I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO happy!!!!! So happy I could cry (well not really,
but you get the point) 16 REVIEWS!!!!!! EEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! Well I would
like to thank all the people that DID review.
Broken Dreams- for being my first reviewer! Moondevil001- for some really good advice Rabbitinthemoon- I'll get the SM fics when I feel like it. I don't really care, read the story, just DON'T OBSESS (sorry to the people who don't know what I'm talking bout) Lonemoon23- you'll find out where they're going in this chapter Ferret demon- AHHHHH!!!! You scared me there for a minute. glad you like it ^_^ and I know what you mean about being hyper. Chris- hehe, another review! Thank you! ArtemisMoon- for not just one, but FOUR reviews.one on each chapter ^_^ thanks for agreeing with me! Jack- I know! I know! I'll try to put more detail in, I really will! Some person who didn't put their name- I'm writing more chapters as soon as I can! Animefreak- I'm glad SOMEONE gets my humor. or at least you're just the only one who commented on it. Crazy457- glad you like ^_^ Kleptomaniac Sam- I'm glad you like my story, but if you break the computer, you wont be able to read any more ^_^
THANK YOU!!!! TO ALL THE PEOPLE WHO REVIEWED!!!
AND I got my chapters to have different paragraphs for each speaker, glad my second reviewer warned me about that!
Chapter 4- Finally the date, plus some new arrivals.
Kagome sighed as the wind whipped her hair. She had never gone this fast before; her mom was a very slow driver.
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Inu Yasha wasn't paying attention to the road. All his thoughts were on the beautiful girl next to him. She looked so much like Kikyo. except, where Kikyo was cold, Kagome was caring and Kagome actually SMILED for heavens sake.
Kagome finally noticed him staring at her. She looked over and blushed, a thing she did quite often. That was another thing he liked about her- she was innocent. He just smiled at her again. He found it amusing the way she blushed whenever he was around.
"Inu Yasha." Kagome said.
"Hmm?"
"Watch the road."
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Kagome was fascinated by the huge restaurant that stood before her. She heard Inu Yasha laugh again. "Why do you keep laughing at me?" She asked indignantly.
"Because you're so. innocent, and so unlike every other girl I've dated."
"Oh? And how many girls HAVE you dated, hmm?"
"Oh, a few." He walked by her to the restaurant door, and held it open for her.
Kagome walked inside the huge, white building and looked around the fancy dining room. Everything was white, or gold. "How did you get reservations to this place?" Kagome asked her date.
"Well, I wanted to take you someplace nice, so I called here. They were going to put me on a waiting list, in case a space opened up, but when I told them my name, they gave me a spot. It was strange." He explained.
"Maybe your famous." She giggled.
"Inu Yasha?" Someone asked behind them, and the two turned around.
A short, ugly man stood behind them. "Jaken?" Inu Yasha asked incredulously.
"Jaken?" Kagome whispered. The ugly man started rambling, while Inu Yasha explained.
"He works for my brother. Well, my half brother. I don't know why he would be here though."
"I didn't know you had a half brother." She whispered back, as Jaken kept on talking, oblivious to the fact that the two were not listening.
Inu Yasha growled. "His name is Sesshoumaru, and I hate his guts. He's a full demon. We share the same father."
"And so Sesshoumaru-sama bought this restaurant to further expand his wealth." Finished Jaken. That was the only part that Inu Yasha and Kagome heard.
"So Sesshoumaru owns this place? That explains why they gave me a reservation."
"Yes it does." Kagome told him, though her date wasn't really listening.
"Shall I go fetch Sesshoumaru-sama?" Jaken asked.
"No that's really ok." Inu Yasha growled at the little man.
"Ok, I will be right back with your brother." With that, Jaken ran off to a back room.
"Ummm, didn't the midget hear you? You DID say no, right?" Kagome asked.
"Yes. Lets go sit down, before the runt comes back."
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"So, my brother is here? That does make things interesting. I would really like to see his date. He does pick the beautiful girls, right Kikyo?"
Kikyo giggled at Sesshoumaru. 'So, Inu Yasha is here. I wonder if he'll be jealous about me being with his brother. This should be fun.'
"Come darling, we MUST go visit little Inu Yasha." Sesshoumaru said, standing up. Jaken ran to the door and opened it for his employer and his employer's new girlfriend.
"Oh, we must." Kikyo said.
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"This place is really nice." Kagome commented, trying to break the silence.
"Lets just eat and get out of here. This was a bad place to take you."
"It looks like Jaken was right." The diners heard a deep voice say. Kagome looked at the exceedingly handsome, white haired male standing in front of their table.
