Mydogisfudge - Thanks, I liked it too. : )
Lightedeagle - Thanks. *blush* I can't tell you how *impressed* I am myself. This far exceeded anything I have done up to this point, although 'Iedos Liberare' is getting close. I'm glad you liked it and I hope you enjoy this little post. But the last one took a lot out of me. ; )
Ds_jt - Here is that website I told you about. And it wasn't *as* many versions as I thought but there are a lot. The two that I remember reading and thinking about most are 'Fair, Brown and Trembling' and 'The Green Knight.' http://www.surlalunefairytales.com/ It looks like I'll be heading back there once this fic is complete. I'm thinking of starting up a new fairytale once this is done(only 2 ½ chaps away)!! But I will get to that more later. Um, you'll just have to keep reading to find out what happens to Palpy. ] : )
Ciria - I know, but I didn't see how else to work the little troll in. Besides, I don't think you'll notice his absence. A lot goes on since then. Are you in England?? I keep seeing you use 'git' and I don't see that too often in the states. Anyway, I got off track there. Yes, how else could Qui verify what he suspected? Since Obi wasn't about to hang around to "talk" about it. And yes, Obi made a mistake for turning but come on, if you were trying to get away and you heard your 'full' name shouted out unexpectedly, I think you would turn out of shock too. And I enjoyed his fight too. I'm glad he won!! : D
Aiska - What will happen to him now?? That's a good question. Let's see shall we. ] : )
Remnants - *salutes* Will do! ; )
Katt - But, but, I wanted to stop. Or else I wouldn't have anything else to post later. ; ) Just brace yourself.
Lillian jinn - Thanks. : ) I liked this chap too, but it was hard to get out.
Escapistone - Yeah, isn't great. *sheepish grin* Our Obi is so sweet. I think you'll see that exemplified in the next chap.
REALbluelightsaber - Thanks, but hey it wouldn't be as dramatic if Qui figured it out right away. ; )
Dragonsong - You're so smart. But tlet's just see what happens shall we. ] : )
Maygin - *blush* Aw, thanks. I liked that part too. It was a pivotal moment and I wanted it to be such. I think that one moment explained more than all the thoughts and dialogue could have. And you have every right to be scared. You'll have to see what happens next just like the rest of us. ; ) And I'm glad you checked it out as well. Thanks. : D
Stephanie - Thanks and you'll just have to see how the story unfolds like the rest of us. ; )
Joe - Thanks and will do. ; )
Lou - Thanks. *blush* I'm just so happy that so many are enjoying it. OH and brace yourself for the end. I think I might have perfected the art of the Cliffie. ] : )
GoldenRose - Thanks and your wish is my command. : )
Everyone - Please read the the comments at the end. I will need your vote. Thank you. : D
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I'm in Over my Head
Qui-Gon stood dumbfounded. He had learned what he set out to, only one question remained; now what? Now that he knew who Cay Andur was, what should he do about it? At that moment, he didn't know. His thoughts drifted back to the events of the past few days. Each time he watched the young boy fight memories of long ago resurfaced and his heart was lightened and burdened at the same time. He missed Cay, like so many others that had come and gone in his life. But Cay had always been kind and friendly and for some reason they clicked immediately. But Qui-Gon knew that the intoxicating smile and infectious laugh was no more his to enjoy.
His friend was gone, and there was nothing he could do about that. However, his son was here, full in the Force and skilled in the Jedi arts. Was it possible that there was a reason these events had occurred at this time? Did the Force plan for them to meet? Dare he believe that the Force had already chosen him for Qui-Gon? The Knight stood wondering if there was an answer to any of the questions that he had. Slowly, he turned to head back to the crowd. He needed to find Adi, or more importantly, he needed to find her apprentice, Siri, and Initiate Bant.
**
Bant had watched as the tall imposing Knight had come in to collect the victor and inwardly, she worried. The Jedi Master's strange behaviour told her he suspected something, but she could not fully know what. The crowd was overwhelming and she was not forceful enough to reach her friend in time. She watched as Qui-Gon pulled Obi-Wan further away.
