Tough Decisions
By:TootsieRoll18
Ok probably the only person who's reviewed said the P.O.V.'s were hard to follow, whenever I put a name all alone that's when the POV changes, notice I don't do first person all the time also...
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Stella sighed in relief as she stepped into the Great Hall after Potions. She wasn't really hungry so after a few bites she turned to talk to her friends, but found them buried in their homework.
"Hi" said someone behind her
Stella turned around and smiled, it was George Weasley.
"Hi, my name's Stella" she said
"My name's George Weasley" he said and from there they launched into a conversation.
Ron
Once I saw George walk in and sit next to her I knew he was gonna do it, and I was right. In two minutes tops George had her in conversation with both of them laughing and joking. Well now I really have to get her out with me. But I had to stop thinking then because I heard those words that made me want to punch George really hard: "So you want to go out sometime?". Then I stiffened waiting for the answer, hoping it wouldn't be like all the others but my eyes narrowed as I heard her say "Sure" in response.
George looked up at Ron to see him glaring at him.
"What's your problem Ron?" he asked knowing exactly what it was
Stella had looked up and was listening attentively.
"You know exactly what my problem is George" said Ron bitterly
Stella who had looked up by then said "Well, I don't, so what is it?"
She never got her answer though because Ron got up really fast and left the two to plan their Saturday evening.
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I try to help you out through the hardest of times, your heart is in your throat and I'm speaking my mind, though it looks like it's over, I'm still not over you
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a/n:Oops before I meant it was the PROLOUGE anyway I might not do POV's much anymore. Next chapter - Dinner, a Movie, and a Fight
By:TootsieRoll18
Ok probably the only person who's reviewed said the P.O.V.'s were hard to follow, whenever I put a name all alone that's when the POV changes, notice I don't do first person all the time also...
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Stella sighed in relief as she stepped into the Great Hall after Potions. She wasn't really hungry so after a few bites she turned to talk to her friends, but found them buried in their homework.
"Hi" said someone behind her
Stella turned around and smiled, it was George Weasley.
"Hi, my name's Stella" she said
"My name's George Weasley" he said and from there they launched into a conversation.
Ron
Once I saw George walk in and sit next to her I knew he was gonna do it, and I was right. In two minutes tops George had her in conversation with both of them laughing and joking. Well now I really have to get her out with me. But I had to stop thinking then because I heard those words that made me want to punch George really hard: "So you want to go out sometime?". Then I stiffened waiting for the answer, hoping it wouldn't be like all the others but my eyes narrowed as I heard her say "Sure" in response.
George looked up at Ron to see him glaring at him.
"What's your problem Ron?" he asked knowing exactly what it was
Stella had looked up and was listening attentively.
"You know exactly what my problem is George" said Ron bitterly
Stella who had looked up by then said "Well, I don't, so what is it?"
She never got her answer though because Ron got up really fast and left the two to plan their Saturday evening.
*~*
I try to help you out through the hardest of times, your heart is in your throat and I'm speaking my mind, though it looks like it's over, I'm still not over you
*~*
a/n:Oops before I meant it was the PROLOUGE anyway I might not do POV's much anymore. Next chapter - Dinner, a Movie, and a Fight