Inu Yasha looked straight past his half brother, to the woman behind. "KIKYO?" he yelled.
"Hello, darling." She gave her old boyfriend a smile, and hung on to Sesshoumaru's arm.
"My my, you look a lot like Kikyo young lady. What is your name?"
"Ka.. Kagome.." She stuttered. 'He's gorgeous' she thought to herself.
"Little whore!" Inu Yasha growled at Kikyo, who only giggled. "Damn it Sesshoumaru! Why did you fucking take my girlfriend?"
A deadly silence fell, broken only by Kikyo's annoying giggling. "Girl.. Friend.." Kagome whispered.
Inu Yasha turned his head and his mouth dropped open, remembering what he had said. "Kagome, I.."
"Is this the only reason you asked me out? Because I looked like Kikyo? You couldn't have her, so you took the look-a-like, is that it?" She stood up, threw down her napkin, and walked to the restaurant door as quickly as possible without running.
"Tisk tisk, Inu Yasha, you just can't seem to hold onto girlfriends, can you?" Sesshoumaru smirked.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Once Kagome got outside, she let her tears pour out. She didn't know why she was crying. He was only a boy, right? There were plenty of others out there. Others who would treat her better. She knew this was all true, but if she knew it, then why was she so broken-hearted? That's when she realized she had no way to get home.
"Kagome!" She turned to the street to see Hojo's car pull up. "Kagome, are you ok?"
"I'm fine." She sniffed.
"Kagome!" Inu Yasha ran through the giant doors of his brothers restaurant. "Kagome I didn't mean.."
"Kagome is everything alright?" Hojo asked from his car. "Would you like a ride back home?"
"Yes, I would love a ride." Kagome shot a look of hate back at the stunned Inu Yasha, and opened the passenger side door to Hojo's car.
"Kagome, wait!" He yelled.
"Lets go Hojo."
The car sped off down the street, leaving a dumbfounded Inu Yasha on the sidewalk. People were starting to stare oddly at the boy, who didn't move from his spot for a couple of minutes. "Kagome..." he whispered.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
MWAH HAHAHAHA! Well I just HAD to make things a little more interesting. Hehe. Oh, and don't forget to REVIEW! Give me some help, if you want a certain thing to happen, I will certainly accept some advice. Till next time!
~Lady Red
Broken Dreams- for being my first reviewer! Moondevil001- for some really good advice Rabbitinthemoon- I'll get the SM fics when I feel like it. I don't really care, read the story, just DON'T OBSESS (sorry to the people who don't know what I'm talking bout) Lonemoon23- you'll find out where they're going in this chapter Ferret demon- AHHHHH!!!! You scared me there for a minute. glad you like it ^_^ and I know what you mean about being hyper. Chris- hehe, another review! Thank you! ArtemisMoon- for not just one, but FOUR reviews.one on each chapter ^_^ thanks for agreeing with me! Jack- I know! I know! I'll try to put more detail in, I really will! Some person who didn't put their name- I'm writing more chapters as soon as I can! Animefreak- I'm glad SOMEONE gets my humor. or at least you're just the only one who commented on it. Crazy457- glad you like ^_^ Kleptomaniac Sam- I'm glad you like my story, but if you break the computer, you wont be able to read any more ^_^
THANK YOU!!!! TO ALL THE PEOPLE WHO REVIEWED!!!
AND I got my chapters to have different paragraphs for each speaker, glad my second reviewer warned me about that!
Chapter 4- Finally the date, plus some new arrivals.
Kagome sighed as the wind whipped her hair. She had never gone this fast before; her mom was a very slow driver.
~*~*~*~*~*~
Inu Yasha wasn't paying attention to the road. All his thoughts were on the beautiful girl next to him. She looked so much like Kikyo. except, where Kikyo was cold, Kagome was caring and Kagome actually SMILED for heavens sake.
Kagome finally noticed him staring at her. She looked over and blushed, a thing she did quite often. That was another thing he liked about her- she was innocent. He just smiled at her again. He found it amusing the way she blushed whenever he was around.
"Inu Yasha." Kagome said.
"Hmm?"
"Watch the road."
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Kagome was fascinated by the huge restaurant that stood before her. She heard Inu Yasha laugh again. "Why do you keep laughing at me?" She asked indignantly.
"Because you're so. innocent, and so unlike every other girl I've dated."
"Oh? And how many girls HAVE you dated, hmm?"
"Oh, a few." He walked by her to the restaurant door, and held it open for her.