From a distance she could see the young boy's face transform from the joyous smile of a champion to that of a cornered beast being hunted. Instantly, she tried to advance to assist and protect the kind but tortured soul, but she was not able to push through the throng of people. Suddenly, Obi-Wan fled from the room with Qui-Gon giving chase. She tried calling out over the din but no one heard her. About to follow, Bant stopped immediately as her foot lighted on something. Looking down her eyes bulged in amazement.
**
Obi-Wan ran as fast as he could without looking back. He had to get away. His task was accomplished, his stepbrothers had not won the tournament, thus hopefully halting his stepfather's plans. He could not totally understand the plot the Senator was working at but he did know that this was the first step in his attempts to destroy the Jedi. And that he could not allow. Running through the streets he could not feel them chasing him any longer, yet he did not slow his stride. He needed to get home before his stepfather. Even with Xanatos's acknowledgement of who he was, the boy still hoped he could fool the malicious man.
He didn't know what to expect next, just that he knew it was time to face his stepfather. Xanatos said that he would die tonight no matter what and that worried him. But his own fate was not the issue now, whatever his stepfather had planned, he could not let the man win.
He reached the transport platform and found his ride waiting. He boarded quickly so as not to be left behind and the doors shut immediately after his entrance. Once he sat down his mind drifted back into the tournament and his victory. He smiled softly at that knowledge which slowly faded as he remembered his encounter with Qui-Gon. The man had called him by his real name. How had he figured it out? Maybe he knew my father, because I know Bant would not have told.
That thought was frightening and exhilarating at the same time. To find someone who knew his father and could tell him more about the man was an awesome revelation. Yet now he had someone else who knew who he was. What if he went searching for him and his stepfather found out what happened? A shiver traveled down his spine at the thought. Instinctively, his hand fell down to his side to touch his only connection to the father he wish he knew and admired so much. When his fingers found nothing to grasp, his eyes widened in horror.
**
The silver cylinder rested calmly on the floor, waiting for its owner to retrieve it. Alas its owner did not realize it had slipped from its place at his side. Now a different pair of eyes gazed upon it and it stared back curiously. It pondered if the hand that was reaching down for it was friend or foe. Not like it mattered, for it knew that only two people were capable of wielding it. It had belonged to the father, but loved it's home with the son. The boy, full of light, and hilt, with blade so pure, had masterfully entwined themselves into a dance whenever they fought. And it could not find a place more loving and vibrant than Obi-Wan. When it realized that his master was not there, the polished casing seemed to dull in sorrow.
**
Pain gripped his chest at the knowledge he had lost his prized possession. He had thought it lost once before and could only pray that he would yet retrieve it again. But a secondary terror emerged, as he knew that he would be defenseless while facing the wrath of his stepfather. He had planned on using the weapon as defense should the need arise, which he knew it would. But now he had nothing to protect him, and it scared him to know that he was alone.
**
The young initiate bent down to collect her find. She watched in wonder as the shining hilt dulled instantly at her touch. Recognizing the dormant handle immediately, Bant could feel the tears well in her eyes. She knew that without his weapon he was at the mercy of his cruel stepfather, and it scared her. Clutching the unique item to her, Bant stood worrying. The crowd began to dissipate, now that the tournament was over, yet the Mon Calamarian girl remained.
**
As Cay was announced the winner, Garen cheered with everyone else and then sprinted up to the healers. He wanted to tell Siri the exciting news. He found her arguing, as usual, with one of the medics, demanding to be let go. Smiling at the sight, Garen walked over to her. "Cay won," he said before she even knew he was there. At the revelation, she turned from her dispute and grinned. To Garen it was the most beautiful thing he had ever seen, but he could not tell her that.
"Really?" Siri asked. Garen described the entire fight to her and she drank it all in. At the conclusion, she turned to the Healer and stated, "I'm leaving." With that Siri walked out to join the celebration with Garen following close behind.
By the time the duo made it back to the tournament room, the party was dying down. Scanning the expanse of the room, they spotted Bant standing near a door. Slowly, they made their way over. Garen asked once they were close enough, "Bant?"
