A/N: I'M NOT DEAD!! ^^; I'm not dead! Sorry I haven't updated in so long. I'm horrible, I know. Well, the least I can do is put up another chapter of I Cried, yah? ^^;; I'm working on other things, don't worry! I put up a lot of nothing stuff for a while, but guess what?....drumroll please.... I think I might try my hand at a fluff story! Yes, I was thinking I'd do a father-son thing... or a mother-daughter thing... or something of the sort. Anywho, it's in the works... that is, I have the ideas, I just haven't written it out yet. Ah, anywho, again, new POV! Princess Vegena, a good friend of mine, and sister of Prince Vegeta! Give her a round, everyone. Great job! Very nice, and VERY original. A POV from a sister? *grins* We already did his poppy. Enjoy everyone, Vegena did very well!
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I never thought I'd hear something so startling,
That my strong and prideful Oniichan was crying.
My friend, Goku, told me it was true.
It just happened, right out of the blue.
He wasn't crying because he would die,
He was upset because his life was a lie.
Oniichan really surprises me.
He seems so wild, untamed, and free.
I never thought he'd shed a tear.
It's too much, even for me to hear.
Should I tell him I know?
Perhaps not, or perhaps so?
Maybe I should not.
Afterall, I'll eventually get a shot.
Why speed up time?
Besides, waiting is no crime.
I'll tell him one day,
Cause we have training today.
I still think he's really strong.
Afterall, crying is never wrong.
***
*sniffs* Crying isn't wrong, right? *wails for a good few minutes; sniffles; stops* Ahh, that felt good. Anywho, nice work Vegena! Congratulations, and thanks so much for submitting!
Sankyuu to those who reviewed. These get a little confusing, you don't know which review goes to what person, so I'll put chapter numbers next to them again:
animegirl-mika: Ch. 5, 10+11(*grins* Gohan's crazy. And weren't those fan chapters great? People got talent, yo!), ChunkyMunky241: Ch. 1-10(O.O Lotza reviews! Nice comments too. Only one semi-flame. ^^ "What *was* that? It wasn't bad, but it was...er...there." Hah! Tell me about it. VERY odd. *grins* You go to Wildwood? O.o Cool! It gets a bit dull after a while, but it's pretty nice, I guess. Do you live nearby, or do you have to do the road trip thing? And yes, I DID see that episode! I couldn't stop laughing!!), Bunny: Ch. 1(Poetry is a wonderful way to express yourself... a wonderful way to annoy people, in my case... and I thank ye Madame. ^^ I know I didn't have to rhyme, but I did in the first chapter, and, well... there you go. O.o), Princess Vegena: Ch. 11(VERY nice work, V! It was great. Thanks so much for submitting, again. And the pantry? I haven't forgotten it! I wanna finish it before I post, otherwise, I won't know where it's going. It'd be pretty embarrassing to get stuck. ^^;; But, I'm almost there! And hello Yami V! Dunna hit your alter-ego! Naughty! :D), Hyperbole: Ch. 11(Great job on that poem again, Hyperbole! Vegeta's End? Nice! I'll change it right after posting. *grins* Ah, yaoi. Very addicting, yah? You little hentai! *snickers* Just kidding! Australia's behind, eh? Well, you must have seen them by now! Weren't they great? Vegito is SO cool! Love him!), DBZ Fanfiction Queen: Ch. 11(o.o This fic made it to your favorites? The first poem ever? Wow! ^^ Much thanks! Hope you liked this chapter, and I'm still open for submissions! *hint hint*), and VegetaGokuLover: Ch. 11(*grins* Hyperbole did very well. And don't worry! Take your time with that poem. No pressure! ^^ And those eps! One of the many reasons I love DBZ. Talk soon!).
HOLY SON OF A NAMEK! This is the first fic of mine EVER to achieve and receive 100+ reviews! *throws confetti and toots a horn* Thanks to everyone for your comments, and criticism! I never expected this fic to gain so many... but then again, I thought it would consist of only two chapters, so... O.o Well, a lot of those reviews belong to Chuquita, Hyperbole, and now, Princess Vegena for jobs well done! I've rambled on long enough, so now I flee!
Sayonara Minna-San!
T-Sama~
***
I never thought I'd hear something so startling,
That my strong and prideful Oniichan was crying.
My friend, Goku, told me it was true.
It just happened, right out of the blue.
He wasn't crying because he would die,
He was upset because his life was a lie.
Oniichan really surprises me.
He seems so wild, untamed, and free.
I never thought he'd shed a tear.
It's too much, even for me to hear.
Should I tell him I know?
Perhaps not, or perhaps so?
Maybe I should not.
Afterall, I'll eventually get a shot.
Why speed up time?
Besides, waiting is no crime.
I'll tell him one day,
Cause we have training today.
I still think he's really strong.
Afterall, crying is never wrong.
***
*sniffs* Crying isn't wrong, right? *wails for a good few minutes; sniffles; stops* Ahh, that felt good. Anywho, nice work Vegena! Congratulations, and thanks so much for submitting!
Sankyuu to those who reviewed. These get a little confusing, you don't know which review goes to what person, so I'll put chapter numbers next to them again:
animegirl-mika: Ch. 5, 10+11(*grins* Gohan's crazy. And weren't those fan chapters great? People got talent, yo!), ChunkyMunky241: Ch. 1-10(O.O Lotza reviews! Nice comments too. Only one semi-flame. ^^ "What *was* that? It wasn't bad, but it was...er...there." Hah! Tell me about it. VERY odd. *grins* You go to Wildwood? O.o Cool! It gets a bit dull after a while, but it's pretty nice, I guess. Do you live nearby, or do you have to do the road trip thing? And yes, I DID see that episode! I couldn't stop laughing!!), Bunny: Ch. 1(Poetry is a wonderful way to express yourself... a wonderful way to annoy people, in my case... and I thank ye Madame. ^^ I know I didn't have to rhyme, but I did in the first chapter, and, well... there you go. O.o), Princess Vegena: Ch. 11(VERY nice work, V! It was great. Thanks so much for submitting, again. And the pantry? I haven't forgotten it! I wanna finish it before I post, otherwise, I won't know where it's going. It'd be pretty embarrassing to get stuck. ^^;; But, I'm almost there! And hello Yami V! Dunna hit your alter-ego! Naughty! :D), Hyperbole: Ch. 11(Great job on that poem again, Hyperbole! Vegeta's End? Nice! I'll change it right after posting. *grins* Ah, yaoi. Very addicting, yah? You little hentai! *snickers* Just kidding! Australia's behind, eh? Well, you must have seen them by now! Weren't they great? Vegito is SO cool! Love him!), DBZ Fanfiction Queen: Ch. 11(o.o This fic made it to your favorites? The first poem ever? Wow! ^^ Much thanks! Hope you liked this chapter, and I'm still open for submissions! *hint hint*), and VegetaGokuLover: Ch. 11(*grins* Hyperbole did very well. And don't worry! Take your time with that poem. No pressure! ^^ And those eps! One of the many reasons I love DBZ. Talk soon!).
HOLY SON OF A NAMEK! This is the first fic of mine EVER to achieve and receive 100+ reviews! *throws confetti and toots a horn* Thanks to everyone for your comments, and criticism! I never expected this fic to gain so many... but then again, I thought it would consist of only two chapters, so... O.o Well, a lot of those reviews belong to Chuquita, Hyperbole, and now, Princess Vegena for jobs well done! I've rambled on long enough, so now I flee!
Sayonara Minna-San!
T-Sama~