hey guys sorry to leave you at such a cliffhanger but its fun.thnx 4 the positive reveiws. not a one sed i sucked so, thts good.
Sirus, Mysterygirlco10 and Night Angel thnx 4 the reviews.
Christine- i love the dialouge to. i think it rocks.
Griss- Rory and Jess make the ultimate couple. they are better then Dean!
not to Dean bash, but i agree w/ jess. he sux 4 dumping rory infront of every1.
on w/ the story-
*Meanwhile*
Lorelia's POV-
I just got off the phone with the pizza guy and it rings. "Hello?"
"Lorelai? This is Sherry." she sounded like she was crying.
"Hi. What's wrong?"
"Chris, on his way home, he crashed on his bike."
"Oh my god. Is he okay?" I asked.
"Not he's not." she broke down.
"Sherry. Calm down. Dont get upset. It's not good for you."
"I dont care. Christopher's dead!" I dropped the phone.
'He was just here. I just saw him. He wasnt dead. He was alive. Very alive.' I thought and started crying.
"Um, Sherry? Where are you?"
"In Hartford. At the hospital."
"I'll be there as soon as I find Rory.
I got in my car. I didnt even have a jacket on and it was cold. 'I hope Rory's not too cold.' I thought.
I searched around the town for her but no luck. And somehow, I ended up at Luke's.
"Luke! Luke! Open up right now!!" I screamed as I pounded on the door.
He came down and opened the door, "Lorelai? What's wrong? Is Rory okay?" he asked.
"Yeah. I cant find her. Chris is dead and I cant find her."
"Rory's dad died?" Luke asked.
"Yes. He died tonight. Do you know where Rory is?"
"No. But dont worry. She's somewhere with Jess."
"Oh. Yes. Great. That's reassuring. Damn it!"
"Lore, it's okay. We'll go find them." Luke and I left the diner.
"Rory! Rory! Jess!" Luke called through the small town. I'm glad he did. I was too choked up to yell.
"Luke? Why are you yelling?" Jess asked.
"Yeah. Mom? What's wrong?" Rory asked.
"Um, hun. We, uh, need to go to Hartford. Your, uh, father is um, he died."
Rory and I collasped in eachother's arms, both in a fit of tears. We fell to the ground. Luckilly, Luke and Jess were there or we wouldnt have been able to get up. 'Wow. Luke's really strong.' I thought.
*dum-dum-dum! I think I'll wait till i get about 8 reveiws to post the next chptr. I'm in a good mood so I feel like tourtureing people. Maybe Ill let you get by w/ only 7 reviews, if they're good.
love-
Kat Mariano
Sirus, Mysterygirlco10 and Night Angel thnx 4 the reviews.
Christine- i love the dialouge to. i think it rocks.
Griss- Rory and Jess make the ultimate couple. they are better then Dean!
not to Dean bash, but i agree w/ jess. he sux 4 dumping rory infront of every1.
on w/ the story-
*Meanwhile*
Lorelia's POV-
I just got off the phone with the pizza guy and it rings. "Hello?"
"Lorelai? This is Sherry." she sounded like she was crying.
"Hi. What's wrong?"
"Chris, on his way home, he crashed on his bike."
"Oh my god. Is he okay?" I asked.
"Not he's not." she broke down.
"Sherry. Calm down. Dont get upset. It's not good for you."
"I dont care. Christopher's dead!" I dropped the phone.
'He was just here. I just saw him. He wasnt dead. He was alive. Very alive.' I thought and started crying.
"Um, Sherry? Where are you?"
"In Hartford. At the hospital."
"I'll be there as soon as I find Rory.
I got in my car. I didnt even have a jacket on and it was cold. 'I hope Rory's not too cold.' I thought.
I searched around the town for her but no luck. And somehow, I ended up at Luke's.
"Luke! Luke! Open up right now!!" I screamed as I pounded on the door.
He came down and opened the door, "Lorelai? What's wrong? Is Rory okay?" he asked.
"Yeah. I cant find her. Chris is dead and I cant find her."
"Rory's dad died?" Luke asked.
"Yes. He died tonight. Do you know where Rory is?"
"No. But dont worry. She's somewhere with Jess."
"Oh. Yes. Great. That's reassuring. Damn it!"
"Lore, it's okay. We'll go find them." Luke and I left the diner.
"Rory! Rory! Jess!" Luke called through the small town. I'm glad he did. I was too choked up to yell.
"Luke? Why are you yelling?" Jess asked.
"Yeah. Mom? What's wrong?" Rory asked.
"Um, hun. We, uh, need to go to Hartford. Your, uh, father is um, he died."
Rory and I collasped in eachother's arms, both in a fit of tears. We fell to the ground. Luckilly, Luke and Jess were there or we wouldnt have been able to get up. 'Wow. Luke's really strong.' I thought.
*dum-dum-dum! I think I'll wait till i get about 8 reveiws to post the next chptr. I'm in a good mood so I feel like tourtureing people. Maybe Ill let you get by w/ only 7 reviews, if they're good.
love-
Kat Mariano