A/N: NEW POINT OF VIEW! ^^ Wait, sorry, let me rephrase that. New FAN point of view. Nice! Well done, and from a personal perspective. Great job, Hyperbole! To tell you the truth, I giggled in a few places. :-P Tee hee! Very nice, very nice indeedy. And it rhymed too! (I know how annoying that can be, hun. -.- It's near impossible sometimes. The stupid words refuse to do what you want!! But don't worry. You did well!) All in all, I liked much. Everyone read on, chickie did a good job! :P Ta! And Arigato!
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Tail round his neck,
Fists in the gut,
Vegeta getting beat to heck,
D@mn that lizard f***!
Licking off the blood
The battered ouji spits up,
Frieza keeps up his pounding,
Of the Saiyan royal pup
The others stand back,
Too scared to try and help,
They know they'll get pulped,
Along with Frieza's 'monkey whelp'.
But Goku's awake and coming,
Healed and ready to fight,
But his prince is getting beaten,
That isn't right.
It is just so wrong,
That the last of the royal house,
Should fall to the destroyer of Vegetasei,
That white lizard louse.
But look who's here - it's Goku!
Frieza's takes a pause,
The others are glad to see him,
He's the best thing for their cause.
Vegeta crows with delight,
The saiyan cause is not lost,
Kakarott is here at last,
For their homeworld's destruction Frieza will know the cost.
But the lizard tires of Vegeta's glee,
Deals him a killer blow,
A laser-shot through the heart,
But the ouji's death comes slow.
With his last few moments,
Vegeta shares his pain,
Of how Frieza turned him,
And their whole race to his gain.
Royal tears then flow,
As Vegeta begs,
For Kakarott to avenge,
Their race, their world, he begs.
The only one left,
Goku begins to understand,
What Frieza has done,
Goku will follow Vegeta's last demand.
"For him! And for everyone else you've destroyed!" (- Goku. 'The End of Vegeta')
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'Monkey whelp'. *cracks up* Nice! Let's all give Hyperbole a hand, yah? Fabulous! That's the second fan chapter out, and I'm sorry it took so long to get up! ^^; I'm an idiot sometimes, I swear.
Side note: Anyone see the episode where Vegito was turned into candy? Just saw it a half hour ago. :D I laughed so hard. Dabura's face when he was talking to Videl about love, that was priceless. What with all the little hearts and sparklies floating around his head. *grins* And don't get me started on Buu's ghosts. I fell off of the chair when they started doing tricks. And then, coffee flavored candy. COFFEE. Mmmm....
Ok, back to what should be an author's note.
S'ankyuu to all those who reviewed last chapter, most are these are for you Chuquita:
Dawn Moon: Ch. 1(Hehe, poetic Veggie so deep. Like a kiddie pool. O.o), Chuquita: Ch. 10(First to review your own poem. ^^ That's ok. The new fic sounds great, good luck with it! -If you write it, that is- Can't wait, and I sent your reviews to ya right? o.o Hope so. Can't seem to remember. ^^;; Ah well, talk soon! And thanks again for submitting!), VegetaGokuLover: Ch. 10(Wasn't it great? ^^ *braces herself* I'm prepared!), DBZ Fanfiction Queen: Ch. 1-10(O.O Wow! Thanks for all those reviews! ^^ Nice comments, short and sweet. No poem? u.u Okay then. ^^), Princess Vegena: Ch. 10(Aren't we awesome? ^-^ Chu-San's was better, methinks. Mine had all that cheesy rhyming while hers was nice and angsty.), Rissa of the Saiya-Jin: Ch. 1-10(You too! Thanks for all the reviews! I know, it got steadily worse as it went on. :P I'm horrible. Ah well. Um, by the way, what does 'Nukui Bejita Ou, hiretsukan' mean? O.o Me clueless.), Chrystaline: Ch. 1+2(You got around to reviewing! ^^ Yay, yo. Seriously, Vedge had issues. You can't say he didn't. :P Damn psycho's what he is. Hee.), and of course, Hyperbole: Ch. 1+10(GREAT poem hun. Loved it! Very nice, and the rhyming was fine. ^ It's such a ...well, it's not a good thing. Eheh...^^;; ANYwayyy, thanks so much for submitting, and I'll send the reviews it recieves to you via email. Once again, fabulous job!).
Once again, congrats to Hyperbole on a job well done. Thanks much for submitting, and don't worry, I fixed that one stanza. Hope to talk soon!
Hope everyone enjoyed, and the next Fan Chapter will be up soon! No more updating once a month! o.o Bai for now!
