This is the 5TH chappie of Smooth Criminal. Hmmm....If you sent me a review I said I was post it on the bottom of the page right? Well sorry I just got so caught up in writing the story I kinda goofed! Well instead of putting your name on the bottom I'll put it on the top. 'Kay? Alright on with the story! This is gonna be a short chapter.
Seena , Nano*Mecka , Yui Shinomori, Vee017, Baby Winter, AnImE-PrInCeZz78, SupportTheOrange, thanks guys for sendin' the fic! YAH YAH-EEH!
Chapter 5:
A new life begins...an old love ends.
"I'll get my revenge on those two if it's the last thing I do! Stabbing me in the back!" Chad mumbled. "Dude you must really hate Mai for what she did...I mean your gonna get sent to prison again once you get out." "It doesn't matter Two-Bit...it doesn't. Just as long as she and her friend named 'Joey' are dead...I can live better! Now YOU must help me revise a plan for killing the two of them." "Me? NO! How 'bout talkin' to my man man Charles over here." "Charles?" "Yeah. This guy is in here for murdering, manslaughter, and rape. This is who everyone in jail looks up to." "Are you seriouss he came here for all these things?" Charles stood up and walked twoards chad. He took the cigarette from his mouth and said "So you need a revised plan huh?" "Uh yeah..."
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At Mai's house Joey was laying on the sofa with his arms rapped around Mai. The two were watching a movie when Mai said "How long does this movie last?" Joey blinked and said "Uh...45 minutes I guess. I guess we can turn it off and do somethin' else." "Like what? The fair wont be coming into town until tomorrow. That's too long to wait for." "Geez...maybe we can...maybe...go on a date?" Joey was starting to get wimperish. He expecting a good slap across the face. I mean c'mon here now, this is Mai we're talkin' about! "I'd love to..." Joey fell off the sofa hearing that. "Uh...Joey? are ya' okay?" Mai questioned. Stupidly he said "No...Yes I think. I dunno." Mai laughed. Joey looked at her questionly. "what?" "You...remind me of my boyfr-..." She stopped her sentence in mid air looked at the floor slowly. "Ah c'mon Mai It's okay...I mean I'm not offended by it." (Hell yeah I am That guy tried to kill her!) "Yeah...I'm sorry. When he gets out of jail there's no tellin' what he'l do to me when he comes over." "Well he wont get his hands on yous." (Yous is a funny word he uses.) "Nor his feet" Joey finished. Mai loooked up..." Thanks Joe...(She says he name short...JOE)" "Anytime pardener...(That's partner)"
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In the jail you'd could hear Charles and Chad wispering...here's the skinny..." Okay chad...since it was daytime when attacked, you need to revise a plan at night. People will see you in the day time...so attack at night and attack quickly...got it?" "Yeah..."
end! review!
Seena , Nano*Mecka , Yui Shinomori, Vee017, Baby Winter, AnImE-PrInCeZz78, SupportTheOrange, thanks guys for sendin' the fic! YAH YAH-EEH!
Chapter 5:
A new life begins...an old love ends.
"I'll get my revenge on those two if it's the last thing I do! Stabbing me in the back!" Chad mumbled. "Dude you must really hate Mai for what she did...I mean your gonna get sent to prison again once you get out." "It doesn't matter Two-Bit...it doesn't. Just as long as she and her friend named 'Joey' are dead...I can live better! Now YOU must help me revise a plan for killing the two of them." "Me? NO! How 'bout talkin' to my man man Charles over here." "Charles?" "Yeah. This guy is in here for murdering, manslaughter, and rape. This is who everyone in jail looks up to." "Are you seriouss he came here for all these things?" Charles stood up and walked twoards chad. He took the cigarette from his mouth and said "So you need a revised plan huh?" "Uh yeah..."
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At Mai's house Joey was laying on the sofa with his arms rapped around Mai. The two were watching a movie when Mai said "How long does this movie last?" Joey blinked and said "Uh...45 minutes I guess. I guess we can turn it off and do somethin' else." "Like what? The fair wont be coming into town until tomorrow. That's too long to wait for." "Geez...maybe we can...maybe...go on a date?" Joey was starting to get wimperish. He expecting a good slap across the face. I mean c'mon here now, this is Mai we're talkin' about! "I'd love to..." Joey fell off the sofa hearing that. "Uh...Joey? are ya' okay?" Mai questioned. Stupidly he said "No...Yes I think. I dunno." Mai laughed. Joey looked at her questionly. "what?" "You...remind me of my boyfr-..." She stopped her sentence in mid air looked at the floor slowly. "Ah c'mon Mai It's okay...I mean I'm not offended by it." (Hell yeah I am That guy tried to kill her!) "Yeah...I'm sorry. When he gets out of jail there's no tellin' what he'l do to me when he comes over." "Well he wont get his hands on yous." (Yous is a funny word he uses.) "Nor his feet" Joey finished. Mai loooked up..." Thanks Joe...(She says he name short...JOE)" "Anytime pardener...(That's partner)"
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In the jail you'd could hear Charles and Chad wispering...here's the skinny..." Okay chad...since it was daytime when attacked, you need to revise a plan at night. People will see you in the day time...so attack at night and attack quickly...got it?" "Yeah..."
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