The girl didn't move, so the pair circled around in front of her. They found her clutching something to her chest and crying. Bewildered they pressed, "What's wrong? What happened?"
Gasping she whispered, "He's gone."
Still confused, Siri asked, "Gone? Gone where?"
**
His shuttle docked at the landing platform, and Obi-Wan tried to collect himself. It was difficult as he thought ahead to the task he had made for himself. Carefully, he left the craft and headed home.
**
Before she could elaborate further, Qui-Gon ran up to them demanding, "Where did he go?"
Startled by the intrusion, the trio stared up at him. Garen said, "That's what we're trying to find out."
Calming himself just a little, Qui-Gon tried to re-focus. He knew that he was anxious to find out about Cay Andur, or rather, Obi-Wan but yelling at initiates was not going to get him there any faster. "Follow me. We need to talk privately," he commanded and without question the students followed the Knight. Quickly making their way into a small conference room, Qui-Gon again addressed them, "I want you to tell me everything you know about Cay Andur *and* Obi-Wan Kenobi." Confounded, the group gazed up at the Jedi.
**
Urgency began to spur him on as Obi-Wan ran through the avenues toward home. He was sure he would beat his stepfamily home. They could not have left until after he did, so he let down his guard. As such, he did not sense the danger that lay in wait for him as he rounded a corner. Some sort of staff swung out and struck the boy, knocking him to the ground dazed.
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Alright, since there is only like 2(3) more posts left, I have been trying to figure out what I'm going to do next. At this point I have a number of options and would like to ask my readers for their thoughts.
The nominees are:
Beauty and The Beast
Robin Hood
Sleeping Beauty
Jack and the Beanstalk
Other
Thus far I have had two other suggestions, The Three Little Pigs and Pinocchio. Please be sure to give me your vote in a *REVIEW*!!! Ha, you thought I wasn't going to mention that didn't you. Well, thanks for all the support and wonderful feedback thus far. Keep it up!! Thanks. : D
Lightedeagle - Thanks. *blush* I can't tell you how *impressed* I am myself. This far exceeded anything I have done up to this point, although 'Iedos Liberare' is getting close. I'm glad you liked it and I hope you enjoy this little post. But the last one took a lot out of me. ; )
Ds_jt - Here is that website I told you about. And it wasn't *as* many versions as I thought but there are a lot. The two that I remember reading and thinking about most are 'Fair, Brown and Trembling' and 'The Green Knight.' http://www.surlalunefairytales.com/ It looks like I'll be heading back there once this fic is complete. I'm thinking of starting up a new fairytale once this is done(only 2 ½ chaps away)!! But I will get to that more later. Um, you'll just have to keep reading to find out what happens to Palpy. ] : )
Ciria - I know, but I didn't see how else to work the little troll in. Besides, I don't think you'll notice his absence. A lot goes on since then. Are you in England?? I keep seeing you use 'git' and I don't see that too often in the states. Anyway, I got off track there. Yes, how else could Qui verify what he suspected? Since Obi wasn't about to hang around to "talk" about it. And yes, Obi made a mistake for turning but come on, if you were trying to get away and you heard your 'full' name shouted out unexpectedly, I think you would turn out of shock too. And I enjoyed his fight too. I'm glad he won!! : D
Aiska - What will happen to him now?? That's a good question. Let's see shall we. ] : )
Remnants - *salutes* Will do! ; )
Katt - But, but, I wanted to stop. Or else I wouldn't have anything else to post later. ; ) Just brace yourself.
Lillian jinn - Thanks. : ) I liked this chap too, but it was hard to get out.
Escapistone - Yeah, isn't great. *sheepish grin* Our Obi is so sweet. I think you'll see that exemplified in the next chap.