Kagome walked inside the huge, white building and looked around the fancy dining room. Everything was white, or gold. "How did you get reservations to this place?" Kagome asked her date.
"Well, I wanted to take you someplace nice, so I called here. They were going to put me on a waiting list, in case a space opened up, but when I told them my name, they gave me a spot. It was strange." He explained.
"Maybe your famous." She giggled.
"Inu Yasha?" Someone asked behind them, and the two turned around.
A short, ugly man stood behind them. "Jaken?" Inu Yasha asked incredulously.
"Jaken?" Kagome whispered. The ugly man started rambling, while Inu Yasha explained.
"He works for my brother. Well, my half brother. I don't know why he would be here though."
"I didn't know you had a half brother." She whispered back, as Jaken kept on talking, oblivious to the fact that the two were not listening.
Inu Yasha growled. "His name is Sesshoumaru, and I hate his guts. He's a full demon. We share the same father."
"And so Sesshoumaru-sama bought this restaurant to further expand his wealth." Finished Jaken. That was the only part that Inu Yasha and Kagome heard.
"So Sesshoumaru owns this place? That explains why they gave me a reservation."
"Yes it does." Kagome told him, though her date wasn't really listening.
"Shall I go fetch Sesshoumaru-sama?" Jaken asked.
"No that's really ok." Inu Yasha growled at the little man.
"Ok, I will be right back with your brother." With that, Jaken ran off to a back room.
"Ummm, didn't the midget hear you? You DID say no, right?" Kagome asked.
"Yes. Lets go sit down, before the runt comes back."
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"So, my brother is here? That does make things interesting. I would really like to see his date. He does pick the beautiful girls, right Kikyo?"
Kikyo giggled at Sesshoumaru. 'So, Inu Yasha is here. I wonder if he'll be jealous about me being with his brother. This should be fun.'
"Come darling, we MUST go visit little Inu Yasha." Sesshoumaru said, standing up. Jaken ran to the door and opened it for his employer and his employer's new girlfriend.
"Oh, we must." Kikyo said.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"This place is really nice." Kagome commented, trying to break the silence.
"Lets just eat and get out of here. This was a bad place to take you."
"It looks like Jaken was right." The diners heard a deep voice say. Kagome looked at the exceedingly handsome, white haired male standing in front of their table.
Inu Yasha looked straight past his half brother, to the woman behind. "KIKYO?" he yelled.
"Hello, darling." She gave her old boyfriend a smile, and hung on to Sesshoumaru's arm.
"My my, you look a lot like Kikyo young lady. What is your name?"
"Ka.. Kagome.." She stuttered. 'He's gorgeous' she thought to herself.
"Little whore!" Inu Yasha growled at Kikyo, who only giggled. "Damn it Sesshoumaru! Why did you fucking take my girlfriend?"
A deadly silence fell, broken only by Kikyo's annoying giggling. "Girl.. Friend.." Kagome whispered.
Inu Yasha turned his head and his mouth dropped open, remembering what he had said. "Kagome, I.."
"Is this the only reason you asked me out? Because I looked like Kikyo? You couldn't have her, so you took the look-a-like, is that it?" She stood up, threw down her napkin, and walked to the restaurant door as quickly as possible without running.
"Tisk tisk, Inu Yasha, you just can't seem to hold onto girlfriends, can you?" Sesshoumaru smirked.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Once Kagome got outside, she let her tears pour out. She didn't know why she was crying. He was only a boy, right? There were plenty of others out there. Others who would treat her better. She knew this was all true, but if she knew it, then why was she so broken-hearted? That's when she realized she had no way to get home.
"Kagome!" She turned to the street to see Hojo's car pull up. "Kagome, are you ok?"
"I'm fine." She sniffed.
"Kagome!" Inu Yasha ran through the giant doors of his brothers restaurant. "Kagome I didn't mean.."
"Kagome is everything alright?" Hojo asked from his car. "Would you like a ride back home?"
"Yes, I would love a ride." Kagome shot a look of hate back at the stunned Inu Yasha, and opened the passenger side door to Hojo's car.
"Kagome, wait!" He yelled.
"Lets go Hojo."
The car sped off down the street, leaving a dumbfounded Inu Yasha on the sidewalk. People were starting to stare oddly at the boy, who didn't move from his spot for a couple of minutes. "Kagome..." he whispered.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
MWAH HAHAHAHA! Well I just HAD to make things a little more interesting. Hehe. Oh, and don't forget to REVIEW! Give me some help, if you want a certain thing to happen, I will certainly accept some advice. Till next time!
~Lady Red