Hey please give me reviews I would really appreciate them. this chapter has to do with the hobbits and how they find Melissa and Amanda and the trouble they run into on the way to rivindell. (and I don't own diddly squat!^_^ Melissa and Amanda are real people (Amanda is me the person who is typing this story and Melissa is my friend who wrote some of this ).And can any one answer this question for me who in the world is Mary sue I've wanted to know that.
"who's that Mr. Frodo" Sam asked looking down at Melissa and Amanda. "I don't know Merry Pippin do you know" "nope but whoever they are there cute let's help them out". They where the forest so the hobbits made a bed for them and laid them by a tree under the shade. "I like there hair" Pippin said smiling "so what I like there shirts" he was referring to there sponge bob and invader Zim shirts. "I like her shirt it's a cheese man I like cheese" Pippin was licking his lips as he said this he was looking at Amanda's shirt. Amanda and Melissa woke up finally rubbing there heads they looked at each other then looked up to see four short curly haired hobbits staring at them. "Oh no we ended up in the lord of the rings Melissa" Amanda said looking around. "yeah no duh it's obvious hey wait a minute where's Kris and Ryan" Melissa asked. "oh we'll look for Kris and Ryan later and besides I kind of did something I'll tell you later" Amanda said as she looked around again. "Thanks for helping us Merry Pippin Sam and Frodo" both of them said at the same time as they jumped up and hugged the hobbits. "do we know you" Sam asked with confusion on his face "no but you will Melissa replied then continued "we'll explain how we got here later". Then Amanda stood next to Melissa and said "I'm Amanda and" "I'm Melissa" she jumped in "Oh hi" said Frodo. Merry and Pippin walked up to them and took there hands Merry took Melissa's and Pippin took Amanda's and they said "as long as your here we'll protect you." "thanks" they replied "NO ,I want to" Sam yelled he smacked there hands away. "Hey we said it first" they took Sam and tied him to a tree "look there's Bree we must meet Gandalf at the prancing pony" Frodo said pointing down the hill "Untie me" Sam screamed they finally did. As they where heading down the hill Frodo stopped them and said "alright everybody you shall know me as Mr. Underhill I'm under cover and nobody is supposed to know my name k" "alright" they all replied. Except Sam he said to Frodo in a confused voice "but your a Baggins not an Underhill" "I just told you why, I have a ring of power and people are looking for me numb nuts" he hit him upside the head and walked farther down the hill.
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The six of them stood in front of the doors to Bree and Sam knocked the ugliest man answered. "ha ha ha haaaaa he he" Sam fell on the floor laughing "he's got a pickle nose" he was just barely able to get the words out through his laughter . "Shut up" Melissa said kicking him "you do to" "no I don't" he said sobbing as he walked in hiding his nose and crying. Amanda gave her the DEATH STARE "what he needs to learn not to make fun of people and I'm sorry he doesn't have a pickle nose it's more of a squash." Merry and Pippin couldn't control there laughter they laughed and laughed and laughed until they hit a wall then they started crying. Then they all looked up to see a sign with a white horse on it the sign read *the prancing pony*. They entered then sat down except for Sam he jumped on Merry's back and said "piggy back ride." Merry stood on the stool he was sitting on and did a back flip Sam fell off and became unconscious. Merry sat down and turned his attention towards Melissa again. A man in a hood walked up to the table and said "hello ladies can I buy you a drink" "sorry we are under age but would you like a knuckle sand which" Amanda replied. "never heard of it but sure" Amanda punched him right where it hurt she sat down and rubbed her sure knuckles. "Hey" Pippin said " I'm supposed to protect you" "sorry bout that Pip got a little carried away" "s'okay" he replied. Melissa looked at Amanda with a surprised look on her face then said "now I remember what I was going to ask you, did you turn the dial?" Amanda nodded. "that's ok, I'm having fun." When she said that Amanda sighed with relief that she wasn't mad. "At least the hobbits are cute" Melissa looked at Merry "do you mean it?" Merry asked looking at her with baby eyes. "Of course" she smiled. "Oh speaking of hobbits, is Sam ok?" Melissa asked looking down at him.
*later...
Melissa and Amanda talked about how they got there and the hobbits where a little confused but understood. After there talk Pippin got up to get a *pint* Melissa started to get worried as she said to Frodo "stop him if you don't something bad will happen" "oh I don't believe you" "fine suit yourself." When Pippin was in the middle of a conversation with a couple of people that's when Frodo started to listen. "sure I know a Baggins Frodo Baggins he's my second cousin twice removed on his mothers side." Frodo looked at Melissa who gave him an I told you so look he then ran towards Pippin Frodo slipped fell the ring flew in the air and landed on his finger he vanished. Amanda and Melissa looked for him but found a man taking him upstairs. "hey that's my hobbit come back here" Amanda yelled running up stairs Melissa running behind her. Merry walked up to Pippin and smacked him with his ale mug. He knelt down to the floor where he fell then whispered in his ear "they weren't supposed to know his name you dork" "oh yeah." "Mr. Frodo" Sam yelled he leaped off the floor from being unconscious(don't ask me how)and ran up the stairs dragging Merry and Pippin behind him.
**long I know the next one is a lot shorter**