I really hate the long author notes so I'll keep it short. Thanks to Megan
and Kelly for being my editors. And I am open to any and all suggestions.
Comments are also welcome. So please enjoy.
Disclaimer: I do not own the original concept of this story. All credit goes out to them. But I do own the characters, and I plan on keeping it that way.
Denkiteki Amatsuotomes
"Legendary Celestial Maidens"
1 Ano Shuutoku No Ano Fushigi Hon
"The Finding of the Mysterious Book"
"Meg-chan! Wait up!"
A young girl of about 16, (not quite yet) with glistening silver hair in two braids, screams down the hall of Seneca High school.
Another young girl at the opposite end of the hall stops and turns towards the girl with silver braids. This girl was already 16 and has drawn- out tan hair with a hint of red. She also has two hair clips with yellow stars.
"Hey!"
"Konnichiha, Meg-chan."
*Sigh* "Hello, E-chan."
"You and Tyler not doing so well again?"
"No, I broke up with him."
"Don't worry so much, it was for the better. On a change of subject, you didn't do your geometry homework by any chance, did ya?"
"Yes. Here ya go."
"Oh, thank you, thank you!"
Bing, Bong!!
E-chan took her seat behind Meg-chan, as she does everyday. She also started copying Meg-chan's work, as she does everyday.
While E-chan was finishing copying, the teacher walked up behind her and looked down over E-chan's shoulder. She had a very cross face.
"Miss Kelley (E-chan's last name)! How DARE you copy in MY class! You have detention!!"
The teacher then grabbed the paper with Meg-chan's name on it. Meg-chan turns red in the face.
"Don't think your off the hook either, Miss Brown (Meg-chan's last name)! Since you let her copy your paper, you can join her!!"
Meg-chan turns around in her desk and give E-chan the evil eye. E- chan flashes Meg-chan a smile as a sweat drop forms on her head.
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Bing, Bong!!
Meg-chan rushes up to E-chan and grabs her wrist.
"Hurry, or we'll be late for detention."
Meg-chan practically drags E-chan to detention for fear of being late.
"Hey, Meg-chan, where is detention being held today?"
"In Mr. Shoe's classroom."
E-chan pulls her arm out of Meg-chan's grasp.
"Don't worry, Meg-chan. Mr. Shoe never sits with you in detention. He just marks you came the leaves, and doesn't come back. After he marks us down we can just leave."
"No way! I'm not getting in any more trouble because of YOU."
E-chan put her hands on her hips.
"And what's that supposed to mean?"
"Oh! Come on."
Meg-chan and E-chan both walk into Mr. Shoe's room. The room was filled with books. There was all different kinds of books, ranging from classic literature to self help works.
E-chan leans over and whispers to Meg-chan,
"This guy must love to read."
Meg-chan quickly shushes E-chan as Mr. Shoe looks up at the two girls.
"You're late."
Yes...we're very sorry, both me and E-chan. Right, E-chan?"
E-chan quickly shook her head in agreement.
"Fine. Take your seats. And by the way what's your names?"
"Megan Brown."
"And Rachel Kelley."
Mr. Shoe eyed the two girls a moment, then marked on a piece of paper and walked out of the room.
"See, I told you he never hangs around." She paused and looked around the room, "So...now what do you want to do now?"
Meg-chan stood up and started to look at all the books.
"Well, if your going to look at the books, I'm going to take my hair down."
E-chan pulled the two ribbons out of her hair, but stopped short as the cutest guy in the school walks into the room. E-chan drops her ribbons in shock as a drop of drool hangs out of her mouth."
"H...Hi, Evan."
E-chan bends over and picks up her ribbons. She quickly stuffs them into her shirt pocket, not realizing one falls onto the floor.
"Hey. You seen Megan?"
E-chan is at a loss for words now, so she turns slightly and points to the back of the room where Meg-chan is looking at a really old dusty book.
"Thanks."
Evan smiles and walks to the back of the room. E-chan leans back in her chair, so to get a look at Evan's butt. If you couldn't guess she gets a pretty good look and falls back on the floor with little hearts dancing around her head.
Meg-chan hears the crash in the front of the room but ignores it, since this sort of thing happens to E-chan all the time, and don't even get me started on her problem of running into doors, but that's beside the point.
Instead, Meg-chan wipes the dust off the book she is holding.
'The Universe of the Four Gods? I've never heard or seen a book like this. It looks Chinese.'
Meg-chan quickly skims the first page of the book. Her eyes grow wide.
"E-chan, listen to this. 'Herein contains the tale of a young lady and her quest o gather the seven Constellations of Suzaku together.' Isn't that weird?"
