you please help me?"
Tomoyo nodded and understood. She took out a box of matches and lit it on fire. Eriol placed the book down on the ground and let Tomoyo burn it. They both watched the cards turning into smoke and vanishing into the sky.
Suddenly, sky turned bright pink as a bright ray of light shone directly on Sakura and Syaoran's grave. The spirits of all the Sakura cards appeared and jumped one by one into Sakura and Syaoran's grave. Tomoyo and Eriol watched closely to every action and wondered what was happening.
"Eriol, why are the card spirits jumping into their graves? I don't understand," Tomoyo asked with a worried tone.
"I don't know either, we'll have to wait and see." Eriol replied cautiously without taking his eyes away from the scene.
The spirits continued jumping inside the graves while the pink ray of light grew brighter. Until finally the last spirit had disappeared into the stone, the ray of light suddenly turned bright blue. The flash was so bright that it forced Eriol and Tomoyo's eyes shut.
When they finally opened their eyes, they see a tall gray hair man who had large wings on his back.
"Yue!" Eriol was shocked to see his appearance.
Yue looked at Eriol for a moment. Then he turned and entered the graves. "Good bye, my master. . ." he said before he disappeared.
"Yu-Yue. . ." Eriol's face was confused as he continued starring at the graves.
Then suddenly, the ray of light changed into a gold color. The next, and the last spirit to appear was Cerberus. He also was heading towards the graves without even glancing at Eriol and Tomoyo.
"Kero-chan! You came back!" Tomoyo cried with happiness, but Cerberus ignored her.
Eriol was angry. "Cerberus!" He shouted to him. "I demand you to tell us what's happening!"
Cerberus hesitated. He couldn't ignore Eriol, for he was his master and creator.
Cerberus' eyes were serious when he turned and looked deeply at Eriol.
"Cerberus, why did you and all the other cards came back, then suddenly disappearing again?" Eriol questioned.
Cerberus sighed, "I'm sorry, but I couldn't tell you, master. . ." His face was expressionless.
"Cerberus!" Eriol's voice was angrier than ever.
Cerberus jumped when he heard Eriol's voice thundering into his ears. He sighed again, for he couldn't hide anything from Eriol.
"As soon as Sakura passed away, we were also transmitted to another dimension," Cerberus started explaining to them. "Yue and I met Clow Reed in the other dimension, and we had a discussion. We came up with a solution that Sakura and Syaoran had saved everyone in this world, and they deserved to live longer. The only problem is that I, Yue, and all of the cards have to give all of our life energy to Sakura and Syaoran in order for them to revive. We all feel that Sakura and Syaoran are meant more than our lives, so we agreed to give up our lives for them without hesitation or regret. . ." Cerberus' eyes were starring at the ground the whole time.
Eriol was speechless while Tomoyo's tears kept rushing down her cheeks.
"Kero. . .then we'll never be able to see you again. . ." Tomoyo sniffed harder.
Cerberus was also forming tears in his eyes. "Tomoyo, I had a great time with you, even though it was a short time. I really enjoyed your strawberry cake. . ." Cerberus couldn't continue because he was choking in his tears.
"Cerberus, isn't there any other way. . ." Eriol insisted.
"Time is running out. . .I have to go now," Cerberus interupted.
He looked at Eriol and Tomoyo for the last time, then jumped into the graves, "I'll look after you all the time in heaven. . ." he whispered before disappeared.
Tomoyo sobbed harder while Eriol comforted her with a hug.
Suddenly, the ray of light shooting from the sky disappeared. Sakura's grave was emitting pink light while Syaoran's grave was covered with green light. Wind started swirling around the graves while creating a thick barrier around it to cover the view.
After a few minutes, the wind stopped swirling, the light disappeared, and the barriers vanished. The graves erased Sakura and Syaoran's names on it, then also vanished into thin air. Suddenly, Sakura and Syaoran appeared on the same spot as the graves were.
Tomoyo and Eriol's expression suddenly turned a lot happier, like a miracle had just happened.
"Sakura!" Tomoyo cried as she ran over to her best friend and hugged her. "I thought I will never ever see you ever again. . ." Tomoyo's tears was rushing down her face like a waterfall. She continued sobbing on Sakura's shoulders.
Eriol walked over to Syaoran and patted his shoulders. "Welcome back," he said then smiled.
"I'm glad to see you guys too," Sakura spoke calmly while trying to comfort Tomoyo.
"But we'll miss them. . ." Syaoran told them, then looked up to the sky. "Farewell. . ." they all whispered.
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Chibiwinwin: There!! How was that?? Did you think this was an improvement, or did it made it worse?? PLEASE REVIEW!!! But this is all I'm going to add to this story. . .hope you liked it. . .now I'm currently working on 2 other stories. Come and read it please and review!!! Their called 'Endless Passion' and 'Revenge from the future'. Hehe, and no one minds a little advertisement too heh! And if you're bored, please come to my newly made website at www.geocities.com/magical_crazee_trio/ It's currently not completed yet though. . .
BUT. . .now some of the reviewers had convinced me and now I will rewrite the ending to my story. (hehehe I liked your idea *Vic*)
REVERSAL LOVE
Afterwords (Version 2)
"Excuse me, may I please buy some peony and cherry blossoms?" Tomoyo asks the florist.
The store owner hands the two bundle of flowers to Tomoyo. "Thank you, please come again."
Eriol was standing beside Tomoyo. He helped Tomoyo with the flowers and they headed to the grave yard across the street.
They walked for a while and found two graves that have Sakura and Syaoran's names carved on it. Tomoyo gently lay the flowers on top of them.