REALbluelightsaber - Thanks, but hey it wouldn't be as dramatic if Qui figured it out right away. ; )
Dragonsong - You're so smart. But tlet's just see what happens shall we. ] : )
Maygin - *blush* Aw, thanks. I liked that part too. It was a pivotal moment and I wanted it to be such. I think that one moment explained more than all the thoughts and dialogue could have. And you have every right to be scared. You'll have to see what happens next just like the rest of us. ; ) And I'm glad you checked it out as well. Thanks. : D
Stephanie - Thanks and you'll just have to see how the story unfolds like the rest of us. ; )
Joe - Thanks and will do. ; )
Lou - Thanks. *blush* I'm just so happy that so many are enjoying it. OH and brace yourself for the end. I think I might have perfected the art of the Cliffie. ] : )
GoldenRose - Thanks and your wish is my command. : )
Everyone - Please read the the comments at the end. I will need your vote. Thank you. : D
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I'm in Over my Head
Qui-Gon stood dumbfounded. He had learned what he set out to, only one question remained; now what? Now that he knew who Cay Andur was, what should he do about it? At that moment, he didn't know. His thoughts drifted back to the events of the past few days. Each time he watched the young boy fight memories of long ago resurfaced and his heart was lightened and burdened at the same time. He missed Cay, like so many others that had come and gone in his life. But Cay had always been kind and friendly and for some reason they clicked immediately. But Qui-Gon knew that the intoxicating smile and infectious laugh was no more his to enjoy.
His friend was gone, and there was nothing he could do about that. However, his son was here, full in the Force and skilled in the Jedi arts. Was it possible that there was a reason these events had occurred at this time? Did the Force plan for them to meet? Dare he believe that the Force had already chosen him for Qui-Gon? The Knight stood wondering if there was an answer to any of the questions that he had. Slowly, he turned to head back to the crowd. He needed to find Adi, or more importantly, he needed to find her apprentice, Siri, and Initiate Bant.
**
Bant had watched as the tall imposing Knight had come in to collect the victor and inwardly, she worried. The Jedi Master's strange behaviour told her he suspected something, but she could not fully know what. The crowd was overwhelming and she was not forceful enough to reach her friend in time. She watched as Qui-Gon pulled Obi-Wan further away.
From a distance she could see the young boy's face transform from the joyous smile of a champion to that of a cornered beast being hunted. Instantly, she tried to advance to assist and protect the kind but tortured soul, but she was not able to push through the throng of people. Suddenly, Obi-Wan fled from the room with Qui-Gon giving chase. She tried calling out over the din but no one heard her. About to follow, Bant stopped immediately as her foot lighted on something. Looking down her eyes bulged in amazement.
**
Obi-Wan ran as fast as he could without looking back. He had to get away. His task was accomplished, his stepbrothers had not won the tournament, thus hopefully halting his stepfather's plans. He could not totally understand the plot the Senator was working at but he did know that this was the first step in his attempts to destroy the Jedi. And that he could not allow. Running through the streets he could not feel them chasing him any longer, yet he did not slow his stride. He needed to get home before his stepfather. Even with Xanatos's acknowledgement of who he was, the boy still hoped he could fool the malicious man.
He didn't know what to expect next, just that he knew it was time to face his stepfather. Xanatos said that he would die tonight no matter what and that worried him. But his own fate was not the issue now, whatever his stepfather had planned, he could not let the man win.
He reached the transport platform and found his ride waiting. He boarded quickly so as not to be left behind and the doors shut immediately after his entrance. Once he sat down his mind drifted back into the tournament and his victory. He smiled softly at that knowledge which slowly faded as he remembered his encounter with Qui-Gon. The man had called him by his real name. How had he figured it out? Maybe he knew my father, because I know Bant would not have told.
That thought was frightening and exhilarating at the same time. To find someone who knew his father and could tell him more about the man was an awesome revelation. Yet now he had someone else who knew who he was. What if he went searching for him and his stepfather found out what happened? A shiver traveled down his spine at the thought. Instinctively, his hand fell down to his side to touch his only connection to the father he wish he knew and admired so much. When his fingers found nothing to grasp, his eyes widened in horror.
