Whee I got 3 reviews and I just put it up today so I feel nice and I wrote
the second chapter, I don't own the newsies, neither do I own the song rose
sang last chapter it is 'One Last Breath' and Creed owns that song. So on
with the story! Wait quick shout outs!
Fastdancr- Thanks for the review! I am glad you like my story and if you do come up with a title for me I would really appreciate it.
Twig- Thanks for the review and I will tell about Ravens death but it is later on in the story so you will have to wait! Mwahahaha *cough* Ha!
Dollface- See lookie lookie I am updating! LOL thank you for reviewing!
Chapter 2
Spot sat at Tibby's, he was waiting for Rose to meet him, even though he knew she would forget, it had been three months since he had gotten Rose that job at Medda's it had changed her, she no longer lived with the newsboys she moved into Irving Hall, stopped hanging around newsies and started hanging around people at Medda's she barely ever showed up to one of their dates, she didn't even say hi to him when she was around her friends, she always thought her career was much more important then him. He knew it wasn't her and she just needed something to remind her of where she came from, whom she grew up with, though it was hard. "Spot I need to talk to you." Rose said from behind Spot. "So you decided to show up this time since we aren't around your friends." Spot said coldly, he was tired of Rose he had fallen out of love with her if possible one job could wreck everything they shared together. "Spot don't be this way please?" Rose said seated across from Spot. "How should I be? What happened to 'Spot I will never not have time for you in my new life' tell me? You never show up to our dates any more. Am I not good enough for you is that it?" Spot said raising his voice with every sentence. "Listen Spot I came here to say good bye in an hour I am taking a train to Seattle they want me to sing in a Musical." That was it Spot was tired of understanding each change she made to their relationship, now she was leaving him. "You know what you should go besides you ain't wanted here." Spot said coldly and left Rose sitting in the booth confused.
That night Rose stared out the window from the train thinking of all the good opportunities that were ahead for her, oh who was she kidding she missed Spot, but it was to late she had screwed up their relationship, he had been nothing but supportive though she thought she needed better, but there is no one better then him, he was the one guy she would give up her whole life up for. He was all she had left since Raven and now she has neither. "God damn it Spot, why did you have to treat me so good!" Rose yelled in her mind soon she fell asleep.
Brooklyn Lodge House
Spot thought about Rose as he watched a performance at Irving Hall he couldn't stand her, hell she probably even forgot about Raven and he cared about her more then anything. Now he will never see her again it probably is for the best.
Two Years Later
Rose walked onto the stage of the theatre in Seattle to sing her last song for the night and she had to sing with out accompaniment oh well. She opened her mouth to sing.
"Please come now I think I'm falling I'm holding to all I think is safe It seems I found the road to nowhere And I'm trying to escape I yelled back when I heard thunder But I'm down to one last breath And with it let me say Let me say
Hold me now I'm six feet from the edge and I'm thinking That maybe six feet Ain't so far down
I'm looking down now that it's over Reflecting on all of my mistakes I thought I found the road to somewhere Somewhere in His grace I cried out heaven save me But I'm down to one last breath And with it let me say Let me say
Hold me now I'm six feet from the edge and I'm thinking That maybe six feet Ain't so far down
Sad eyes follow me But I still believe there's somthing left for me So please come stay with me 'Cause I still believe there's something left for you and me For you and me For you and me
Hold me now I'm six feet from the edge and I'm thinking." Tears were falling down her cheeks she had made the worst mistake of her life by singing she had to go back to Brooklyn, she needed Spot.
TBC.
Keep those reviews coming!
Fastdancr- Thanks for the review! I am glad you like my story and if you do come up with a title for me I would really appreciate it.
Twig- Thanks for the review and I will tell about Ravens death but it is later on in the story so you will have to wait! Mwahahaha *cough* Ha!
Dollface- See lookie lookie I am updating! LOL thank you for reviewing!
Chapter 2
Spot sat at Tibby's, he was waiting for Rose to meet him, even though he knew she would forget, it had been three months since he had gotten Rose that job at Medda's it had changed her, she no longer lived with the newsboys she moved into Irving Hall, stopped hanging around newsies and started hanging around people at Medda's she barely ever showed up to one of their dates, she didn't even say hi to him when she was around her friends, she always thought her career was much more important then him. He knew it wasn't her and she just needed something to remind her of where she came from, whom she grew up with, though it was hard. "Spot I need to talk to you." Rose said from behind Spot. "So you decided to show up this time since we aren't around your friends." Spot said coldly, he was tired of Rose he had fallen out of love with her if possible one job could wreck everything they shared together. "Spot don't be this way please?" Rose said seated across from Spot. "How should I be? What happened to 'Spot I will never not have time for you in my new life' tell me? You never show up to our dates any more. Am I not good enough for you is that it?" Spot said raising his voice with every sentence. "Listen Spot I came here to say good bye in an hour I am taking a train to Seattle they want me to sing in a Musical." That was it Spot was tired of understanding each change she made to their relationship, now she was leaving him. "You know what you should go besides you ain't wanted here." Spot said coldly and left Rose sitting in the booth confused.
That night Rose stared out the window from the train thinking of all the good opportunities that were ahead for her, oh who was she kidding she missed Spot, but it was to late she had screwed up their relationship, he had been nothing but supportive though she thought she needed better, but there is no one better then him, he was the one guy she would give up her whole life up for. He was all she had left since Raven and now she has neither. "God damn it Spot, why did you have to treat me so good!" Rose yelled in her mind soon she fell asleep.
Brooklyn Lodge House
Spot thought about Rose as he watched a performance at Irving Hall he couldn't stand her, hell she probably even forgot about Raven and he cared about her more then anything. Now he will never see her again it probably is for the best.
Two Years Later
Rose walked onto the stage of the theatre in Seattle to sing her last song for the night and she had to sing with out accompaniment oh well. She opened her mouth to sing.
"Please come now I think I'm falling I'm holding to all I think is safe It seems I found the road to nowhere And I'm trying to escape I yelled back when I heard thunder But I'm down to one last breath And with it let me say Let me say
Hold me now I'm six feet from the edge and I'm thinking That maybe six feet Ain't so far down
I'm looking down now that it's over Reflecting on all of my mistakes I thought I found the road to somewhere Somewhere in His grace I cried out heaven save me But I'm down to one last breath And with it let me say Let me say
Hold me now I'm six feet from the edge and I'm thinking That maybe six feet Ain't so far down
Sad eyes follow me But I still believe there's somthing left for me So please come stay with me 'Cause I still believe there's something left for you and me For you and me For you and me
Hold me now I'm six feet from the edge and I'm thinking." Tears were falling down her cheeks she had made the worst mistake of her life by singing she had to go back to Brooklyn, she needed Spot.
TBC.
Keep those reviews coming!