"Sakura, we have put your grave close to Syaoran's so you may be with him forever," Tomoyo said quietly. She tried her best to hold back her tears, but she couldn't help but cry out loud.
Eriol comforted her by giving her a small hug. Eriol turned to Sakura and Syaoran's grave. "You have made everyone proud. You're everyone's hero in this planet."
Eriol took out the book that contained all of Sakura's cards. He opened it with ease and took the cards out. Tomoyo watched his every move.
"These cards are not longer useful and they should not be here since their master does not live in this world anymore," Eriol stated. "Tomoyo, could you please help me?"
Tomoyo nodded and understood. She took out a box of matches and lit it on fire. Eriol placed the book down on the ground and let Tomoyo burn it. They both watched the cards turning into smoke and vanishing into the sky.
Suddenly, sky turned bright pink as a bright ray of light shone directly on Sakura and Syaoran's grave. The spirits of all the Sakura cards appeared and jumped one by one into Sakura and Syaoran's grave. Tomoyo and Eriol watched closely to every action and wondered what was happening.
"Eriol, why are the card spirits jumping into their graves? I don't understand," Tomoyo asked with a worried tone.
"I don't know either, we'll have to wait and see." Eriol replied cautiously without taking his eyes away from the scene.
The spirits continued jumping inside the graves while the pink ray of light grew brighter. Until finally the last spirit had disappeared into the stone, the ray of light suddenly turned bright blue. The flash was so bright that it forced Eriol and Tomoyo's eyes shut.
When they finally opened their eyes, they see a tall gray hair man who had large wings on his back.
"Yue!" Eriol was shocked to see his appearance.
Yue looked at Eriol for a moment. Then he turned and entered the graves. "Good bye, my master. . ." he said before he disappeared.
"Yu-Yue. . ." Eriol's face was confused as he continued starring at the graves.
Then suddenly, the ray of light changed into a gold color. The next, and the last spirit to appear was Cerberus. He also was heading towards the graves without even glancing at Eriol and Tomoyo.
"Kero-chan! You came back!" Tomoyo cried with happiness, but Cerberus ignored her.
Eriol was angry. "Cerberus!" He shouted to him. "I demand you to tell us what's happening!"
Cerberus hesitated. He couldn't ignore Eriol, for he was his master and creator.
Cerberus' eyes were serious when he turned and looked deeply at Eriol.
"Cerberus, why did you and all the other cards came back, then suddenly disappearing again?" Eriol questioned.
Cerberus sighed, "I'm sorry, but I couldn't tell you, master. . ." His face was expressionless.
"Cerberus!" Eriol's voice was angrier than ever.
Cerberus jumped when he heard Eriol's voice thundering into his ears. He sighed again, for he couldn't hide anything from Eriol.
"As soon as Sakura passed away, we were also transmitted to another dimension," Cerberus started explaining to them. "Yue and I met Clow Reed in the other dimension, and we had a discussion. We came up with a solution that Sakura and Syaoran had saved everyone in this world, and they deserved to live longer. The only problem is that I, Yue, and all of the cards have to give all of our life energy to Sakura and Syaoran in order for them to revive. We all feel that Sakura and Syaoran are meant more than our lives, so we agreed to give up our lives for them without hesitation or regret. . ." Cerberus' eyes were starring at the ground the whole time.
Eriol was speechless while Tomoyo's tears kept rushing down her cheeks.
"Kero. . .then we'll never be able to see you again. . ." Tomoyo sniffed harder.
Cerberus was also forming tears in his eyes. "Tomoyo, I had a great time with you, even though it was a short time. I really enjoyed your strawberry cake. . ." Cerberus couldn't continue because he was choking in his tears.
"Cerberus, isn't there any other way. . ." Eriol insisted.
"Time is running out. . .I have to go now," Cerberus interupted.
He looked at Eriol and Tomoyo for the last time, then jumped into the graves, "I'll look after you all the time in heaven. . ." he whispered before disappeared.
Tomoyo sobbed harder while Eriol comforted her with a hug.
Suddenly, the ray of light shooting from the sky disappeared. Sakura's grave was emitting pink light while Syaoran's grave was covered with green light. Wind started swirling around the graves while creating a thick barrier around it to cover the view.
After a few minutes, the wind stopped swirling, the light disappeared, and the barriers vanished. The graves erased Sakura and Syaoran's names on it, then also vanished into thin air. Suddenly, Sakura and Syaoran appeared on the same spot as the graves were.
Tomoyo and Eriol's expression suddenly turned a lot happier, like a miracle had just happened.
"Sakura!" Tomoyo cried as she ran over to her best friend and hugged her. "I thought I will never ever see you ever again. . ." Tomoyo's tears was rushing down her face like a waterfall. She continued sobbing on Sakura's shoulders.
Eriol walked over to Syaoran and patted his shoulders. "Welcome back," he said then smiled.
"I'm glad to see you guys too," Sakura spoke calmly while trying to comfort Tomoyo.
"But we'll miss them. . ." Syaoran told them, then looked up to the sky. "Farewell. . ." they all whispered.
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Chibiwinwin: There!! How was that?? Did you think this was an improvement, or did it made it worse?? PLEASE REVIEW!!! But this is all I'm going to add to this story. . .hope you liked it. . .now I'm currently working on 2 other stories. Come and read it please and review!!! Their called 'Endless Passion' and 'Revenge from the future'. Hehe, and no one minds a little advertisement too heh! And if you're bored, please come to my newly made website at www.geocities.com/magical_crazee_trio/ It's currently not completed yet though. . .