**
The silver cylinder rested calmly on the floor, waiting for its owner to retrieve it. Alas its owner did not realize it had slipped from its place at his side. Now a different pair of eyes gazed upon it and it stared back curiously. It pondered if the hand that was reaching down for it was friend or foe. Not like it mattered, for it knew that only two people were capable of wielding it. It had belonged to the father, but loved it's home with the son. The boy, full of light, and hilt, with blade so pure, had masterfully entwined themselves into a dance whenever they fought. And it could not find a place more loving and vibrant than Obi-Wan. When it realized that his master was not there, the polished casing seemed to dull in sorrow.
**
Pain gripped his chest at the knowledge he had lost his prized possession. He had thought it lost once before and could only pray that he would yet retrieve it again. But a secondary terror emerged, as he knew that he would be defenseless while facing the wrath of his stepfather. He had planned on using the weapon as defense should the need arise, which he knew it would. But now he had nothing to protect him, and it scared him to know that he was alone.
**
The young initiate bent down to collect her find. She watched in wonder as the shining hilt dulled instantly at her touch. Recognizing the dormant handle immediately, Bant could feel the tears well in her eyes. She knew that without his weapon he was at the mercy of his cruel stepfather, and it scared her. Clutching the unique item to her, Bant stood worrying. The crowd began to dissipate, now that the tournament was over, yet the Mon Calamarian girl remained.
**
As Cay was announced the winner, Garen cheered with everyone else and then sprinted up to the healers. He wanted to tell Siri the exciting news. He found her arguing, as usual, with one of the medics, demanding to be let go. Smiling at the sight, Garen walked over to her. "Cay won," he said before she even knew he was there. At the revelation, she turned from her dispute and grinned. To Garen it was the most beautiful thing he had ever seen, but he could not tell her that.
"Really?" Siri asked. Garen described the entire fight to her and she drank it all in. At the conclusion, she turned to the Healer and stated, "I'm leaving." With that Siri walked out to join the celebration with Garen following close behind.
By the time the duo made it back to the tournament room, the party was dying down. Scanning the expanse of the room, they spotted Bant standing near a door. Slowly, they made their way over. Garen asked once they were close enough, "Bant?"
The girl didn't move, so the pair circled around in front of her. They found her clutching something to her chest and crying. Bewildered they pressed, "What's wrong? What happened?"
Gasping she whispered, "He's gone."
Still confused, Siri asked, "Gone? Gone where?"
**
His shuttle docked at the landing platform, and Obi-Wan tried to collect himself. It was difficult as he thought ahead to the task he had made for himself. Carefully, he left the craft and headed home.
**
Before she could elaborate further, Qui-Gon ran up to them demanding, "Where did he go?"
Startled by the intrusion, the trio stared up at him. Garen said, "That's what we're trying to find out."
Calming himself just a little, Qui-Gon tried to re-focus. He knew that he was anxious to find out about Cay Andur, or rather, Obi-Wan but yelling at initiates was not going to get him there any faster. "Follow me. We need to talk privately," he commanded and without question the students followed the Knight. Quickly making their way into a small conference room, Qui-Gon again addressed them, "I want you to tell me everything you know about Cay Andur *and* Obi-Wan Kenobi." Confounded, the group gazed up at the Jedi.
**
Urgency began to spur him on as Obi-Wan ran through the avenues toward home. He was sure he would beat his stepfamily home. They could not have left until after he did, so he let down his guard. As such, he did not sense the danger that lay in wait for him as he rounded a corner. Some sort of staff swung out and struck the boy, knocking him to the ground dazed.
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Alright, since there is only like 2(3) more posts left, I have been trying to figure out what I'm going to do next. At this point I have a number of options and would like to ask my readers for their thoughts.
The nominees are:
Beauty and The Beast
Robin Hood
Sleeping Beauty
Jack and the Beanstalk
Other
Thus far I have had two other suggestions, The Three Little Pigs and Pinocchio. Please be sure to give me your vote in a *REVIEW*!!! Ha, you thought I wasn't going to mention that didn't you. Well, thanks for all the support and wonderful feedback thus far. Keep it up!! Thanks. : D