E-chan got up off the floor.
"I want to see!"
E-chan runs to the back of the room pushing Evan over in the process. Meg- chan read on.
"'And if you the esteemed reader, should read to the story's end, the spell contained within this book shall bestow upon you the powers of the heroine, and grant your wish.'"
E-chan leaned over Meg-chan's shoulder and quickly grabbed the book out of Meg-chan's hand and before she could grab it back, E-chan read the last paragraph.
"'For indeed the moment the page is turned, the story will become real.'" She paused, "Meg-chan, what's going on!"
Meg-chan screamed as a bright red light filled the room. At that same time a boy by the name of Justin, one of Evan's friends I might add, pokes his head inside the door to the classroom just in time to see E-chan, Meg-chan, and Evan (who's still on the floor), disappear in a flood of red light.
Justin quickly ran into the room and picked up the book lying open in the first page of the story. He stared at the blank page. Then slowly words appeared forming sentences.
"It looks...like a story."
Justin picked up the book and sat in the nearest desk. He began reading the lines.
"They came to the city of Hong-nan. Two girls and a boy. Little did they know, they were going to be seduced into an adventure they won't soon forget."
He sat there puzzled for a moment.
"Great, all I wanted was to know if Evan asked Megan out, and I get the possessed book that just ate my best friend and his soon to be girlfriend. Not to mention that other girl. So now what do I do?"
He sighed.
Meanwhile, inside the book, our hero and two heroines, are having a civilized discussion about what is going on.
"You dork! What did you read in that stupid book?!"
"I don't know! Get off my back!"
"Girls, please, calm down."
"You stay out of this!"
"Yeah, this is our argument!"
"Don't yell at him! He didn't do anything!"
"You're the one that yelled at him first! So don't you tell me to shush!"
The two girls go into a staring contest. Evan quickly looks from side to side and notices a huge crowd of people staring. A sweat drop forms on his head.
"Uh...girls...people are staring."
The two girls quit staring at each other and look at all the people watching. They smile and wave at the people. The people look at each other and start leaving.
"Meg-chan, why is everyone staring at us?"
"I don't know, E-chan. I mean, I knew I was hot, but not that hot."
E-chan rolls her eyes. Evan walks up to the girls.
"Maybe we should take a look around this place."
E-chan's eyes begin to sparkle.
"This means we can go SHOPPING!! Let's go!"
E-chan takes off running (let's just hope its the right direction). The others take off after her.
Disclaimer: I do not own the original concept of this story. All credit goes out to them. But I do own the characters, and I plan on keeping it that way.
Denkiteki Amatsuotomes
"Legendary Celestial Maidens"
1 Ano Shuutoku No Ano Fushigi Hon
"The Finding of the Mysterious Book"
"Meg-chan! Wait up!"
A young girl of about 16, (not quite yet) with glistening silver hair in two braids, screams down the hall of Seneca High school.
Another young girl at the opposite end of the hall stops and turns towards the girl with silver braids. This girl was already 16 and has drawn- out tan hair with a hint of red. She also has two hair clips with yellow stars.
"Hey!"
"Konnichiha, Meg-chan."
*Sigh* "Hello, E-chan."
"You and Tyler not doing so well again?"
"No, I broke up with him."
"Don't worry so much, it was for the better. On a change of subject, you didn't do your geometry homework by any chance, did ya?"
"Yes. Here ya go."
"Oh, thank you, thank you!"
Bing, Bong!!
E-chan took her seat behind Meg-chan, as she does everyday. She also started copying Meg-chan's work, as she does everyday.
While E-chan was finishing copying, the teacher walked up behind her and looked down over E-chan's shoulder. She had a very cross face.
"Miss Kelley (E-chan's last name)! How DARE you copy in MY class! You have detention!!"
The teacher then grabbed the paper with Meg-chan's name on it. Meg-chan turns red in the face.
"Don't think your off the hook either, Miss Brown (Meg-chan's last name)! Since you let her copy your paper, you can join her!!"
Meg-chan turns around in her desk and give E-chan the evil eye. E- chan flashes Meg-chan a smile as a sweat drop forms on her head.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Bing, Bong!!
Meg-chan rushes up to E-chan and grabs her wrist.
"Hurry, or we'll be late for detention."
Meg-chan practically drags E-chan to detention for fear of being late.
"Hey, Meg-chan, where is detention being held today?"
"In Mr. Shoe's classroom."
E-chan pulls her arm out of Meg-chan's grasp.
"Don't worry, Meg-chan. Mr. Shoe never sits with you in detention. He just marks you came the leaves, and doesn't come back. After he marks us down we can just leave."
"No way! I'm not getting in any more trouble because of YOU."
