Hey, ya this is my 5th chapter! Im ON A ROLL!
Anyway, this is my answer to everyone that reveiwed (some didn't do it the
usual way, so you know) Voltaire: (who said 'I don't know much about
literary critisism...But it seems like your story changes focus a bit
quickly, and often. This kept my attention, and you kept it so that I
didn't get confused. It seems to me like you could be a great writer with
practice.') Thanks a lot, and maybe I might be an author when I grow up. I
hope so!!
Angelgirl (who reviewed 2 times, one normal, other via Roll Message board):
she said 'Hmmm, good story, but what's with the huge plot twist?' Well I
dunno, it keeps it intresting I guess, and the whole 'Intercate Chapter'? I
did it over like a million days and all were different moods. I think
that's what you meant, right?
And '..' Are thoughts, as "." are speech things.
I don't own Megman..damn! x.x or Blizzard, or the mavericks. If I did, I would be either making them be my slaves, or pulling them apart. Whichever is worse for them. ^_~ alrighty now, on wid the show!!
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I swear, if I could, I would of fainted right there, right then. Instead I yelled and tried to kick, punch, even bite him, but seeing as he had my shoulder in a tight grip, I couldn't move much without risk of pulling off my arm.
"Oh stop it, you know you'll never get away from me, ever!" The big guy turned me around so I was facing him. "Now, stop moving, otherwise I'll knock you into next week!" With a small, really really pathetic squeak, I slowed my moving, but I couldn't stop my shivering. I cowered in front of him, when I realized something.
Blizzard Bengali was a boy, and I, Kage, had steel-toed boots.
I kicked him where it must really have hurt.but all he did is flinch, and I THINK there was small, hardly there tears, but he held his ground.
Anyway, I probaly couldn't escape anyway; mavericks were surronding us, watching what was happening. A few snickered, though at what I don't know. It wasn't that funny to me, at all.
I tried not to tremble, and blinked back stinging tears. A quick thought passed through my mind, a question really. 'Why was I scared of him?? He was the same as all the others, so why aren't I fighting him?'
Quickly I turned, only enough to get my head above his hand. My jaws clamped down on his hand and I started to kick and punch furiously at Blizzard. A muffled roar erupted from my throat, and my eyes went blood red. Other mavericks jumped in to help get me down, but I wouldn't stay still for a moment.
'I was a fighter! I wasn't scared of anything, nothing! I was going to get out of there!!!' Those thoughts kept running through my head, again and again. 'I wasn't fragile, I was strong, I was a maverick hunter! A HUNTER!!'
I felt Bengali's hand slip from my shoulder, and I turned and RAN! Nothing could hold me back, nothing!
Out I ran, gulping air as fast as possible. I turned again and again in the maze of halls, but I couldn't find my way out. Wild happiness soon turned to desperation, victory turned to hope that was just barely there. Tears now poured out, blinding me, tearing at me. Who was I trying to kid? I was afraid, very much at that.
I tripped, but I didn't try to get up. Crying, I lyed there, muffled sobs bursting out once in a while while tears ran in rivits down my face.
'Wait' said something in my brain, 'Remember what X said? "Don't cry, be strong! Crying will make it worse.. If you need help, call us! We'll help you.." Remember? And then Zero fell off the couch!' Slowly a grin appeared on my face, and I quickly clicked a button to turn on my speech thing, to talk to X and Zero.
"Hello? Kage? You there? Oh please, tell me you're there!" X. Worried. then came on Zeros voice "Listen, X, she can take care of herself. C'mon, lets keep searching."
"Wait! Guys, it's me! I'm lost in the maverick base, and otherwise, I don't know where I am. What do I do?" I cried out, hoping no maverick heard me. A deafening silence greeted me. Static. Nothing else. Just silence..and static. Tears poured out again. They turned it off.
'What do I do now?'
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Review now, please. Thankees! ^_^ Anyways, bye! I gotta go deliver phone books now (a scouting thing. Very boring and tiring. *Chibi Kage: YAY! I'll be left alone now! No more crying!! Not till later, Chibi Kage. Now shush.
And '..' Are thoughts, as "." are speech things.
I don't own Megman..damn! x.x or Blizzard, or the mavericks. If I did, I would be either making them be my slaves, or pulling them apart. Whichever is worse for them. ^_~ alrighty now, on wid the show!!
~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~~ .~~.~~.~~.~~.~~.~
I swear, if I could, I would of fainted right there, right then. Instead I yelled and tried to kick, punch, even bite him, but seeing as he had my shoulder in a tight grip, I couldn't move much without risk of pulling off my arm.
"Oh stop it, you know you'll never get away from me, ever!" The big guy turned me around so I was facing him. "Now, stop moving, otherwise I'll knock you into next week!" With a small, really really pathetic squeak, I slowed my moving, but I couldn't stop my shivering. I cowered in front of him, when I realized something.
Blizzard Bengali was a boy, and I, Kage, had steel-toed boots.
I kicked him where it must really have hurt.but all he did is flinch, and I THINK there was small, hardly there tears, but he held his ground.
Anyway, I probaly couldn't escape anyway; mavericks were surronding us, watching what was happening. A few snickered, though at what I don't know. It wasn't that funny to me, at all.
I tried not to tremble, and blinked back stinging tears. A quick thought passed through my mind, a question really. 'Why was I scared of him?? He was the same as all the others, so why aren't I fighting him?'
Quickly I turned, only enough to get my head above his hand. My jaws clamped down on his hand and I started to kick and punch furiously at Blizzard. A muffled roar erupted from my throat, and my eyes went blood red. Other mavericks jumped in to help get me down, but I wouldn't stay still for a moment.
'I was a fighter! I wasn't scared of anything, nothing! I was going to get out of there!!!' Those thoughts kept running through my head, again and again. 'I wasn't fragile, I was strong, I was a maverick hunter! A HUNTER!!'
I felt Bengali's hand slip from my shoulder, and I turned and RAN! Nothing could hold me back, nothing!
Out I ran, gulping air as fast as possible. I turned again and again in the maze of halls, but I couldn't find my way out. Wild happiness soon turned to desperation, victory turned to hope that was just barely there. Tears now poured out, blinding me, tearing at me. Who was I trying to kid? I was afraid, very much at that.
I tripped, but I didn't try to get up. Crying, I lyed there, muffled sobs bursting out once in a while while tears ran in rivits down my face.
'Wait' said something in my brain, 'Remember what X said? "Don't cry, be strong! Crying will make it worse.. If you need help, call us! We'll help you.." Remember? And then Zero fell off the couch!' Slowly a grin appeared on my face, and I quickly clicked a button to turn on my speech thing, to talk to X and Zero.
"Hello? Kage? You there? Oh please, tell me you're there!" X. Worried. then came on Zeros voice "Listen, X, she can take care of herself. C'mon, lets keep searching."
"Wait! Guys, it's me! I'm lost in the maverick base, and otherwise, I don't know where I am. What do I do?" I cried out, hoping no maverick heard me. A deafening silence greeted me. Static. Nothing else. Just silence..and static. Tears poured out again. They turned it off.
'What do I do now?'
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Review now, please. Thankees! ^_^ Anyways, bye! I gotta go deliver phone books now (a scouting thing. Very boring and tiring. *Chibi Kage: YAY! I'll be left alone now! No more crying!! Not till later, Chibi Kage. Now shush.