*The way Snape sees Hermione*
"Walking down the corrider towards me,through the crowds of students,I take in her appearance,she is weighed down by her bulging bag and her arms full of heavy books that she has held tightly to her chest,Her Gryffindor Robes swishing freely as she walks at a very quick pace,The Head Girl badge that she is wearing glints in the sunlight as does her beautiful wavy,chestnut brown hair,as she nears me her hazel brown eyes seem to sparkle as she smiles at me and looking stunningly pretty she drops her books as she reaches me and wrapps her arms around my waist,as she does this I intake her heavenly scent."
*The way Hermione sees Snape*
"Walking down the corrider trying desperately to escape the crowds of students blocking my path,I comb my fingers through my hair,then pushing past a few students I notice him standing there,waiting at the end of the corrider,dressed in his usual,long,black robes I see him smile,I gaze into his dark brown eyes,quickening my pace to get to him,my robes swishing and my hait bouncing off my shoulders,I look at his long black hair,staying neatly in place as he stands there,as I reach him I discard my books on the floor beside me and embrace him,I lay my head on his chest and take in his warmth.
Ok, so I know that was a little odd them doing that in a crowded corrider,but I think it's perfect for me the way it is*
Please ,please review this,I would really like to see what others think of it.
"Walking down the corrider towards me,through the crowds of students,I take in her appearance,she is weighed down by her bulging bag and her arms full of heavy books that she has held tightly to her chest,Her Gryffindor Robes swishing freely as she walks at a very quick pace,The Head Girl badge that she is wearing glints in the sunlight as does her beautiful wavy,chestnut brown hair,as she nears me her hazel brown eyes seem to sparkle as she smiles at me and looking stunningly pretty she drops her books as she reaches me and wrapps her arms around my waist,as she does this I intake her heavenly scent."
*The way Hermione sees Snape*
"Walking down the corrider trying desperately to escape the crowds of students blocking my path,I comb my fingers through my hair,then pushing past a few students I notice him standing there,waiting at the end of the corrider,dressed in his usual,long,black robes I see him smile,I gaze into his dark brown eyes,quickening my pace to get to him,my robes swishing and my hait bouncing off my shoulders,I look at his long black hair,staying neatly in place as he stands there,as I reach him I discard my books on the floor beside me and embrace him,I lay my head on his chest and take in his warmth.
Ok, so I know that was a little odd them doing that in a crowded corrider,but I think it's perfect for me the way it is*
Please ,please review this,I would really like to see what others think of it.