E-chan put her hands on her hips.
"And what's that supposed to mean?"
"Oh! Come on."
Meg-chan and E-chan both walk into Mr. Shoe's room. The room was filled with books. There was all different kinds of books, ranging from classic literature to self help works.
E-chan leans over and whispers to Meg-chan,
"This guy must love to read."
Meg-chan quickly shushes E-chan as Mr. Shoe looks up at the two girls.
"You're late."
Yes...we're very sorry, both me and E-chan. Right, E-chan?"
E-chan quickly shook her head in agreement.
"Fine. Take your seats. And by the way what's your names?"
"Megan Brown."
"And Rachel Kelley."
Mr. Shoe eyed the two girls a moment, then marked on a piece of paper and walked out of the room.
"See, I told you he never hangs around." She paused and looked around the room, "So...now what do you want to do now?"
Meg-chan stood up and started to look at all the books.
"Well, if your going to look at the books, I'm going to take my hair down."
E-chan pulled the two ribbons out of her hair, but stopped short as the cutest guy in the school walks into the room. E-chan drops her ribbons in shock as a drop of drool hangs out of her mouth."
"H...Hi, Evan."
E-chan bends over and picks up her ribbons. She quickly stuffs them into her shirt pocket, not realizing one falls onto the floor.
"Hey. You seen Megan?"
E-chan is at a loss for words now, so she turns slightly and points to the back of the room where Meg-chan is looking at a really old dusty book.
"Thanks."
Evan smiles and walks to the back of the room. E-chan leans back in her chair, so to get a look at Evan's butt. If you couldn't guess she gets a pretty good look and falls back on the floor with little hearts dancing around her head.
Meg-chan hears the crash in the front of the room but ignores it, since this sort of thing happens to E-chan all the time, and don't even get me started on her problem of running into doors, but that's beside the point.
Instead, Meg-chan wipes the dust off the book she is holding.
'The Universe of the Four Gods? I've never heard or seen a book like this. It looks Chinese.'
Meg-chan quickly skims the first page of the book. Her eyes grow wide.
"E-chan, listen to this. 'Herein contains the tale of a young lady and her quest o gather the seven Constellations of Suzaku together.' Isn't that weird?"
E-chan got up off the floor.
"I want to see!"
E-chan runs to the back of the room pushing Evan over in the process. Meg- chan read on.
"'And if you the esteemed reader, should read to the story's end, the spell contained within this book shall bestow upon you the powers of the heroine, and grant your wish.'"
E-chan leaned over Meg-chan's shoulder and quickly grabbed the book out of Meg-chan's hand and before she could grab it back, E-chan read the last paragraph.
"'For indeed the moment the page is turned, the story will become real.'" She paused, "Meg-chan, what's going on!"
Meg-chan screamed as a bright red light filled the room. At that same time a boy by the name of Justin, one of Evan's friends I might add, pokes his head inside the door to the classroom just in time to see E-chan, Meg-chan, and Evan (who's still on the floor), disappear in a flood of red light.
Justin quickly ran into the room and picked up the book lying open in the first page of the story. He stared at the blank page. Then slowly words appeared forming sentences.
"It looks...like a story."
Justin picked up the book and sat in the nearest desk. He began reading the lines.
"They came to the city of Hong-nan. Two girls and a boy. Little did they know, they were going to be seduced into an adventure they won't soon forget."
He sat there puzzled for a moment.
"Great, all I wanted was to know if Evan asked Megan out, and I get the possessed book that just ate my best friend and his soon to be girlfriend. Not to mention that other girl. So now what do I do?"
He sighed.
Meanwhile, inside the book, our hero and two heroines, are having a civilized discussion about what is going on.
"You dork! What did you read in that stupid book?!"
"I don't know! Get off my back!"
"Girls, please, calm down."
"You stay out of this!"
"Yeah, this is our argument!"
"Don't yell at him! He didn't do anything!"
"You're the one that yelled at him first! So don't you tell me to shush!"
The two girls go into a staring contest. Evan quickly looks from side to side and notices a huge crowd of people staring. A sweat drop forms on his head.
"Uh...girls...people are staring."
The two girls quit staring at each other and look at all the people watching. They smile and wave at the people. The people look at each other and start leaving.
"Meg-chan, why is everyone staring at us?"
"I don't know, E-chan. I mean, I knew I was hot, but not that hot."
E-chan rolls her eyes. Evan walks up to the girls.
"Maybe we should take a look around this place."
E-chan's eyes begin to sparkle.
"This means we can go SHOPPING!! Let's go!"
E-chan takes off running (let's just hope its the right direction). The others take off after her.