Authors note: Sorry guys but I decided to add Dave to the story to make it
have a little bit more comedy. Plus Luka will be on the camping trip also.
So everyone who is going is Carter, Abby, Luka, Dave, Kerry, Susan, Deb,
and Pratt, Mark, and Elizabeth. Please read and review!
"Dave don't tell me you got us lost Dave"! Chen yelled at Dave who was now holding the map upside down.
"Relax Deb-
"Don't call me Deb"!
"Dave just give me the map" Kerry snapped.
"Geez you make one or two wrong turns and suddenly you're a bad guy" said Dave.
"Dave you got us lost in the middle of nowhere" yelled Carter. Dave didn't know what to say to that so instead he turned to Abby.
"Abby control your man"! Dave said.
"Down puppy" Abby said to Carter sweetly smiling as she leaned in for a kiss which Carter gratefully gave to her. Abby could see Luka glaring at them out of the corner of her eye.
"Okay now I think we should go north to get to the campsite but I'm not sure." Mumbled Kerry with her face in the map.
"With the pace we are going we are going we won't get there till tomorrow so it looks like we'll have to camp here for tonight"
"Aww man. I need my beauty sleep and I ain't gonna find it sleepin in the dirt"! whined Dave.
"Shut up Dave"! yelled everyone at the same time. Dave was surprised by this as he fell backwards from the heavy back pack on his back. Everyone started walking forward.
"Someone wanna help me up?" said Dave still lying on the ground.
"Sorry Dave looks like you'll have to sleep here tonight" said Abby lying a canteen next to him. Dave reached for it craving the cool water in his dry throat. It was empty.
"Oh common Abby"!
Carter and Abby decided to sleep out side the tent under the stars. They were cuddled under one sleeping bag. Elizabeth and Mark were sleeping outside also but they were on the opposite side of the tent. Pratt, Deb, Susan and Dave went down to the lake. Everyone could sense that Dave was a little jealous because he could tell that Chen and Pratt had something going on. Kerry was asleep in the tent and no one knew where Luka was.
"Having fun yet"? Abby asked playfully.
"Anywhere you are is fun for me" said Carter. Abby laughed at his cliché disregarding the fact that Carter was serious.
"This is nice" said Carter.
"Yeah" agreed Abby.
"You know what Mark said to me earlier" said Carter.
"What"? asked Abby.
"He said that we remind him so much of Doug and Carol when they were first in love. I know you didn't know Doug very well but they were like the couple of the ER".
"I didn't know Doug very well but I knew that him and Carol were very much in love. So yeah that kind of sound like us." Abby closed her eyes slowly falling asleep not knowing that she left Carter with a big smile plastered across his face. After all Abby just admitted that she loved him in her own way.
Dave came back to the camp grounds wet and grumpy and alone. He was down at the lake with Susan, Pratt, and Chen. Dave was extremely jealous about Chen and Pratt so when he tried to make a move on her, she pushed him into the lake. He was freezing and everyone had gotten quite a good laugh out of him.
"That's right. Everyone laughs at Dave. Dave is the clown. No one respects me" Dave whined. When he got to the tent he saw Carter and Abby cuddled and fast asleep.
"What does Carter have that I don't"? mumbled Dave to himself. He slowly started walking away but not before he saw a tall dark figure move toward Abby and Carter. Dave hid behind a tree suddenly startled by this strangers apperance. He watched as the figure slowly covered Abby's mouth with a cloth which awoke her and she tried to scream but the figure put more pressure on her mouth so her scream sounded more like a hum. Soon Abby was knocked unconscious as the tall dark figure careful to wake Carter, pulled Abby out of her sleeping bag and carried her off into the woods. Dave was stunned. Suddenly he couldn't find his voice to scream so he went after the stranger. He was careful not to make any noise as he followed the stranger into a dark cave. He watched as the stranger carried Abby's limp body into the cave so Dave followed him in. Dave wanted to help Abby but it was dark in the cage except for a little bit of light from the torches up on the walls. But Dave couldn't see where he was going and he tripped and loudly fell down. But the figure obviously didn't notice because he rounded a corner. Dave followed but as soon as he was about to turn a corner something hard hit him in the face and he was knocked unconscious. The tall dark figure picked up Dave's body also and carried them both deeper into the cave.