Sayonara Minna-San!
T-Sama~
BTW: Side note here... I'm all happy. Anyone see these new episodes? Where Vegeta and Goku are inside Buu? Hilarious. Even dubbed! ^-^ I'm a dubbie, yo.
I'm leaving now. Seriously.
***
Tail round his neck,
Fists in the gut,
Vegeta getting beat to heck,
D@mn that lizard f***!
Licking off the blood
The battered ouji spits up,
Frieza keeps up his pounding,
Of the Saiyan royal pup
The others stand back,
Too scared to try and help,
They know they'll get pulped,
Along with Frieza's 'monkey whelp'.
But Goku's awake and coming,
Healed and ready to fight,
But his prince is getting beaten,
That isn't right.
It is just so wrong,
That the last of the royal house,
Should fall to the destroyer of Vegetasei,
That white lizard louse.
But look who's here - it's Goku!
Frieza's takes a pause,
The others are glad to see him,
He's the best thing for their cause.
Vegeta crows with delight,
The saiyan cause is not lost,
Kakarott is here at last,
For their homeworld's destruction Frieza will know the cost.
But the lizard tires of Vegeta's glee,
Deals him a killer blow,
A laser-shot through the heart,
But the ouji's death comes slow.
With his last few moments,
Vegeta shares his pain,
Of how Frieza turned him,
And their whole race to his gain.
Royal tears then flow,
As Vegeta begs,
For Kakarott to avenge,
Their race, their world, he begs.
The only one left,
Goku begins to understand,
What Frieza has done,
Goku will follow Vegeta's last demand.
"For him! And for everyone else you've destroyed!" (- Goku. 'The End of Vegeta')
***
'Monkey whelp'. *cracks up* Nice! Let's all give Hyperbole a hand, yah? Fabulous! That's the second fan chapter out, and I'm sorry it took so long to get up! ^^; I'm an idiot sometimes, I swear.
Side note: Anyone see the episode where Vegito was turned into candy? Just saw it a half hour ago. :D I laughed so hard. Dabura's face when he was talking to Videl about love, that was priceless. What with all the little hearts and sparklies floating around his head. *grins* And don't get me started on Buu's ghosts. I fell off of the chair when they started doing tricks. And then, coffee flavored candy. COFFEE. Mmmm....
Ok, back to what should be an author's note.
S'ankyuu to all those who reviewed last chapter, most are these are for you Chuquita:
Dawn Moon: Ch. 1(Hehe, poetic Veggie so deep. Like a kiddie pool. O.o), Chuquita: Ch. 10(First to review your own poem. ^^ That's ok. The new fic sounds great, good luck with it! -If you write it, that is- Can't wait, and I sent your reviews to ya right? o.o Hope so. Can't seem to remember. ^^;; Ah well, talk soon! And thanks again for submitting!), VegetaGokuLover: Ch. 10(Wasn't it great? ^^ *braces herself* I'm prepared!), DBZ Fanfiction Queen: Ch. 1-10(O.O Wow! Thanks for all those reviews! ^^ Nice comments, short and sweet. No poem? u.u Okay then. ^^), Princess Vegena: Ch. 10(Aren't we awesome? ^-^ Chu-San's was better, methinks. Mine had all that cheesy rhyming while hers was nice and angsty.), Rissa of the Saiya-Jin: Ch. 1-10(You too! Thanks for all the reviews! I know, it got steadily worse as it went on. :P I'm horrible. Ah well. Um, by the way, what does 'Nukui Bejita Ou, hiretsukan' mean? O.o Me clueless.), Chrystaline: Ch. 1+2(You got around to reviewing! ^^ Yay, yo. Seriously, Vedge had issues. You can't say he didn't. :P Damn psycho's what he is. Hee.), and of course, Hyperbole: Ch. 1+10(GREAT poem hun. Loved it! Very nice, and the rhyming was fine. ^ It's such a ...well, it's not a good thing. Eheh...^^;; ANYwayyy, thanks so much for submitting, and I'll send the reviews it recieves to you via email. Once again, fabulous job!).
Once again, congrats to Hyperbole on a job well done. Thanks much for submitting, and don't worry, I fixed that one stanza. Hope to talk soon!
Hope everyone enjoyed, and the next Fan Chapter will be up soon! No more updating once a month! o.o Bai for now!
Sayonara Minna-San!
T-Sama~
BTW: Side note here... I'm all happy. Anyone see these new episodes? Where Vegeta and Goku are inside Buu? Hilarious. Even dubbed! ^-^ I'm a dubbie, yo.
I'm leaving now. Seriously.