Well that was the second chapter. What will happen next? What will Carter do when he finds Abby missing in the morning. Is the Luka the tall dark figure? What will become of Abby and Dave? If you want to know, please review!
"Dave don't tell me you got us lost Dave"! Chen yelled at Dave who was now holding the map upside down.
"Relax Deb-
"Don't call me Deb"!
"Dave just give me the map" Kerry snapped.
"Geez you make one or two wrong turns and suddenly you're a bad guy" said Dave.
"Dave you got us lost in the middle of nowhere" yelled Carter. Dave didn't know what to say to that so instead he turned to Abby.
"Abby control your man"! Dave said.
"Down puppy" Abby said to Carter sweetly smiling as she leaned in for a kiss which Carter gratefully gave to her. Abby could see Luka glaring at them out of the corner of her eye.
"Okay now I think we should go north to get to the campsite but I'm not sure." Mumbled Kerry with her face in the map.
"With the pace we are going we are going we won't get there till tomorrow so it looks like we'll have to camp here for tonight"
"Aww man. I need my beauty sleep and I ain't gonna find it sleepin in the dirt"! whined Dave.
"Shut up Dave"! yelled everyone at the same time. Dave was surprised by this as he fell backwards from the heavy back pack on his back. Everyone started walking forward.
"Someone wanna help me up?" said Dave still lying on the ground.
"Sorry Dave looks like you'll have to sleep here tonight" said Abby lying a canteen next to him. Dave reached for it craving the cool water in his dry throat. It was empty.
"Oh common Abby"!
Carter and Abby decided to sleep out side the tent under the stars. They were cuddled under one sleeping bag. Elizabeth and Mark were sleeping outside also but they were on the opposite side of the tent. Pratt, Deb, Susan and Dave went down to the lake. Everyone could sense that Dave was a little jealous because he could tell that Chen and Pratt had something going on. Kerry was asleep in the tent and no one knew where Luka was.
"Having fun yet"? Abby asked playfully.
"Anywhere you are is fun for me" said Carter. Abby laughed at his cliché disregarding the fact that Carter was serious.
"This is nice" said Carter.
"Yeah" agreed Abby.
"You know what Mark said to me earlier" said Carter.
"What"? asked Abby.
"He said that we remind him so much of Doug and Carol when they were first in love. I know you didn't know Doug very well but they were like the couple of the ER".
"I didn't know Doug very well but I knew that him and Carol were very much in love. So yeah that kind of sound like us." Abby closed her eyes slowly falling asleep not knowing that she left Carter with a big smile plastered across his face. After all Abby just admitted that she loved him in her own way.
Dave came back to the camp grounds wet and grumpy and alone. He was down at the lake with Susan, Pratt, and Chen. Dave was extremely jealous about Chen and Pratt so when he tried to make a move on her, she pushed him into the lake. He was freezing and everyone had gotten quite a good laugh out of him.
"That's right. Everyone laughs at Dave. Dave is the clown. No one respects me" Dave whined. When he got to the tent he saw Carter and Abby cuddled and fast asleep.
"What does Carter have that I don't"? mumbled Dave to himself. He slowly started walking away but not before he saw a tall dark figure move toward Abby and Carter. Dave hid behind a tree suddenly startled by this strangers apperance. He watched as the figure slowly covered Abby's mouth with a cloth which awoke her and she tried to scream but the figure put more pressure on her mouth so her scream sounded more like a hum. Soon Abby was knocked unconscious as the tall dark figure careful to wake Carter, pulled Abby out of her sleeping bag and carried her off into the woods. Dave was stunned. Suddenly he couldn't find his voice to scream so he went after the stranger. He was careful not to make any noise as he followed the stranger into a dark cave. He watched as the stranger carried Abby's limp body into the cave so Dave followed him in. Dave wanted to help Abby but it was dark in the cage except for a little bit of light from the torches up on the walls. But Dave couldn't see where he was going and he tripped and loudly fell down. But the figure obviously didn't notice because he rounded a corner. Dave followed but as soon as he was about to turn a corner something hard hit him in the face and he was knocked unconscious. The tall dark figure picked up Dave's body also and carried them both deeper into the cave.
Well that was the second chapter. What will happen next? What will Carter do when he finds Abby missing in the morning. Is the Luka the tall dark figure? What will become of Abby and Dave? If you want to know, please review!